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Old 04-08-2007, 12:46 AM   #3 (permalink)
Ibrahim Jones
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^^
wtf kinda feed is that

ok, ha i thought you would use this sample, the beatles joint is actually called elenor rigby, classic shit... my boy flipped it before kanye..ok the beats nice, drums can be tweaked a lil, your verse is nice man, good content, flows nice, vocals can be upped a tiny bit..like your voice..delivery can be better, still nice..emotion can be upped..scratches are nice in the hook..i like the way it kinda goes with the violins..2nd verse is nice by ur boy, swagger was nice and flow was good too with some nice rhyme schemes..overall decent track man

peep my alienz joint if you havent already

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