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Marcyville · 10-09-2007, 02:16 PM

Mo would've got it if his text was better.

The first one is...lmfaooo. Good concept and shit for your first but yeah, you have a loooooong way to go.

87's looks unfinished and I don't like the fact that there's another cover (which I'm pretty sure you didn't make) incorporated in your piece. The reflection itself is pulled off well though. I like the text, but it needs to stand out more.

With that being said, 1987 gets my vote.

10-09-2007, 02:16 PM	#6 (permalink)
Marcyville Don Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Chicago Posts: 2,403	Mo would've got it if his text was better. The first one is...lmfaooo. Good concept and shit for your first but yeah, you have a loooooong way to go. 87's looks unfinished and I don't like the fact that there's another cover (which I'm pretty sure you didn't make) incorporated in your piece. The reflection itself is pulled off well though. I like the text, but it needs to stand out more. With that being said, 1987 gets my vote. __________________ Washingtons go to wifey you know how that go Jacksons go back to'em we coppin some more, the Bejamins go in stash box under the floor I'm out for presidents to represent me now you know...