Nawn i havent seen ya since we battle,waz guddy nikka....my first battle..but um lets see...
FLOW- BOTH
PUNCHLINES- NAWN
METAPHORS- BOTH
this was a gud battle.. K-rizzle u had punchlines as well as nawn had,but all ur concepts were something i either done seen or heard sumwhere before feel me..not sayin ur bit or nuffen,just sayin they could'a been fresher..ur structuring had me a lil off at sum points but,it came on and off..the battle was short,i didnt add an enjoyment category because it wasnt enuff to really get into and enjoy,it was only 4 BARS! feel me so thats that..far as nawn i didnt really find a flaw in yur joint,it was on point..gud shit...concepts were ok,but it flowed..so im a give this to NAWN
VOTE: NAWN
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