Tyme Lyne
a HOE I am not the type of chick, i thought you should know that Last,
But Ill be HIGHLY OPTED to EMBRACE my foot up in yo ASS...
~vs~
Killa Steve
u should be glad im addressin u
i aint testin u
fuck protection that choppa gon show u wat vest could do
This battle was pretty wack, I mean, Tyme Lyne, I liked your opener and your ending, but the shit in betwee was just like you passing time to get to the end, it wasnt very good... Killa Steve, your structure is HORRIBLE kid, it looked like you wrote that shit as it popped into your headm, this is text you have to give your shit some thought... You were more defending yourself from her attacks more than actually battling her...
My Vote: Tyme Lyne
Question: Why didnt yall make a poll?
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