Lyah Vs. Absolute
"Ok, I don't know any of you and this is my honest opinion of how this battle went."
Liyah
Your verse was alright, but you could improve a lot on structure. Nice nibbles here and there, but there wasn't any lines that attacked Absolute dramatically. I think if your opening gambit was a tad bit stronger you would have broke him off proper. Towards the end of your verse I felt this vibe that you just continued to write to some what meet the bar criteria... Continue attacking and don't let up and you will terminate your opponents on sight.
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Absolute
You had a somewhat solid verse. The celebrity name-play lines were holding you back, and the sexist jokes are overly played. You connected with lines that would deflate her ego such as:
You got a decent rep. around here, why ruin ya shit/
You shouldn’t even be rappin, you should be somewhere plantin tulips and shit/
I pretty much laughed at that point, but you abused the sexist jokes all throughout your flow. You should have displayed better usage of multi's and word-play. But overall you won my vote due to the aggression in your post and more harder hitting lines.
V/Absolute
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