this was a nice battle and i don't mean any disrespect to either of you cuz you both spit really well. as a general suggestion, i would say to definitely use more multis and metaphors.
Tyme Lyne - you had some nice personals and varied references. your verse built up strength as you went along. to piggyback on what miles said, your opening could be stronger. also sometimes your flow wasn't always on point. but still it was a strong verse. my favorite of you lines was the type to wear tight ass pants like thick focals from cooley high.
the pharcyde of the backwoods ..dat paper mill smell still passin u by..
Absolute- good shit. i had been trying to come up with a line like You couldn’t flow nasty if you was in the booth on ya period in another battle so that made me laugh to see you make it work. it was my personal favorite line in your verse. you came out strong from the very first line and didn't let up with the personals especially with all th stuff about the flickr page.
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