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Manifess · 06-13-2008, 03:16 AM

Whas good wit it...

ight peepin ya joint.....ya punchlines are deffinitly on point....ya flow is a lil shaky...sounds kinda like ur readin....and with that being said...it goes to ya mic presence....u need to memorize ya lyrics b4 u spit em....and it will sound more natural...and give u a better presence and flow.....and ya sound quality is decent....this wasn't bad at all...jus a few things to tighten up.....no hate jus constructive crit...
keep doin ya thang and b ez

06-13-2008, 03:16 AM	#2 (permalink)
Manifess Criminal Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Tampa Posts: 86	Whas good wit it... ight peepin ya joint.....ya punchlines are deffinitly on point....ya flow is a lil shaky...sounds kinda like ur readin....and with that being said...it goes to ya mic presence....u need to memorize ya lyrics b4 u spit em....and it will sound more natural...and give u a better presence and flow.....and ya sound quality is decent....this wasn't bad at all...jus a few things to tighten up.....no hate jus constructive crit... keep doin ya thang and b ez __________________ By now you should know you can never phase da dude more importanly I have paper to chase I need to change my shoes.......