[Varcity]

*PAUSES MARIO* ((mario - music for love))

*presses play*

*starts dying!!!*

lmaooo no disrespect dogs,aint tryna shit on ya mic but it was a couple of flaws in this..wen u make a video,u have to have a gud setting..especially you,ur a singer,so u gotta have a smooth or jus nice background...my dude...YOUR SINGING IN A GARAGE! lol,then that intro coming in is what really had me dying "if i had my cane i'll be leaning like this" lol...

far as your vocals,ur not bad at all,although your flow seem'd to not be on-point at certain times wen u was singing..whether it was made like that to the beat,jus flow more better,and work on ya presence my dude..overall,OK..Vocal wise

PS- wattup with the name,i swore to god when i looked at this post that i was gonna see a girl,before the youtube video loaded up...thats a hot name tho,but for a girl