Resolution: tha entire track was panned to tha left.. dont know what happened there.. but work on breath control.. flow was a bit choppy, delivery could be better, it didnt sound natural to me, you gotta find ya own voice & swag & use it...
BP verse: same shit with tha panned shit, you should look into what it is youre doing... lacks any type of emotion, sounds like your reading from tha paper.. flow is dry & delivery once again sounds unnatural.. work on vocal presence & writing to tha beat, your lyrics werent structured to tha beat at all on this joint...
Feelin it: panned to tha left
started off good, then like clockwork you got gimmicky with that 'retarded' rapper style, enunciation shit doods is adaptin now... shit doesnt suit your vocals maan, once again find your OWN presence & use it...
keep writin, spittin & workin on findin Vinyl.. dont follow suit with what you've seen/heard tha next man do, do something different, be creative & leave ya own mark... you gotta feel this shit homie... spit with passion...
keep postin lookin forward to seein ya progress