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Tyme Lyne · 07-07-2008, 04:30 PM

took his ass that long since march 08 to post dat shyt!......hahahaahahaa....

let me stop...eh hemmm...

anyways u need to work on a flow first of all....then u gotta structure your bars....and gather a concept and stay on that concept ...if it switches on the concept somehow u have to make it work into the same sequence....real talk....

other than that ...u suck u got potential...and the mind may be there...but u suck!...

ill holla!...

07-07-2008, 04:30 PM	#10 (permalink)
Tyme Lyne Rap GodFather Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: In VA...Clearing Her Mind... Posts: 4,741	took his ass that long since march 08 to post dat shyt!......hahahaahahaa.... let me stop...eh hemmm... anyways u need to work on a flow first of all....then u gotta structure your bars....and gather a concept and stay on that concept ...if it switches on the concept somehow u have to make it work into the same sequence....real talk.... other than that ...u suck u got potential...and the mind may be there...but u suck!... ill holla!... __________________ Some Things Change, and Some Shyt Stays The SAme . HIPHOP AINT DEAD. IT STILL LIVES IN ME !