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Old 07-16-2008, 02:30 AM   #3 (permalink)
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I do more than just type words,known fact I was born in the cypher/
Go back,Talent show rhyme reciter,Train bomber...Overnighter/
Flow raps,Freestyle and brag who's tighter,undercover writer/
I'm so that,Low jack and spit it loud like soul claps..Chaka Khan through the fire/

My Niggadom bigger son and the throne is off limits/
Ya whole steelo rented,Over due so now yall evicted/

- I enjoyed reading much of this drop. A lot of good internal wordplay mixed with metaphors and punches. I also like the way you structured this piece which added to its overall creativity. If you want constructive criticism, your content could be a little bit stronger to increase the level of your lyricism but based on the subject of this drop, everything was pretty much on point. Stay up homie.
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