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Old 06-02-2006, 02:26 PM   #2 (permalink)
Aril Problym
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this was aight. Nice flow and multis but let me point out a few things for you that I think you could did better with.


I clap the 9 and graze ya dome
{Is your aim off? If you clap the nine you should be able to splatter his shits}

Jeezy say damnnnn and Juelz say ay 4 him
{Its a little hard to read when you use numbers instead of the word. I'm pretty sure you know how to spell "for"}

Overall I think you could've did better but I think you was just messing around.
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