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Old 09-18-2007, 12:06 PM   #21 (permalink)
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Pryce yo Vote didnt even count so SHut yo simulac on yo breath ass up ...BABY BOY !!!!!!! ....Fo' i hand yo ass an invitation to embarrassment !!!! .....You young ...of course you gonna look at the immature lines ...LOL ...And yet . Yo dumb ass aint understand the rest of the fuckin' VERSE ...or did you skimm through that shyt ? At least aril came original ...Instead of flippin' all the BEEF THREADS !!!!!!!!! ...

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Old 09-18-2007, 12:10 PM   #22 (permalink)
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Pryce yo Vote didnt even count so SHut yo simulac on yo breath ass up ...BABY BOY !!!!!!! ....Fo' i hand yo ass an invitation to embarrassment !!!! .....You young ...of course you gonna look at the immature lines ...LOL ...And yet . Yo dumb ass aint understand the rest of the fuckin' VERSE ...or did you skimm through that shyt ? At least aril came original ...Instead of flippin' all the BEEF THREADS !!!!!!!!! ...

CASE CLOSE ...go sit yo ass somewhere ..or get yo fuckin' diaper changed . dont fuck wit me .
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Old 09-18-2007, 12:18 PM   #23 (permalink)
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Since I can't vote..here's my breakdown to SHOW you how Aril lost...

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it's amazin the tactics this dude'll use to act on this site
I won't go in a library for the life of me, while he goes in to access his life
or was it your baby mommas? WOW. son, you really are a fuckin loser
who the fuck goes to a girl's house, 'n then spends the whole time on a computer?
1st line..setup..2nd line..funny little personal..but no stigner..3rd..setup again..last line was another comedic personal...

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then again, what else would he do, we already know he aint tappin that bitch
so he fucked her wristwatch just to have someone elses hands on his dick
you never were goin anywhere punk, your career's BEEN dead dude
if Aril's makin moves, it consists of jerkin his hands when Liyah sends him nudes
1st line..setup..2nd..solid wordplay..concept is kinda mehh..3rd..true..his career's been dead..last line..mehhhh...I see the concept..as both Aril and Liyah have some love/hate thing goin' on..but weak...

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still I dunno whats worse, you thinkin your shitty raps are divine..
or the fact that you're over 30 and your tryin to play gangster online
really dude, you're never ever drivin around lettin ya nines shine
the only caps you fuck with is when your on aim cybering the Tyme Lyne
1st line..setup..2nd..ha..that gave me a laugh..3rd..setup n blahh...last line gave me a chuckle..but enough of their butt sex relationship...

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are you gonna switch stories again now? black millitant? well I'll surely laugh..
cuz you're the type of millitant that flew to canada so you could avoid the draft
I mean it this dude's a geek, on a saturday night he's doin nothin
so while everyone else is out, he's home alone more than Macaulay Culkin
1st line..ha..setup..2nd line was my fave thus far..haha..that was nice..3rd n 4th tied in nicely...the 'macaulay culkin' line is just okay though...

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you really have no luck with the girls, no wonder this guy gets deaded
cuz the last time he's seen exposed bush? he was watching Farenheit 9/11
so you can't make a name for yourself, so fuck you 'n your rants B
cuz Bunchy you the only dude I've ever seen named after the state of his panties
Now its gettin' serious..1st line..again..setup..2nd line..haha..nice flip..3rd line..setup again..last tho..a dope personal..and prolly the line of the battle..that was funny as hell..

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really you suck, but your skills didn't fall off, I have at least that to say
cuz they never even existed..o... kinda like your collab with Red Cafe
dude's pissed his rep took a slide 'n I completely wrecked his pride
but please, I didn't assasinate his character.. this is more like genocide
Again..some niceness here..1st line..setup..2nd..hahaha..so true..where is that Red Cafe collab Aril?!?! 3rd..setup..last line was dope...solid wordplay..and some truth behind that..

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but don't be so mad you're exposed, I know you're feelin pure hate
but I'm just good at reading people.. although an illiterate could see that you're fake
really though, fix your name, cuz your just another 30+ artist thats wack
Uvaijay Dafyoocha? more like Uvaijdatpeopleusuallygetheartattacks
1st...setup..2nd..haha..the wordplay made this stand out..nice..3rd..setup again..last line..haha..another solid stinger...

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on that subject, I don't feel pity now that you need a new site to be stuck in place
I just feel bad for the kids, cuz dafyootchas talentless, lonely, 'n a fuckin waste
now why do you diss text? when you've shown that it's all you've known
cuz you still ducked when I gave you the chance to battle me via audio
1st line..setup..2nd..hahaha...that had me rollin..3rd..setup..last line..statin' the obvious but STILL a solid personal...

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I don't get how Liyah can back you up despite your bitchin never bein alleveated
oh wait.. when wine's as aged as yours I guess it can be apreciated
I know that you just use your gimmick titles to cover up your poor spits
but everytime you try 'n make a name for yourself..
..it comes out as some corny, wack, 'n gay horseshit
1st line..haha..truth in that setup..2nd..solid wordplay..and a dope concept in general..very nice..3rd..setup..last line was solid as hell...a personal that the ignorant wouldn't even get...

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since you never get out, you obviously cant handle yourself s'what I'm thinkin
so here he's gettin done in 40.. kinda like his tolerance when he's drinkin
look at all the support I'm gettin here, they want you gone forever
kinda funny.. now that RGF has no fyootcha, the futures never looked better
1st..setup again..2nd..haha..3rd...setup..and the closer? Prolly the 2nd best line of your verse...VERYYYY true in that personal/nameplay...


And now Aril?

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This boy going flop worse than britneys spears performance/
Sucking brautwurst with bent knees and tears flowing/
Shirleys cock cosigned 51's mouth endorsing/
51 the pink power ranger Girlfriend mighty morphin/
Cause like the truth he blow dick out of proportion/
1st..hmm..already played...2nd..'suckin' brautworst?' Filler...3rd..again...tryin' at a personal..but filler...4th..uhh..makes no sense..it IS the 'mighty morphin power rangers'..so how does that even hurt him? Last line was okay...

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This bitch piss his pajamas,flick of a finger I bomb ya/
Rip through his armour hit his flesh and he a goner/
(Imma son this bitch dude!!)
U hiphop illiterate so I'll teach u the fundamentals/
He Hard? I'm Rap jihad and I got you under missiles/
Slice his eyelids(He can't see me)
And why Area all gassed when he really a hybrid/
Heres the VIOLENCE!!
Put the nickle to ya temple so now you five cents/
1st..blahh.setup..2nd..so you'll hit his 'armor' through the internet? How does that attack him? 3rd..okay..I see the wordplay but weak..4th? Rap jihad eh? Well usually if missiles are fired..you ARE under them when they're fired..this makes no sense....'slice his eyelids'..well OBVIOUSLY he couldn't see if u did that retard...'gassed/hybrid' eh? Ya there's wordplay..but does it even make sense? The 'nickel' to his temple eh? Do it through a computer screen then I'll give you props...gunplay on the internet = stupidity..how you gonna shoot someone with 9s or teks through a comp screen?!?

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Pipe stay between his lips so I call him Popeye/
(Shirley Oliv oyl)
This bitch gotta smart mouth his new name Jaw Wise/
51 a walking proactive commercial,the before picture/
Red dots cover ya face because ya skin at war witchya/
Popeye line was okay..the 'Jah Wise' is just blahh..smart mouth makes NO sense..it would have to do something with biting..the 'proactive' is an attempt at a personal..that last line was pretty cool tho..BEST I've seen thus far...

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Disconnecting your rep and dissecting your text with techs/
Stressing ya death,reward money to whoever guessing her sex/
Yeah ya flows shocking cause ya rap needs rewiring/
Sweat problym,Under arms and Area 51 perspiring/
Ya flow like a car with flat tires,Area Retiring/
1st..blahh..filler..2nd..again..more filler..3rd..heyyy..MOREE filler..wow..he's perspiring? Nothing but rhymes..NO punches...ohhh a 'car with flat tires/retiring?' LAME...why use the same word TWICE in the same punch? WEAK WEAK WEAK!

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you spoke too soon bitch so I'll put ya flesh in a cast iron tomb\
and blast your platoon then laugh and consume\
the remains of yours brains stretched across insane domains\
disintegrate 51's mind-state with nitrate\
he mad light-weight only way he gettin off is when his toy vibrate\
More pointless filler and worthless multis..no punches..the 'toy vibrate' had a LOT of potential..but this was weak..so basically..4 lines of filler..and one weak ass punch...

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Mix reckless with my sick fetish and leave blades embedded/
Area don't make sense(cents)thats why he trying to discredit/
Abuse bitches like Mike Vick leave em lifeless...BITE THIS!/
Shirlies Sidekick,ya snide prick...Fight bitch! or see ya demise kid/
Got Sharp flow leave pizza face....In slices!/
Hmm..a 'sense/cents' punchline..thats as PLAYED as cum lines..blahh..again..you string multis to increase your flow..not your punches..the 'pizza face' was cool...

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Fag dude think he Mcfly with his back to dafyoocha,Please!/
Accepted this battle you must choose to bleed/
Bruise ya B,Ya new name Mary jane(Marijauna) cause loser leaves/
the 'mcfly' had MAD potential..but WAIT..its WEAK again..and the closer aint even worth discussing...how does 'mary jane' even make sense?!? That was blahh..

And thats MY breakdown..it aint no vote..but its to show you WHAT was good and WHAT wasn't..Area's verse wasn't perfect by ANY means..but christ almighty..a blind man could see that he took this with ease...Aril..no offense but you REALLY suck..your verse contained little to no punches..just tryin' to string together multis with nonsense..half your lines made NO sense..or those that did make sense had no effect whatsoever...in other words..

NA NA NA NA..NA NA NA NA...HEY HEY HEYYY...GOODBYE!
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Old 09-18-2007, 12:22 PM   #24 (permalink)
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@ Grimy ...pryce's vote did not count because Aril posted that he did not want Pryce, Illustration , or Sureloc .....To vote due to past events that have had occur'd , before the first VOTE has been dropped ...so it didnt count .
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No Insanity..I have done this WAYYYYY longer than you....trust me..and that vote was pure blahhhh...learn how to break down a vote..not just quote an ENTIRE verse you dumbass...
haha battle me right now, loser is banned...
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This is why your vote don't count........lol.....thank you!!
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Since I can't vote..here's my breakdown to SHOW you how Aril lost...



1st line..setup..2nd line..funny little personal..but no stigner..3rd..setup again..last line was another comedic personal...



1st line..setup..2nd..solid wordplay..concept is kinda mehh..3rd..true..his career's been dead..last line..mehhhh...I see the concept..as both Aril and Liyah have some love/hate thing goin' on..but weak...



1st line..setup..2nd..ha..that gave me a laugh..3rd..setup n blahh...last line gave me a chuckle..but enough of their butt sex relationship...



1st line..ha..setup..2nd line was my fave thus far..haha..that was nice..3rd n 4th tied in nicely...the 'macaulay culkin' line is just okay though...



Now its gettin' serious..1st line..again..setup..2nd line..haha..nice flip..3rd line..setup again..last tho..a dope personal..and prolly the line of the battle..that was funny as hell..



Again..some niceness here..1st line..setup..2nd..hahaha..so true..where is that Red Cafe collab Aril?!?! 3rd..setup..last line was dope...solid wordplay..and some truth behind that..



1st...setup..2nd..haha..the wordplay made this stand out..nice..3rd..setup again..last line..haha..another solid stinger...



1st line..setup..2nd..hahaha...that had me rollin..3rd..setup..last line..statin' the obvious but STILL a solid personal...



1st line..haha..truth in that setup..2nd..solid wordplay..and a dope concept in general..very nice..3rd..setup..last line was solid as hell...a personal that the ignorant wouldn't even get...



1st..setup again..2nd..haha..3rd...setup..and the closer? Prolly the 2nd best line of your verse...VERYYYY true in that personal/nameplay...


And now Aril?



1st..hmm..already played...2nd..'suckin' brautworst?' Filler...3rd..again...tryin' at a personal..but filler...4th..uhh..makes no sense..it IS the 'mighty morphin power rangers'..so how does that even hurt him? Last line was okay...



1st..blahh.setup..2nd..so you'll hit his 'armor' through the internet? How does that attack him? 3rd..okay..I see the wordplay but weak..4th? Rap jihad eh? Well usually if missiles are fired..you ARE under them when they're fired..this makes no sense....'slice his eyelids'..well OBVIOUSLY he couldn't see if u did that retard...'gassed/hybrid' eh? Ya there's wordplay..but does it even make sense? The 'nickel' to his temple eh? Do it through a computer screen then I'll give you props...gunplay on the internet = stupidity..how you gonna shoot someone with 9s or teks through a comp screen?!?



Popeye line was okay..the 'Jah Wise' is just blahh..smart mouth makes NO sense..it would have to do something with biting..the 'proactive' is an attempt at a personal..that last line was pretty cool tho..BEST I've seen thus far...



1st..blahh..filler..2nd..again..more filler..3rd..heyyy..MOREE filler..wow..he's perspiring? Nothing but rhymes..NO punches...ohhh a 'car with flat tires/retiring?' LAME...why use the same word TWICE in the same punch? WEAK WEAK WEAK!



More pointless filler and worthless multis..no punches..the 'toy vibrate' had a LOT of potential..but this was weak..so basically..4 lines of filler..and one weak ass punch...



Hmm..a 'sense/cents' punchline..thats as PLAYED as cum lines..blahh..again..you string multis to increase your flow..not your punches..the 'pizza face' was cool...



the 'mcfly' had MAD potential..but WAIT..its WEAK again..and the closer aint even worth discussing...how does 'mary jane' even make sense?!? That was blahh..

And thats MY breakdown..it aint no vote..but its to show you WHAT was good and WHAT wasn't..Area's verse wasn't perfect by ANY means..but christ almighty..a blind man could see that he took this with ease...Aril..no offense but you REALLY suck..your verse contained little to no punches..just tryin' to string together multis with nonsense..half your lines made NO sense..or those that did make sense had no effect whatsoever...in other words..

NA NA NA NA..NA NA NA NA...HEY HEY HEYYY...GOODBYE!
My Haters want me gone.........but at the end of the day.......Dafyoocha going stay!!! YA dig.....bitch?!
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