Step Up Jaynificient

[Ghost]

hit up son, I'll spit next

[.:Jaynificent:.]

Aight lil dude...Rules: 5 votes win 3-0 KO
16 Bars
No D/R..etc...

[Ghost]

Originally Posted by .:Jaynificent:.

Aight lil dude...Rules: 5 votes win 3-0 KO
16 Bars
No D/R..etc...

3-0 KO?? that means only 5 votes altogether whoeva gets 3 wins?

[.:Jaynificent:.]

god damn, this kid think he bangin, but really he slippin//
hit this faggot so hard bump heads till u start seein visions//
kid, this is true freeestylin, put away ya fuckin pre-writtens//
now, i'mma research ta see what dudes this dude bittin//
fa real, no beef let this bull shit be settled, i'm bout ta retire//
but until u my level, don't bother lookin for the shouts u desire//
but enough witt the soft shit, i'mma get back ta bashin dudes//
told this dude don't fuck witt fam, now he starts actin rude//
who the fuck u think u is, bitch u aint suge, & u aint snoop//
ya lyrics is like shit in a daiper, it don't bump that shit droops//
u want ta see me rappin witt personals?, then come ta my house//
u can personaly meet my fist if u think bout openin ya mouth//
callin me a bitch, tellin me ta shut the fuck up, watch ya words//
cuz my shit is like a birck wall, dead ended juss stoppin ya verbs//
i c u on my nuts, bitch what u want?, are u really efatuated?//
or is it that u mad i get pussy, and u juss finnished masturbatin?//
u should have listend ta the people when they tried ta worn u//
but now i'mma be like a flame, juss come lash round and scorn u//
this kid proly give better throat then pamala, swallow the kids//
fuck a gun, i'll bring my lyrical tallents ta come hollow ya lid//
i think i made my point clear, dont fuck witt a dude who got talent//
fuck a hammer, i got a cannon that'll streatch ya fat like a mallet//
can't u see, i'm loved on this site, dudes don't want me ta leave//
its cuz my talent, i already handed u more then u should recieve//
i'm sick witt the flow, and u're juss dumb found, up in a daze//
u say u unstoppable, but explain how a cracka juss fucked up ya phaze//
fuck it, i'm done witt this dude, i'mma juss bring em ta the trash can//
call me lil weezy, i bring fiya man, now pleaze someon come get this trashed man//

[.:Jaynificent:.]

Originally Posted by Ghost-Ex

3-0 KO?? that means only 5 votes altogether whoeva gets 3 wins?

naw...first to 5..but if u or me has 3 votes to 0..then that person automatically wins..oh yea..unlimited bars..i felt good today lol

[Ghost]

Hatas hit the pavement
Get shackled up like enslavement
small timas look up with amazement
wonderin where them playground days went
JayN(ot)efficient, he lack skills
he got it in his sig(currensy), but not to pay the bills
leave this nigga like swiss cheese, my words are drills
in his casket, holes fill
I had another 16 typed, but my computer had an error
My new 16 will be hyped, cause to these MC's I bring terror
Jay can't measure, his rhymes tickle me like 14 feathers
I bring the thunda, like stormy weathers
this nigga said 16, but fell 2 short
he brought 14, false ad...take em to court
My bars so factual, it's like i'm writin a report
I'm stressed, my sounds you try ta distort, so ima grab a newport
I never called you a bitch, you must be delirious
Louisianna to MIA, you cant be serious
and it's gettin me furious, you mainstream niggas livin luxurious
I'm just curious, you wack butchu make money
I'm live, but industry think i'm funny
I made bail, so i'm expelled from hell
rags to riches, neva run with you snitches
TS (Thugs Society) We ain't playin wit you bitches
just listen to this fiction i'm kickin
puns straight hittin, all dissin none missin
bite my hook, for weak MC's i'm fishin
you in a pool of merky waters, somebody bount to start hittin
born to die, forever it was written
Lemme take you to the killin fields, the blood spillin fields
A Mic a lyrical shogun weilds, I strike with might
despite you're excite, I wont stop till i'm read my rights
and for my freedom i'll fight

[Ghost]

Originally Posted by .:Jaynificent:.

naw...first to 5..but if u or me has 3 votes to 0..then that person automatically wins..oh yea..unlimited bars..i felt good today lol

word...

[stoneyq2]

imma say jay took this..

[Rehmann]

Jaynificient's verse was hot, he gets it.........

[Aril Problym]

Yooo this was a good battle. This is a hard battle to vote on.

Jaynificents best lines:i c u on my nuts, bitch what u want?, are u really efatuated?//
or is it that u mad i get pussy, and u juss finnished masturbatin?//

Jay's worse lines:fuck it, i'm done witt this dude, i'mma juss bring em ta the trash can//
call me lil weezy, i bring fiya man, now pleaze someon come get this trashed man//
Jay came with aggressiveness and just overall wordplay. Jay was weak in spelling,flow and multis.
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Ghost-ex best Lines:JayN(ot)efficient, he lack skills
he got it in his sig(currensy), but not to pay the bills
leave this nigga like swiss cheese, my words are drills
in his casket, holes fill

Ghost-ex worse lines:I'm just curious, you wack butchu make money
I'm live, but industry think i'm funny


Ghost-ex came with a few punchlines,aggressiveness and originality. Ghost could've came with better wordplay,flow and creativity.
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Overall I think Ghost came at the jugular. Jay didn't do anything different enough for me.


My vote:Ghost-ex