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06-20-2006, 12:35 PM
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Mega Vs. Ghost-EX
I spit first bitch sit tight
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06-20-2006, 12:57 PM
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I spit first bitch, sit tight
this battle'll be ova once I drop, so quit ight? recyclin on shit, it's been used my words "hurt when they touch you", you've "been bruised" Megas a begga, askin for rep what's next, who knows what to expect only skills this nigga got is "copy" and "paste" waste the place in his face my verse'll blow that nigga to space I'm sick and fuckin tired of lil bitches like you weak punches, minimal meaning...still postin like is coo Spittin first, this niggas hungry.. he'll feed put ya lips on my shit, I'll make you bleed I aint got the time to waste my verse on this kid he'll prolly copy it, paste it, claim its somethin he did bark like a dog, damn well bettah bite like one cause if ya talk a hard 16, spit weak...it aint right son I spit so sick, these niggas say i'm hurlin gotcha shorty in the bed, bet her toes are curlin step ya game up, before ya beg for rep call out niggas, so your open challenges don't get checked by vets you should be battlin Jfly, Ghost too good boy from the burbs, claim he slang in the hood I'm like a napkin, the way I clean dirt bars They don't call me "ghost" for nuthin, I "write" by far i'm the rap "viagra", "enhance" ya spittin stop bitchin n listen to this fiction Put out a "search team", cause megas puns aint hittin they "missin"! I'll kill you on line 29, and I aint even dissin...
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06-20-2006, 01:35 PM
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Where'd he go?! Recyclin bin dipped off..I wrote a nice lil keystyle n he ran away
 unless he's still writing....
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06-20-2006, 01:37 PM
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Says he's still viewing this thread...lol
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06-20-2006, 04:22 PM
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hmm nice rhyme Ghost.....but eh i would of liked to seen some creativity within that verse...i mean u had a few personals in there i think...therefore to elevate much better try to have some methaphors,similes which equals towards "Punchlines"...aight
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06-20-2006, 04:37 PM
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I suck at punches but you seem to be really good with them maybe you can give me some pointers
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06-20-2006, 04:52 PM
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Capo
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no problem man...I'll be more glad to help out anybody....aight not it's like different types of styles for punchlines....Here you'll have eh "Set-up" Punch which indicates knowing it's going to be a cool Punch...umm Take Cassidy for example....he used a "House-hold" Punch....
example: I"m off the hook, like a cordless Phone...< or in your case u probably can have something similar but in a different concept... Another example: Nicca u couldn't be off-da-"Hook", if u declined being on a "Chorus"..... Just try and use your society events around you...cuz trust me everything is a exclusive punch, it's just how you deliver it and effectivity creative towards your challenger or even for a hot freestyle..
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06-20-2006, 05:01 PM
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I go with Ghost....Yeah I know Mega aint spit yet...But he going to come with recycled lines.....I just know it!!
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06-20-2006, 05:06 PM
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Punchlines must fit into tha flow of ya verse as well...Never substitute a punchline for flow...If it doesnt fit, dont use it...The punchline is useless if u sacrifice your flow to use it...Your setup line has to incorporate with the subject of your punch in order for it to work...All of this is just like writing a paper or poetry...There's a creative scheme u must follow in order to make it connect.
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