Novakaine vs Tyme Lyne

[Novakaine]

deadline - 2 days
length - 6 bars (12 lines)
no hate/dickridin votes or pm'in for votes
First to 3 votes win
vote in cats

ill key up sumthin wen u drop yur verse

[Tyme Lyne]

hahahhaa...aight dude ...you want me to go first!....
And i aint need 2 days to post my shyt ...lets go ...

I aint resided on yo usage of slang, looks mo'.....chopped up than them nurserys caine,
Imma make you feel the pain , like the Pultry slain ,
I can't comprehend yo scheme you got a weird Terminology,
Like you been Injected seriously on procaine, wit some vexed Biology,
You worse than a Rooster waking peeps up in the AM,
annoying as fuck like some kats i know , but i aint gonna name em ,
You battling a Chick that likes to " RANT" a lot ....
Yea i get that constantly , what's yo interest in that OCK?,
U reminded me of what i used to do , when i joined this site,
pick a kat that looks tight , and jump in to revive all the hype,
Lets get ignorant , cocky, brash and brolic,
bytch u need to brush up on it , i got you under a lyrical microscope, checkin' ya folics ,
a chemical combustion rotated ya brain around,
that shyt u on , makin ya fingers tremble, at wtf is that shyt u be typin' down.

-DONE-

[Tyme Lyne]

fuck it i did 14 ...my bad oh well ...

[Novakaine]

ill write now gimme 5-10 mins

[Novakaine]

i hav u facin~nines u lacin~lines? ill break~ya~spine
cuz tryna beat a sprint record only way guys chasin~time

u ain fine u take steroids so ya teeth~get~bigger
like collectin action dolls only way youll keep~ya~figure

u fake u get clapped~spy u shake make this rat~cry
bitch ya teeth outta shape jus like a fat~guy

wen ya jeep~get~stuck ya peeps~best~duck
u on dat young buck shit bitch i watch ya teeth~get~buck

i tear~ya~horse fear~da~boss its my-kitchen
say am ignant but were~ya~source(sauce) like dry-chicken

get-lost ya wet-horse dont u see~me~be~da~prime~guy
i blast this bitch back sofar u really~c~da~time~fly

ma lines-stand-out u din~compete~ya~dead~fam
wen its beef tyme-ran-out like givin in sum incomplete~exams


i dun 7 bars too den

VOTES

[G-Rated]

U reminded me of what i used to do , when i joined this site,
pick a kat that looks tight , and jump in to revive all the hype,

vs.

hav u facin~nines u lacin~lines? ill break~ya~spine
cuz tryna beat a sprint record only way guys chasin~time

u ain fine u take steroids so ya teeth~get~bigger
like collectin action dolls only way youll keep~ya~figure


Kaine:
No hate, but you need to lose them squiggles, that shits mad old...Plus ya multies aint that complex to have all that shit going thru it anywayz...The chasin line and the doll figure lines were pretty good but they needed to be reworded...I expected you to have more solid punches, your concepts are there but were failed attempts due to poor execution with your wording...I know you an audio kat and its kinda hard to seperate that when you do text...That's what happened to me in my CBL battle...I was doin audio before I wrote my shit & my wording/structure was not as good as usual...I wrote everything how I would say it on audio and that dont go well with text because wording is so important.

Liyah:
Is brolic a word? Or did you mean frolic...? Well I'll assume that was a typo..Anywayz ya drop was aite, not the best and I expected more from you considering that you usually drop good when sumbody's on ya nerves. You didnt have that many disses in ya drop, but some of ya shit was mad funny...Just kuz of the way you put it out there...

Overall Kaine had the more battle oriented drop, he got at Tyme's image, had a few nameplays and the two punches I quoted from him were nice...I didnt see any disses directed at him in Liyah's drop besides the one I quoted, so for those reasons I think he edged this one out...



Vote: Kaine

[Tyme Lyne]

Thanx for The Vote G ....much appreciated 0-1 his way ...

[Aril Problym]

Originally Posted by G-Rated

U reminded me of what i used to do , when i joined this site,
pick a kat that looks tight , and jump in to revive all the hype,

vs.

hav u facin~nines u lacin~lines? ill break~ya~spine
cuz tryna beat a sprint record only way guys chasin~time

u ain fine u take steroids so ya teeth~get~bigger
like collectin action dolls only way youll keep~ya~figure


Kaine:
No hate, but you need to lose them squiggles, that shits mad old...Plus ya multies aint that complex to have all that shit going thru it anywayz...The chasin line and the doll figure lines were pretty good but they needed to be reworded...I expected you to have more solid punches, your concepts are there but were failed attempts due to poor execution with your wording...I know you an audio kat and its kinda hard to seperate that when you do text...That's what happened to me in my CBL battle...I was doin audio before I wrote my shit & my wording/structure was not as good as usual...I wrote everything how I would say it on audio and that dont go well with text because wording is so important.

Liyah:
Is brolic a word? Or did you mean frolic...? Well I'll assume that was a typo..Anywayz ya drop was aite, not the best and I expected more from you considering that you usually drop good when sumbody's on ya nerves. You didnt have that many disses in ya drop, but some of ya shit was mad funny...Just kuz of the way you put it out there...

Overall Kaine had the more battle oriented drop, he got at Tyme's image, had a few nameplays and the two punches I quoted from him were nice...I didnt see any disses directed at him in Liyah's drop besides the one I quoted, so for those reasons I think he edged this one out...



Vote: Kaine

^^^^^^DITTO.......I agree with G on this..Kaines verse was just more suitable for a battle......I'll breakdown both verses if need be..........


My vote: Kaine

[In$anity]

good battle, but Novakaine gets the vote.
these lines were sick:

''i hav u facin~nines u lacin~lines? ill break~ya~spine
cuz tryna beat a sprint record only way guys chasin~time

u ain fine u take steroids so ya teeth~get~bigger
like collectin action dolls only way youll keep~ya~figure''

better punches, much better multi's.

I'd say keep the ~'s. peeps on RGF dont like em Nova, but that's our style so do what do you

final vote; Novakaine

[G-Rated]

3-0 KO...Novakaine wins