CBL Champ Match: 1. Illustration (9-2) vs. 2 Area (3-1)

[G-Rated]

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[Illustration]

GREATTTT...we just fuckin' battled on BX...

Lets go short n sweet Area...like 12?

[Area51]

haha
12s fine

[Area51]

ill edit my verse in l8r

[Illustration]

Aite...then match me son...

We both share common enemies Area..n I beat em all by myself
And sure you beat em both too...but only with Sureloc's help
Yes we battled on Boxden last week..apparently I clearly lost it
But now..I'll leave you Box'd in when I put the final nail in your coffin
I wont degrade you too bad...only right before I kill you kid
You'd need more than a personal trainer to EVER be built for this
Haha...I can read your mind man...so watch as I nail this shit
Or hop behind the wheel of your train of thought..n derail that bitch
Now..I planned to go 12..then I can snap your back like a twig
When I told you to go 12...I wasn't talkin' the age of chicks you dig
See..I can come at your girl for days..then again..I'd laugh more
When I told her 'short n sweet'...
She said that's how long sex with you lasts for....

[Area51]

Originally Posted by AeraL 2/19/07

Come and box with me, ya head'll turn into a rectangle, no way is aer scared,
a bitch aint gotta be a math professor to know that this area's squared.

Originally Posted by f0twenty AKA Illustration 6/14/07

fu*k this...the numbers dont add up..neither here nor there
But I dont need to be a mathematician to tell ya Area's square

man I think up my concepts..
..but diggin up old shit appears to be ya business
cuz you flippin Aer more than the most expierienced gymnast
'n yo dude needs to control his weight, start exercisin 'n diet often
I'd say its time for him to step up to the plate..
..but then he'd probably just eat right off it!
'n G's predictions off, fa'real readin it I'm astounded as heck
he should know..
..only wire this'll come down to's the one I put around your neck
'n this fag chokes under pressure, you a straight bitch dogg
dudes aaalwaays get in his head... and I don't mean with shit talk
'n I sex ALL ya girls, I just wanna know who's next kid
cuz I wasn't playin tic tac toe, but I ran through 3 of your X's
'n you gettin 10 wins? dogg ya straight ass, dude's rattled
cuz the last time YOU saw 10 was my combined vote total in our last 2 battles


vote up biznatches

[Robert Are]

Haha...I can read your mind man...so watch as I nail this shit
Or hop behind the wheel of your train of thought..n derail that bitch
Now..I planned to go 12..then I can snap your back like a twig
When I told you to go 12...I wasn't talkin' the age of chicks you dig


vs.

'n G's predictions off, fa'real readin it I'm astounded as heck
he should know..
..only wire this'll come down to's the one I put around your neck
'n you gettin 10 wins? dogg ya straight ass, dude's rattled
cuz the last time YOU saw 10 was my combined vote total in our last 2 battles



Wow. Played shit on both sides.


Ill:
No haymakers. Which I was sort of suprised at. Your not a haymaker type of guy, but I expected to see at least one or two. Overall, it was semi-solid. Honestly, I was dissapointed. You had humor but some of the punches were kinda weak. The way they were worded saved them but still, they weren'tt up to par with your usual stuff. And then, I saw one or two played concepts. Even the train of thought thing that I quoted is played but the wording was fresh-ish. Eh, overall, wasn't really feeling it.


vs.


Area:
Alot of played shit. Step up to the plate-played...tic tac toe-played...Which makes it hard for me to judge, because while your verse had more played shit than Ill's by my count, the stuff hit much harder. Buuuuuut, still, I wasn't feeling your verse much either. Sadly, the down to the wire punch is probably the LOTB. I say sadly because I've seen it before but yours was alright I guess.



Well, I can honestly say that I was dissapointed. I guess if you guys just battled on Boxden, it's semi-excusable.


But, reading over both verses again, I gotta give it to Ill, only because I couldn't overlook the fact that almost half of Area's verse is played.


V- Ill

P.S.- This could've gone either way, so don't bitch, either of you.

[Caleb_Pratt]

Man Peepz this Was Close!!,
Both Cats Had Funny Punchlines, and Had me entertained the whole way through........
To the Quotes...........

ILLI------

Yes we battled on Boxden last week..apparently I clearly lost it
But now..I'll leave you Box'd in when I put the final nail in your coffin

It Might be played as Area said, But Shit i STILL laughed!!!

Haha...I can read your mind man...so watch as I nail this shit
Or hop behind the wheel of your train of thought..n derail that bitch

One Word.......TIGHT

- Great Punchlines, But The Boxden metioning kinda lagged and was filler to your whole rap, problem is, it was half the rap since u went so short of bars.
If u got small line limit, gotta make em count.

now AREA's.........

'n G's predictions off, fa'real readin it I'm astounded as heck
he should know..
..only wire this'll come down to's the one I put around your neck

Area bringin it here.........LOL!

'n I sex ALL ya girls, I just wanna know who's next kid
cuz I wasn't playin tic tac toe, but I ran through 3 of your X's
'n you gettin 10 wins? dogg ya straight ass, dude's rattled
cuz the last time YOU saw 10 was my combined vote total in our last 2 battles

Pretty Good Closin Lines. Next Kid, and Exes don't rhyme that well but it funny. I always like how U (Area) use past battles and statements in yah raps really kinda puts a deeper connection for the reader of the battle.


All In All........ I Went and Judged it this Way

Concept : Ill: 4/5 Area 3/5
Creativity: Ill: 3/5 Area 3.5/5
Punchlines: Ill: 4/5 Area 3/5

Overall : Ill: 11/15 Area: 9.5/15

Winner Illistration. Ill gets My Vote.

[Timberlake]

Originally Posted by Illustration

Aite...then match me son...

We both share common enemies Area..n I beat em all by myself
And sure you beat em both too...but only with Sureloc's help
ehh
Yes we battled on Boxden last week..apparently I clearly lost it
But now..I'll leave you Box'd in when I put the final nail in your coffin
ehh, self hype
I wont degrade you too bad...only right before I kill you kid
You'd need more than a personal trainer to EVER be built for this
kid and this dont really rhyme, and the line was weak anyway
Haha...I can read your mind man...so watch as I nail this shit
Or hop behind the wheel of your train of thought..n derail that bitch
good wordplay
Now..I planned to go 12..then I can snap your back like a twig
When I told you to go 12...I wasn't talkin' the age of chicks you dig
kinda lame
See..I can come at your girl for days..then again..I'd laugh more
When I told her 'short n sweet'...
She said that's how long sex with you lasts for....
playedddddddddd

This drop was shakey, and was all about u about to"break" him, but never doing anything

Originally Posted by Area51

man I think up my concepts..
..but diggin up old shit appears to be ya business
cuz you flippin Aer more than the most expierienced gymnast
aight
'n yo dude needs to control his weight, start exercisin 'n diet often
I'd say its time for him to step up to the plate..
..but then he'd probably just eat right off it!
I see the wordplay, but not the punch.. He eats of plates??
'n G's predictions off, fa'real readin it I'm astounded as heck
he should know..
..only wire this'll come down to's the one I put around your neck
messed me up when i was reading, and filler anyway
'n this fag chokes under pressure, you a straight bitch dogg
dudes aaalwaays get in his head... and I don't mean with shit talk
I dont get it, maybe better wording
'n I sex ALL ya girls, I just wanna know who's next kid
cuz I wasn't playin tic tac toe, but I ran through 3 of your X's
First good punch
'n you gettin 10 wins? dogg ya straight ass, dude's rattled
cuz the last time YOU saw 10 was my combined vote total in our last 2 battles
decent finisher

vote up biznatches

This drop was not really that good, but with better wording and better punches it has potential

I gotta give this one to Area.. It was real close, but he actually attacked Ill.

[†SaW†]

hmm good battle.....

(Illustration)

Haha...I can read your mind man...so watch as I nail this shit
Or hop behind the wheel of your train of thought..n derail that bitch
Now..I planned to go 12..then I can snap your back like a twig
When I told you to go 12...I wasn't talkin' the age of chicks you dig
See..I can come at your girl for days..then again..I'd laugh more
When I told her 'short n sweet'...
She said that's how long sex with you lasts for....


(Area 51)

cuz you flippin Aer more than the most expierienced gymnast
'n yo dude needs to control his weight, start exercisin 'n diet often
I'd say its time for him to step up to the plate..


Ok good battle here......but both verses seemed like it lacked in a few areas.....just like the previous voters claimed....ya'll brought a few played concepts toward the table...Ill you're verse was good.....and in that section i quoted felt it was pretty good although the rest i wasn't really feeling at all..like they said pretty played concepts....i think you lacked a bit there....but good verse man....whereas in Area's case...man that tic tac toe line is pasted played with a few others i won't mention....area i'm really surprised in you....this wasn't you one of you're top verses man...so you lost a lot of voting points which hurted you badly man...however you still came wit some good material but half of it was pretty played off.

In conclusion.....i'm going to lean over to the individual who had less played concepts and better attempts....

Vote: Illustration