CBL Contendership: 3. Torment (4-5) vs. 4. Nostalgia (4-4)

[G-Rated]

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[nostalgia]

check... im thinkin at least 16 lines

[†SaW†]

lol same I was thinkin of 16 as well.... Czech in....good luck again~

[†SaW†]

Peep you're lost again.....End is Tragic


..Ayo he live by the book, but his verses ain't Holy,
cuz dis fag has a Dude-Love, like relations for Mick Foly..
..Take it slowly, by the inch and pull ya thread apart,
only time his Bars-High, is showin a marijuana Chart..
..Lets start, da predications of you and me its a toss-up,
or like uppercutin a shark, i'll leave dis dude Jaws-up..
..You pause huh? Nos shook out his boots rattin in fear,
cuz i'll make ya side-burn, until he grows Faciel-hair..
..I stare, in the eyes of a killer pasted a cut throat,
or like liyah's new votin, his life ain't worth a quote..
..I hope, da judges feel his verse cuz its painfully sore,
nos got more strecth-lines, then da script of Fantastic 4..
..Nor ya bars ain't drunk dude, just da smell of intoxcin,
his punches is so forced, its lookin like Han-Solo-Boxing..
Therefore dis win is mine, no tie breaker for the shoelace,
cuz like creatin Mr.PotatoHead, i'm puttin da "Nos"e in its Place..Eazy

End of Transmission.....Sign you're will peacefully~

[Young]

Nice shit^...
Uppin for Nost

[nostalgia]

sry man, I had some trouble gettin time to write this week, ima need an extension til tommorow.

[nostalgia]

put the elastic away, no stretched bars this week
might not be a presidential bull, but al gore this freak(i'll gore)
man please, i'll drop keys and still beat yer weeks written
cuz the hootest shit u drop, is naught. compared to my weakest writtens
u wanna go dumb, im down to get stupid while u think u ridin sick
get mac'd like dre...
wont be no gas break dip, two shots and u'll truly be ghost ridin the whip
im not talkin T-mobile wen i say you're no more than a sidekick
cuz im sure thats u in timberlakes avy, wit batman lockin lips
t knows how i get...
watch his set dip, wen i say its "more than music"
wen my beat drops the handclap and snare will produce a whole new movement
cuz wen i make u fadeway ain nuttin jordan-esque about it
u on ya back, lookin in the air, but experiancin life without it
we dont wanna talk bout forced concepts, cuz yours are at gunpoint
2 punches in one bar...
"abstract is creativity" now tell me that aint a fuckin joke
txt faux pas, and im not talkin your four fathers,
easy win every week, u'd even be Liyah fodder

[Caleb_Pratt]

Okay I actually read torments rap a couple days ago, and then Nost's today, then read back over both of them. Well Here's the breakdown.....

First off Torment's Highlights......

..Ayo he live by the book, but his verses ain't Holy,
cuz dis fag has a Dude-Love, like relations for Mick Foly..

-Funny Like the Wording, But Not too Great

..Lets start, da predications of you and me its a toss-up,
or like uppercutin a shark, i'll leave dis dude Jaws-up..

- Overall Good Rhyme, decent metaphore

Therefore dis win is mine, no tie breaker for the shoelace,
cuz like creatin Mr.PotatoHead, i'm puttin da "Nos"e in its Place..Eazy

- Great FINISHER, ur Best line by Far.


Now Nost's Highlights-------

u wanna go dumb, im down to get stupid while u think u ridin sick
get mac'd like dre...
wont be no gas break dip, two shots and u'll truly be ghost ridin the whip

-CrAzY LINE!! LOL at Dead Person Ghostridin' the Whip, Great Metaphore!!!!

im not talkin T-mobile wen i say you're no more than a sidekick
cuz im sure thats u in timberlakes avy, wit batman lockin lips
t knows how i get...

- I like the T-Mobile Line, But the Tim Avy wasn't as hard hittin as it should of been

cuz wen i make u fadeway ain nuttin jordan-esque about it
u on ya back, lookin in the air, but experiancin life without it

- Decent Line, wasn't bad


Now Overall this was a Close One, While Torment had the easy reading flow, there wasn't the punchiness I thought it woulda had. LOL @ Liyah's actions being a punchline on this site!! But Your Closer Was Clean as F*Ck!!! Nost' on the other hand had the better concepts but while he was hard hitting and great metaphores to match, his rap started to fall off toward the end, with almost no good metaphores, or punchiness. That Said, Nost's rap was the one I felt the most, I'm still playing the "Hyphy" metaphore in my Head LOL!!!! Well Close,
But This Time Nos' Gots my Vote.

[Timberlake]

@ my name being in the battle, but it was my sig. My avy was Lionel Richie fanclub, and den Justin Ninjalake.

I gotta give it to torment because he kept it consistent, and had good punches. Nos had some super played shit, like the T-mobile line and his flow was wayyyyy off.

[Robert Are]

..Take it slowly, by the inch and pull ya thread apart,
only time his Bars-High, is showin a marijuana Chart..
..Nor ya bars ain't drunk dude, just da smell of intoxcin,
his punches is so forced, its lookin like Han-Solo-Boxing..


vs.


we dont wanna talk bout forced concepts, cuz yours are at gunpoint
2 punches in one bar...
"abstract is creativity" now tell me that aint a fuckin joke


Nos:
Only one quote which was weak in itself as far as a punch goes but hard as far as personal. REAL weak verse in my eyes.

Tor:
Whoa, you stepped it up big time. You had some real cool ideas. One thing you need to work on still is your wording. Ideas are there, set-ups could still use tweaking, but your wording is still kinda hurting you.


Anyways, Tor had the superior verse.


V- Tor