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![]() CBL Official Rules Due dates Read Rules and Regulations before battle. Verses are due Thursday 11:59 PM PACIFIC Voting ends Saturday 11:59 PM PACIFIC Voting Must vote on at least 4 battles and post your links Explain your votes. Minus 1 vote for each vote missing No votes = minus 4 votes This rule WILL be enforced General Rules 1st person cant edit after 2nd person posts 2nd person cant edit after a vote has been made No feeding. No using a pic without opponents permission. using opponents pic without permission = AUTO DQ No freeposting, swaying or bitching Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in. If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post MUST match the 1st persons line amount. |
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r3al rap Talk reject, startin a new life with a forum identitiy
stand up to me? Damn, i'd be shocked if he even stood up to pee Another pac stan it had to be, a not to bizarre entity Why do all these foreign loser's gotta battle me face fact's for foreigner dig tracks by 2pac shak's put that shit on wax, and relax,thinkin they hood cause they googled Stack's Fake gangsters make me sick, R.Rt faggot fake a flick Its either steal a verse or dickride, till u break my dick (no homo) Freezerburn rhyme's, u spit that chill frost, rhymes played like kriss krossed Tell me how ur opponent didnt drop, and i think you still lost? Every line you spit, that last word has like six syllables I laugh at you so much, at least your comedy dream is fullfillable Got no flows, born in ho clothes, your a dissapointment the whole world knows Cause the only time you win a battle, is when your opponent no shows cant get no ho's, he honk honk like Skeeter, but gets no Valentine Aint no pal of mine, crap lines, big words he resort's to, like Calodyne "True Brown Thug" as ur user title, like when u die u go to thug mansion in heaven u not a thug you aint gangster, the only thing u roll'in, is the hotdogs at the 7 11 This drop make's yo computer window break and decode ya, just a kid tats fake and a oder In the end you shoulda listened when i said, Timberlake takin ova ![]() |
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Banned
Join Date: May 2007
Posts: 517
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RGF's bitch listenn ill consume ya blood then give a acid bath like i was John Haigh
or maybe ill just blast ya away then chainsaw massacre ya like Ed Gein forgot tha water i got some head paint, ill leave ya head slain dissect ya vertebrate, open up your crane-ium then i scramble ya fuckin brains razor blades slicing through each and every one of your veins, blood spraying cut into your cornia let tha puss ooze out untill i refrain from playing take your hacked limbs up out of their chains i go psycho cuz im loving tha taste peel tha fuckin flesh away eat tha muscle and brains but ima let tha rest decay and thats the way u get fucked up koke07's way this nigga aint gettin bitches cause hes gay walks around naked wit his dick rainbow sprayed walkin in the gay parade cause u a nigga dats bitch made but im like brotha lynch siccmade, ur face is all fucked up niggas call u stichmade ya mothafucka im the true brown thug but u the true white nerd now the brown thug is about to leave the white nerd done like he was killed by a raptorial bird fuckin whiteboy reads books all day, goes to the library every hour i wonder how much books he took today talkin bout pac like he was bad, ur justin timberlakes #1 fan now thats just sad ur favorite is a whiteboy whos voice is high pitched and sounds like an anorexic bitch comparin him to pac timbalake is his white slave pac would lyrically and physically muder that white fuck and teach him how to behave just like im gon do to u but the real mothafuckin gangsta way Last edited by koke07; 06-21-2007 at 05:27 PM.. |
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Capo
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ok battle.....but i think its one-sided...meh
(Timberlake aka T.R.I.G) Another pac stan it had to be, a not to bizarre entity Why do all these foreign loser's gotta battle me face fact's for foreigner dig tracks by 2pac shak's put that shit on wax, and relax,thinkin they hood cause they googled Stack's Fake gangsters make me sick, R.Rt faggot fake a flick Its either steal a verse or dickride, till u break my dick (no homo) Freezerburn rhyme's, u spit that chill frost, rhymes played like kriss krossed Tell me how ur opponent didnt drop, and i think you still lost? Every line you spit, that last word has like six syllables I laugh at you so much, at least your comedy dream is fullfillable (Koke) talkin bout pac like he was bad, ur justin timberlakes #1 fan now thats just sad ur favorite is a whiteboy whos voice is high pitched and sounds like an anorexic bitch Tim ya verse was good.....some of ya lines were a bit average but i like how you dissed his little pac thing lol.....and i felt it was a strong battle verse which had very few minor errors......just work on ya concepts a bit more and try not to force as much.... Koke man.....smh you're verse was hella good......BUT !!...this wasn't a battle verse in my opinion i felt this was more for a topical battle....which it had a lot of gore and brutility within its lines....i could only quote one line because honestly it wasn't really directed at Tim it was more of a gross story of how to be tortured on some Hostel shit.....but good ass verse man...just try to come better on a battle approach next time. In conclusion...ima have to go with Tim for a better battle attempt verse Vote: TimberLake
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Join Date: Feb 2006
Location: Houston, Texas
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Timberlake aka T.R.I.G)
Another pac stan it had to be, a not to bizarre entity Why do all these foreign loser's gotta battle me face fact's for foreigner dig tracks by 2pac shak's put that shit on wax, and relax,thinkin they hood cause they googled Stack's Fake gangsters make me sick, R.Rt faggot fake a flick Its either steal a verse or dickride, till u break my dick (no homo) Freezerburn rhyme's, u spit that chill frost, rhymes played like kriss krossed Tell me how ur opponent didnt drop, and i think you still lost? Every line you spit, that last word has like six syllables I laugh at you so much, at least your comedy dream is fullfillable (Koke) talkin bout pac like he was bad, ur justin timberlakes #1 fan now thats just sad ur favorite is a whiteboy whos voice is high pitched and sounds like an anorexic bitch Tim ya verse was good.....some of ya lines were a bit average but i like how you dissed his little pac thing lol.....and i felt it was a strong battle verse which had very few minor errors......just work on ya concepts a bit more and try not to force as much.... Koke man.....smh you're verse was hella good......BUT !!...this wasn't a battle verse in my opinion i felt this was more for a topical battle....which it had a lot of gore and brutility within its lines....i could only quote one line because honestly it wasn't really directed at Tim it was more of a gross story of how to be tortured on some Hostel shit.....but good ass verse man...just try to come better on a battle approach next Vote = Tim ... Koke was just bad... Bad flow..al most bad evrything Sry to say I vote for tim cuz he dint suck as much...+ he actuallly had an ok Flow
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Soldier
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Sorry I usually quote, but I don't think it matters much in this one..........
1st. - Decent Rhyme Tim, Coulda Been Better, but then again Every says that, LOL! --- Rap Was A little funny ( I see u used the Doug Cartoon) 2nd. - Big Ups to Koke! He pretty Much freestyled the whole thing and probably typed it all in two minutes. I'm a DeeJay and I appreciate raps that just come off top of ur head. 3rd. - While I gave u props, Koke there was way to many stretched lines, no really hard hitting punchlines, except for the disecting body there was really no concept. While Timb wasn't at his best, He Kept his flow WAY more consistant and hard hitting. My Vote Goes to : Timberlake
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