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House Rulez ...8 barz each drop ...Two verses each,
First to five. 3-0 KO 4-1 TKO .... No old drops ...No bitin' ...Recyclin' , Or stealin' peoples drop, Cuz Mr. Expose is here and he will expose that ass !!!!!!!! YA dig ?!?! No Dick rydin' or Hate Votes ...especially to those who got the heat out for me ?!? Dont drop yo shyt in HERE! AND NO FEEDIN' BYTCH like last time you wanted me to drop first i didn't mind Like that's gonna make yo verse 7 times better ![]() LETS GO !!! ![]() Last edited by Tyme Lyne; 06-20-2007 at 02:13 PM.. |
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man........:1frech30:
go ahead and criticize me Bytch ! u aint a jeanyuS cuz.i laughed at yo open mic spit, u fiendin' fo' a another weggie?! HUh?! my Friend? , I guess i'll have to put bullet holes all in ya briefs again, You the hiphop Steve Urkel of droppin' lines that dont hit, Man stop embarrassin' ya self and u know u be readin' other scripts, You been gone for three months and then u came back WOW, talkin' " Imma rip you son LOOK!!!" uhhh...yeah u can stop lyin' NOW. you are an example of bein' an impatient fuck , and catchin' a case quick, u like a little kid that threw a basic tantrum cuz, he aint get a bottle of Nesquik, Fuck yo Mac...The only MAC u got is in yo CPU man, what weapons ? u carry at hand? , u utilized that shyt often ...chill out on that man , and u set-up ya format up like a wack dip set bytch ...and that i dont understand, take notes on a statistic , cuz yo status now aint business, you couldn't write a rhyme with out repeatin' that word ....LISTEN !!!! Quote:
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yo tyme line get the fuck on yo knees liek you belong!!, ![]() JEA ,IM NOT a STOCKY dood but i got a COCKY mood/ yea you QUICK to talk alot, but im QUICK to COCK a TOOL// ive BEEN know'n for POP'n glocks, ILL be POPn,OFFn FOOLs/ I'll "WASTE" "TYME" on MY block, SO ill POP A SHOT IN YOU!!// my HEAT will ROCK ya KNOT, no more COCK-A-doodle-DOO'S/ (goodnight) The THING will CHOP YA TOP, and you'll be DROP'n for a SNOOZE// (told ya) you'll be OUTLINED in chalk, just for talk'n LIKE you SMOOTH/ LIKE Weezy, I GO SO HARD, so dont get ya SHIT CONFUSED// (HOE) OFFICIALLY MURDERED. . .do you really want to try a come back?? and remember bitch no FEEDING. . .you hoe ass biezie. . . hurry and drop so YOU can get DROP'd and dont be quoting my shyt if you aint gon quote the whole thing bitch. . . Diss The Rappa Above U ^^^^for those who need to know^^^^
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hmm interesting battle nothing major but ok...
Tyme- you are an example of bein' an impatient fuck , and catchin' a case quick, u like a little kid that threw a basic tantrum cuz, he aint get a bottle of Nesquik, Fuck yo Mac...The only MAC u got is in yo CPU man, what weapons ? u carry at hand? , JeanyuS- The THING will CHOP YA TOP, and you'll be DROP'n for a SNOOZE// (told ya) you'll be OUTLINED in chalk, just for talk'n LIKE you SMOOTH/ This battle was pretty average......but I felt Tyme brought more attemptions of battle material to the table....but some of her lines were a bit broad...whereas Jean brought some ok concepts but I felt they were pretty basic and I could only quote one line and I barely liked that as much...which was basic...good battle to both elevate more however in the end. Vote: Tyme for better concepts and battle material.
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Tyme takes this one easily IMO...Her drop had better disses and her attempts were more creative than Jeanyus...Jeanyus, why you capitalizing that ish, ya rhyme scheme was basic as hell, folk. Plus that drop was too random, all you talked about was cock, chop, block, rock...Tha only line that had potential but the wording killed it was the waste tyme line but it was still weak...
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And i aint even try ....LOL Damn .
and you aint even do 16 lines ...you did 8 lines wow ...u a bytch.... Last edited by Tyme Lyne; 06-21-2007 at 01:36 AM.. |
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Rap GodFather
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It wasn't feedin' .....a quote is not feedin' ...what the fuck ?!?! why you mad at me ?!?! LOL .
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being tha this is a text battle u gotta be more descriptive with ur wordplay multies and delivery.....both drops were lyrically decent but if i was just to go off the one that flowed the easiest and was easier to follow it'd be Jeanyus but bar for bar Tyme excelled and dats what dis is all about....my vote- Tyme
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