RGF Audio Tourney RD.1: In$anity (0-0) vs YG22(0-0)

[Grimy]

Rules

Due dates
Songs are due Sunday 11:59 PM Pacific
Voting ends Wednesday 11:59 PM Pacific

Voting
Explain why you voted for the person.
Try and give constructive criticism while voting.

General Rules
The song must be based on the theme set for the match
The instrumental will be chosen by me, and I will give a download link for it.
No reycling.
Minimum time must be 2:00, No max times..

Theme

Story. Doesn't need any choruses or hooks or anything like that, you can if you want though. Just spit a story.

Instrumental edited in later

[Grimy]

Welcome to new york city - figured it should be good for this (no sample in it btw)
http://www.sendspace.com/file/zc6j32

[In$anity]

jus checkin in. should have my audio in tomrrow, because i wont have time later on. thanks all, good luck YG

[Grimy]

A'ight, cool fam.

And YG, you need to drop tomorrow..

[In$anity]

sorry about the quality but here goes:
http://www.zshare.net/audio/2409634e34b56b/

[Brazilian_Mobsta]

Insanity prob gonna win by no show, BUT next time, try not talkin directly to the mic(prob computer mic), if you blow on it it will distort the voice and make those noizes. Try spittin above or below it and way louder wit some feeling.
This a cheaper way of soudin better on a cheap mic.

[OzMC]

fuck i dont have time to vote sorry but ill get ya on the next battle

[In$anity]

Originally Posted by Brazilian_Mobsta

Insanity prob gonna win by no show, BUT next time, try not talkin directly to the mic(prob computer mic), if you blow on it it will distort the voice and make those noizes. Try spittin above or below it and way louder wit some feeling.
This a cheaper way of soudin better on a cheap mic.

thanks man i'll do that. yeah it's a cheap PC mic, was gonna get an expensive one, but i just do this for fun, i'm never gonna be a rapper, but i'll follow your advice for next time, good lookin