CBL Champ Match: 1. Illustration (10-2) vs. 2. Torment (5-5)

[Robert Are]

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then the 2nd person to post
MUST match the 1st persons line amount.

[Illustration]

Wow..another rematch? G'luck Tor..

[†SaW†]

Czech in....Good luck with you too man....what the bar limit should be though ?

[Illustration]

Go short and sweet...like 12 or so...

But Ima need an extension til late tonight..or POSSIBLY tomorrow..I just got back from the beach..and I'm goin' out for my boy's 24th birthday..so its bar night for me...so I dont think you'll mind..

[†SaW†]

Well i dont' mind the extension at all.....but since this is the champ match.....i went a bit further just match me....i don't feel like cuttin bars off like i did last time.....just match me or get close...good luck~


..Look my life is fully Bladed, his is just a butter-knife,
you gangsta ? nah i see threw this pussy like Hollowman's Wife..
..I'm presise, from the predictions sayin " ill wins by landslide'
until i shoot ho's in his whip, now that's wat i call uh Pimp-My-Ride..
..You Hide? behind ya weak concepts or with da forbidden lies,
cuz he can't wear the real truth, this fatty outgrown its X-size..
..I'm wise, sayin fuk da cat n mouse game.. you aint' worth da chase,
yet i gave him a run for his money, without bettin on a track race..lol
..I lace, inbetween da challengers or da visual beyond its peaks
so da only time ill wore da "Champion", is rocin da actual sneaks..
..You're weak, with those con-verses trying to adapt a skill yu wish,
cuz he ain't fukin-ill, if his name intercoursed wit da electric fish..
..I dish, out servings toward my rivals, because he will get ate,
or get laid on the "matt" hardy, from this demised twist of fate..
..No hate, if he drops a tight verse, i won't be fully surprise,
yet his lines still more slant, than Mr. magoo's vague eyes..
..I rise, from the bottomless pit reaching the great heights,
so i'm ending ill's last W here, like typin in some web sites..
..Goodfite, yea he won twice for the total record its now 1-2,
but him winning now? thats a "Bigger-Shock" like an evolved Pikichu..
..I grew, assumptions of gunplay...yet he ain't really cuttin,
until i leave his body with a red-dot, like a record button...
..I'm stuntin, from the studio or flowin for da KaySlay,
cuz ill couldn't Produce-a-Punch, boxing wit Dr.Dre..lol
..Okay,it use to be rival beef, until i stake out n smack herds,
or i'll shoot ill body wit two-O's, like spellin Yahoo Backwards..O.o
..I now heard, his boyfriend sale porn and tried to Bi-Flicks,
So fag i'll smack both of u with da palm, until they read "Psychics"..Nicca

[G-Rated]

Extension granted for ILL...

[Illustration]

Aite...whatever...

Tor..there's something you should know..or prolly look back at
/\ I can drop half of that..and mine would still only be half as wack
I'll merk you with less lines..and for that..I'd really feel sorry
Only after you hit 'rock bottom'..after I toss your corpse in a quarry
Might as well as tell you the truth..at least get Liyah off your nuts
Then again..you could take all her talent..and youd STILL SUCK!
I'd rather throw fists...or just straight throw blows to rattle this geek
I've battled Sureloc or Area..n its dope..with you? Its battle of the 'weak'
And understand this...I have BETTER wordplay...n I'm not over zealous
With yours? You 'force' it so much...you'd make Darth Vader jealous
I dont mean to sound so harsh..then again..its a cause for alarm
Couldnt beat me the first 2 times..what makes the third time the charm?
At least people claim I'm dope...n I dont brag about my battle record
No one would claim youre dope..you just set off the wack detector...

And thats it...

[†SaW†]

^^ hmm Ill what happend yo...i was expecting more....but w/e you drop a reasonable yet basic verse....good try man.......uppin votes i guess

[G-Rated]

..You Hide? behind ya weak concepts or with da forbidden lies,
cuz he can't wear the real truth, this fatty outgrown its X-size..

..I lace, inbetween da challengers or da visual beyond its peaks
so da only time ill wore da "Champion", is rocin da actual sneaks..
/\ Cheap ass kicks

..I rise, from the bottomless pit reaching the great heights,
so i'm ending ill's last W here, like typin in some web sites..
/\ That was nice...

VS.

Might as well as tell you the truth..at least get Liyah off your nuts
Then again..you could take all her talent..and youd STILL SUCK!




Torment wrote waaaaay more than ILL but most of it was filler; he had some other lines that coulda been quoted but most of them seem a bit 'far-fetched'. Both battlers were inconsistent. The only line I liked from ILL was the talent line. Most of his concepts were played flips like the force line, the rock bottom concept, and the third times a charm line. Then we had the 'infamous' wack meter concept Somebody used sumthin like that on me before, I thought it was wack as shit but some folks liked it...But that didnt work for me either.


My Vote: Torment

[koke07]

Torment took this easily with better punches better concept and better wordplay
Ill had a pretty basic concept couldve had better punches and had a lack in wordplay
vote:Torment