7. Sureloc Holmes (7-5) vs. 8. khalidrocks (2-1)

[Robert Are]

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[Robert Are]

You wanna do pics? It'd be the first one we've had in the league. If not, let's just do a regular 12.

[khalidrocks]

No be it a regular battle cause im out of country so i don't have that much access to internet.
And yeah 12 is fine with me.But please post up as soon as possible.

[khalidrocks]

The voters just don't get your spit dog,that's really worse
I mean the American Politics seems more transparent than your opaque verse.
You're poor,no dough,not even a good verse,that's what i penned and said it
But damn this dude's ugly as fuck,and that's the only thing his parents've inherited
Beef with me means you don't love your anatomy,I murder fellas
This battle will leave u with too many scars that would make a scratched CD jealous
I know why u hating me dude,my looks impress your girl and that's increasin the gap
That bitch's porn movie with me could rock the cyber world more than the Hilton's sex tape.
She's the light of the hood,can't imagine life without her,you know
Niggaz just lose their power everytime they plug their dicks out of that hoe
Dude got some ghostwriters,that's horrible,nigga please
You get more foreign aid in text than the 3rd world countries

[Robert Are]

...i see yer favorite rapper, and all the while you standin' waitin'
but when he says Canibus?...he's beggin' for public transportation
it's mad fun to shoot at this kid, leavin' him scarred and shot
..s'like the Pringles slogan...once you pop the 'lid', it's mighty hard to stop
...'n i told this dumb poor bitch to beat-box, flippin' to shout
i asked why he tackled cardboard & he said he was kicking his house
ask your mom duke, me n her meet up on Sundays to meet 'lid
i've got bigger fish to fry...but then again, i hunt whales on the weekends
and you shoulda inherited yer mom's body, but instead yer a flat bitch
cuz if you half-assed with HER figure...you'd still be at legendary status
you gonna hear bout me foreva, so bitch, don't rest on Holmes
with words that straight stab 'rocks...and leave it set in stones...



HA.

[Tyme Lyne]

AHAAAAAAAAA!!!! -Screams- AHHHHHHAAAAAAAAH !!!!

man im just going to go with who had less ...Yo Mom's/Yo Girls..This and that Lines ...///

Introduction.
....Shirley.... Shirley.... Shirley ...
and khalidrocks..

How many times have I or anybody else on this site ...Have said that "yo girls This "Or "Yo Moms that" ..."And She was ON my" ...Is getting old ...Ya'll two battling and dont know each other ...meaning that you use that in place all up in the verse . It would have been better if ya'll were beefin' but it seems that's how it goes when u dont know anything about your opponent. Damn be creative !!!!

Khalidrocks- Verse

The voters just don't get your spit dog,that's really worse
I mean the American Politics seems more transparent than your opaque verse.
You're poor,no dough,not even a good verse,that's what i penned and said it
But damn this dude's ugly as fuck,and that's the only thing his parents've inherited
Beef with me means you don't love your anatomy,I murder fellas
This battle will leave u with too many scars that would make a scratched CD jealous

&

Dude got some ghostwriters,that's horrible,nigga please
You get more foreign aid in text than the 3rd world countries

...VS...

Shirley's Verse ....

...i see yer favorite rapper, and all the while you standin' waitin'
but when he says Canibus?...he's beggin' for public transportation
it's mad fun to shoot at this kid, leavin' him scarred and shot
..s'like the Pringles slogan...once you pop the 'lid', it's mighty hard to stop
...'n i told this dumb poor bitch to beat-box, flippin' to shout
i asked why he tackled cardboard & he said he was kicking his house

&

you gonna hear bout me foreva, so bitch, don't rest on Holmes
with words that straight stab 'rocks...and leave it set in stones...

DAmn That didnt work !!!!!!!!!!!!!! .....

Okay On to the Best Lines from both Then !!!

Khalidrocks-

The voters just don't get your spit dog,that's really worse
I mean the American Politics seems more transparent than your opaque verse

That was Creative and decent .

Beef with me means you don't love your anatomy,I murder fellas
This battle will leave u with too many scars that would make a scratched CD jealous

LOL....

VS ....

SHirleY.....

...i see yer favorite rapper, and all the while you standin' waitin'
but when he says Canibus?...he's beggin' for public transportation

ahaha...

...'n i told this dumb poor bitch to beat-box, flippin' to shout
i asked why he tackled cardboard & he said he was kicking his house

Like the concept ....

DAmn !!! That shyt aint work either !!!!!! Aight on to the Cats Then !!!!!

Punches-Both
Flow- Shirley
Structure-Both
Creativity-Kalidrocks
Multi's- I doubt i saw any ...
Overall Enjoyment-Both ...

OKay .....

I guess the Vote is ...

TIE

[Caleb_Pratt]

Okay, B4 I Put Up My Vote Here's Some Quotables:

Khalid "Rocks" -

The voters just don't get your spit dog,that's really worse
I mean the American Politics seems more transparent than your opaque verse.

- Decent Opener but "that's Really Worse" doesn't really work, you needed to word this better, But I like the metaphore.

Beef with me means you don't love your anatomy,I murder fellas
This battle will leave u with too many scars that would make a scratched CD jealous

- I Liked this One, LOL!, good line

I know why u hating me dude,my looks impress your girl and that's increasin the gap
That bitch's porn movie with me could rock the cyber world more than the Hilton's sex tape

- Okay this was were u needed to look back over your rhyme, First to make it rhyme with "tape" you gotta use "Gape". Now If I think u typo-ed then I inserted myself, but then the first line doesn't word right. Just Gotta work on that pimpin'



Sure'LOc-

it's mad fun to shoot at this kid, leavin' him scarred and shot
..s'like the Pringles slogan...once you pop the 'lid', it's mighty hard to stop

- Lol, Nice Good Line.

...'n i told this dumb poor bitch to beat-box, flippin' to shout
i asked why he tackled cardboard & he said he was kicking his house

- Again Nice, It's A old "yah Mama" joke, but I still Laughed LOL!!

you gonna hear bout me foreva, so bitch, don't rest on Holmes
with words that straight stab 'rocks...and leave it set in stones...

- Coulda Had a better Closer, Not Enuff Punch


OVERALL.......
Decent Battle.... Good Word Play On Both parts! But as far as a battle lines go, Khalid just didn't have the punches like Sureloc did. Khalid did have the better closer fa' sho, but the rest was so-so punches, if You keep working on your punches I could see u doing really well.

My Vote Goes to Sureloc

[ruivirtual]

Originally Posted by khalidrocks

The voters just don't get your spit dog,that's really worse
I mean the American Politics seems more transparent than your opaque verse.
aight opener, punchy enough even thou american politcs aint a small bit transparent, they obscure as fuck but dat's some other shit
You're poor,no dough,not even a good verse,that's what i penned and said it
But damn this dude's ugly as fuck,and that's the only thing his parents've inherited
aight keppin a good flow, not too complicated and not quite punch but aight
Beef with me means you don't love your anatomy,I murder fellas
This battle will leave u with too many scars that would make a scratched CD jealous
hooooh! i liked this one! good concept
I know why u hating me dude,my looks impress your girl and that's increasin the gap
That bitch's porn movie with me could rock the cyber world more than the Hilton's sex tape.
....ok
She's the light of the hood,can't imagine life without her,you know
Niggaz just lose their power everytime they plug their dicks out of that hoe
a bit of a filler...
Dude got some ghostwriters,that's horrible,nigga please
You get more foreign aid in text than the 3rd world countries
nice.. good closing

let's see wat sure lock got

Originally Posted by surelockss

...i see yer favorite rapper, and all the while you standin' waitin'
but when he says Canibus?...he's beggin' for public transportation
ok opener, concept coiso..
it's mad fun to shoot at this kid, leavin' him scarred and shot
..s'like the Pringles slogan...once you pop the 'lid', it's mighty hard to stop
lol. good one!
...'n i told this dumb poor bitch to beat-box, flippin' to shout
i asked why he tackled cardboard & he said he was kicking his house
...ok...
ask your mom duke, me n her meet up on Sundays to meet 'lid
i've got bigger fish to fry...but then again, i hunt whales on the weekends
...you losing me holmes
and you shoulda inherited yer mom's body, but instead yer a flat bitch
cuz if you half-assed with HER figure...you'd still be at legendary status
guess this aint feeding but it's still not dat hot
you gonna hear bout me foreva, so bitch, don't rest on Holmes
with words that straight stab 'rocks...and leave it set in stones...
ok closer...
but what happend to the last barz?...

ok i enjoyed kalid concepts and some punchy deal
holmes got his usual creativity but i think it went too far fo me this
holmes also got the wordplay on his side but
the overall enjoyment goes to kalid
it was close but
kalid gmv
dat's my word

[Illustration]

The voters just don't get your spit dog,that's really worse
I mean the American Politics seems more transparent than your opaque verse.
You're poor,no dough,not even a good verse,that's what i penned and said it
But damn this dude's ugly as fuck,and that's the only thing his parents've inherited

Vs.

...i see yer favorite rapper, and all the while you standin' waitin'
but when he says Canibus?...he's beggin' for public transportation
...'n i told this dumb poor bitch to beat-box, flippin' to shout
i asked why he tackled cardboard & he said he was kicking his house
you gonna hear bout me foreva, so bitch, don't rest on Holmes
with words that straight stab 'rocks...and leave it set in stones...


Ehhh...disappointing on both sides...way too many 'your bitch' punches...Khalid actually shocked the hell outta me with his verse...those quotables were nice as hell kid..but aside from that...every concept you dropped has been done to death...that 'hilton' line is played as hell..as is the 'scars/scratched cd' and the 'dick/plug/power'...as for Sureloc...his verse wasn't as solid as he has been..his quotables were dope as hell..and he was much more consistent..but aside from that..same boat..too many other concepts I aint diggin...or have been done before..

In the end..this goes to better quotables and more consistency..and Sureloc takes that in both categories..but Khalid definitely dropped a helluva nice verse...

Vote = sureloc

[†SaW†]

smh@ this battle too wasn't much to quote so ima keep this short...

khalid:

This battle will leave u with too many scars that would make a scratched CD jealous

Surloc:
...i see yer favorite rapper, and all the while you standin' waitin'
but when he says Canibus?...he's beggin' for public transportation
with words that straight stab 'rocks...and leave it set in stones...

Seriously ya'll both lacked on some real creativity....k you only had one good line i was feeling but if you came like that each bar you could of won somewhat....and far as surloc...the canibus line was cool but i heard it so many times smh...still ya concept was cool and thats what pulled you the win in the run

Overall: Surloc