Amishstad..VS..KingOfNewYork

[Amishstad]

-16 lines
-Due tommorow
-First to 5 votes
-4-0 is a ko.
-Anyone can vote
Voters: break it down dope for me please.



i dont know if regular battles can be done right now..
this tourny seems to be taken up the voters.



good luck.

[King Of New York]

checkin in, ima start puttin my shit together now, might be tonight, if not, def. early tomorrow, g/l 2 u 2 homie, need good voters for this shit 2..

[Amishstad]

since you havent posted yet...
ima drop tommorow, i just dropped a verse against
Tyme Lyne and im feelin to smoke a blunt.

[King Of New York]

ayo, my best yet, here it goes


whose nervous as he, you loud like sounding out a hyperbole
i murder this thief verbaly and crown him or in this case, her the queen
blurry avator like puddle of mudd, gravy comin outa ya pours
The Bronx is Burning, even the omish say they can't take the heat no more
i settle the score as you peddle on floors like fred, although asians are always right
omish-STAD? i didn't know my step dad was white
ill rak-im (rock him) and still pump up the volume strong
my flow ILL like if you spelled Chicago's homestate wrong (Chicago, IL)
(evo) loves bud? i think he just got butt-fucked by his co-workers moving dump-trucks,
you need to show some-love, like you'll ever get bumped-up like volleyballs being hit in front of
whose son of a, bitch, lovin the dick, rubbin the clips like you was hunting for hits (death)
you stunting-for-chips? nigga getting run like a bus-iness, gets the sunn-ing like tanning booths, what is this?
the only start you got on your second-part of life when you got fed-at-bars,
ill kill you on the mic, no weapons charged! you less then large little lez-with-tards
the only break-now you got at steak-now is when you break-down from battles like decomposure
save yourself the torment, beat you at wits burning bridges using canibus, i call it maximum exposure!




any questions, ask

chicago, il= where he lives
puddle of mudd- band, song= blurry
evo loves budd- his screnname on AIM, seen all this shit on his profile
amish/omishstad
seen a pic of him in the pic tourney, asian lookin, NO HATE, just puttin it in their
STAD= can stand for step dad

PPL PLEASE VOTE ONCE AMISH SPITS, thanks

want somebody to properly/fair vote on this

ill holla back once amish spits

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[Amishstad]

i got a weed smoking problem, so i forget about shit.
excuse the lateness...


All the dirt you dug up, can only suit King as a cock-fiend
he MENT to tunnel enough to set free all of County's Block-D!
See Ima smack this hoe, 'King' do as you're told and stay at your home
Chicago Folks 'crack crowns' with bats now and beat you black and gold
Fuck this ass-clown's wack sound, ill detatch him at the bones,
Poke fun at this asshole so much he shits floaters with laugin holes
That verse was practical, we all laugh at you come on you cant battle dude..
I rather see you travel thru time and kill the 90s style that inspired you to start rappin too
I fuckin pity you! call yourself 'king' like people actually NEED you alive
He Grievs and he cries,he put himself on TOP.. with every reason to dive!!
Smack you till your bleeding inside, huntin ya life bitch, this the season to hide
When King's a 'ruler' over heads, he's finding his guys dick size cause it fills him with pride!
I got no reason to lie, Amish 'lands viking hits', you should bite me bitch
Yup theres no technology here, explain how my fight-ing fist is light-ing quick!!
King-cant-fight-for-shit! I got god power to have your whole life line shattered
My swing will make time fly backwards, make dad find mom faster and you born bastard!!



*kings are a rival gang to Chicago's Folks Nation. to diss a king,
folks would throw thier gang sign down, cracking the crown'
Black and gold are king colors.
*lives in New york

[Tyme Lyne]

Aight Im just going to drop the lines i thought that stuck out more . And my overall explanation.

Aight King :

(evo) loves bud? i think he just got butt-fucked by his co-workers moving dump-trucks,
you need to show some-love, like you'll ever get bumped-up like volleyballs being hit in front of ,

Nice but could have been used in a nore aggressive set-up but cool .

the only break-now you got at steak-now is when you break-down from battles like decomposure
save yourself the torment, beat you at wits burning bridges using canibus, i call it maximum exposure!

Last bar was okay ...but again could have been more heat thrown in it ....

The Rest of the bars that you dropped were aight wont nothing special , even though u tried to make it flow with multis ...Still longwinded and threw the flow off a lil bit ...Try to make your verse a lil less stretched ...Good Verse King .

Aight amish !!!

Fuck this ass-clown's wack sound, ill detatch him at the bones,
Poke fun at this asshole so much he shits floaters with laugin holes

Lol ....that shyt reminded me when Remix came back and posted a picture of some dudes ass that diolated . LOL.

That verse was practical, we all laugh at you come on you cant battle dude..
I rather see you travel thru time and kill the 90s style that inspired you to start rappin too

Nice .

King-cant-fight-for-shit! I got god power to have your whole life line shattered
My swing will make time fly backwards, make dad find mom faster and you born bastard!!

HHAHAHAHHAA....damn that was nice. LOL

Amish that weed got you sprung like that ? anyways u dropped nicely ..well done ...a lil slow points here and there , But consistent .


Vote ...Amish ...For better punches , set-up creativity , all that . need I say more . Well done to the both of you ! Good luck .

[Amishstad]

Thanks much, Im only posting in mid-term to remind
people not to freepost. Votes only please. And thank you
Liyah for taking your time, its appreciated. and yes its the
weed.



Uppin Thread For Votes!!!

[G-Rated]

Nothing


VS.

That verse was practical, we all laugh at you come on you cant battle dude..
I rather see you travel thru time and kill the 90s style that inspired you to start rappin too
I fuckin pity you! call yourself 'king' like people actually NEED you alive
He Grievs and he cries,he put himself on TOP.. with every reason to dive!!



KONY...Your punches or should I say lack of, ruined your chances. Structure was all over the place. Flow was a mess. Amish had the more solid drop. A few decent punches here and there. Plus, he had the only quotables from the battle.


Vote: Amish

[maniak]

Aight King :

(evo) loves bud? i think he just got butt-fucked by his co-workers moving dump-trucks,
you need to show some-love, like you'll ever get bumped-up like volleyballs being hit in front of ,

damn u almost had a hot line

the only break-now you got at steak-now is when you break-down from battles like decomposure
save yourself the torment, beat you at wits burning bridges using canibus, i call it maximum exposure!

came up short again

the rest was filler

amish

Fuck this ass-clown's wack sound, ill detatch him at the bones,
Poke fun at this asshole so much he shits floaters with laugin holes

okay

That verse was practical, we all laugh at you come on you cant battle dude..
I rather see you travel thru time and kill the 90s style that inspired you to start rappin too

better

King-cant-fight-for-shit! I got god power to have your whole life line shattered
My swing will make time fly backwards, make dad find mom faster and you born bastard!!

okay


Vote ...Amish ...both did alright but Amish put more into it, stay Chi High mish
Spanish Cobra baby tru blue crew, King u got room 4 improvement but u getting there so keep doin ur thang homie

[Wreckless]

is this to 5 votes or 3? i think its 5 so ill vote

king of new york- you had some nice multis but it threw off the structure of the battle, i seen you don't really battle much and the one line about chicago ILL was pretty nice, but the rest was out of place and needed touching up

Amish- you're verse was pretty much solid throughout

keep it up tho to both of yall, just work on acouple things KONY and you'll be aight man

vote- amishstad