8. Area51 (4-2) vs. 9. Popcorn (2-1)

[Tyme Lyne]

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Due: August 2, 2007
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[Popcorn.]

Check, G/L

[Area51]

word g'luck

drop early?

[Popcorn.]

Ok dropping now, I don't give a f*ck no more, on too many sites, losing track of 'ish, lmao, but here is some random junk so at least it's not a noshow.





Just in case, you don't know about me, I'll just crush ya' face,
Bc it's like my punches pissed bro....just watch them, FUCKIN' A!!!
This jerk don't care bruh, bc my punch will hurt an' tear ya',
To the point you'll get so burried, you need Math in order to surface, Area.
I ain't Miss Cleo, but I can predict how this lame thanks,
Bc Area,51 is the number of times I've heard those Popcorn name plays...
...in the last week, I wasn't here last week, I'm serious - in fact,
I saw your verse an' bro, I've seen No Show verses more serious than that.
...I said I might FORGET, NOT NO SHOW - I'm not that scared of ya',
An' it's like we battlin' in the Ghetto, bc your punches are just bad, Area.






...blah!!, ENJOY an' G/L ..

[Area51]

Originally Posted by Popcorn.

Ok dropping now, I don't give a f*ck no more, on too many sites, losing track of 'ish, lmao, but here is some random junk so at least it's not a noshow.

haha, I feel ya man

your a pedo, I mean it.. ya taste in women's queer yo
cuz the only bitches feelin Pop are about 13 years old
the wrong record was posted, but as I'm survivin you..
Liyah could've saved some time.. 'n simply made me 5 'n 2
fucka splash, my punches make tsunamis when they spite ya ways
so my shits tidal.. while Popcorns associated with micro waves
you don't deserve the title of man.. I'll find this girl 'n beat her
you take balls deep in ya zone 'n go the other way like Jeter
I'm cruisin to the win.. all ya punchlines get hate
throw ya verse 'n the water.. cuz that shit's a deadweight

[Wreckless]

Just in case, you don't know about me, I'll just crush ya' face,
Bc it's like my punches pissed bro....just watch them, FUCKIN' A!!!

-not bad first bar, wasnt feelin the first line tho

This jerk don't care bruh, bc my punch will hurt an' tear ya',
To the point you'll get so burried, you need Math in order to surface, Area.


-work on multies, ex. bra, ya, but second line helped

I ain't Miss Cleo, but I can predict how this lame thanks,
Bc Area,51 is the number of times I've heard those Popcorn name plays...

-not bad, both lines had good punches


...in the last week, I wasn't here last week, I'm serious - in fact,
I saw your verse an' bro, I've seen No Show verses more serious than that.

-another not bad, didnt really attack him until the end of line 2

...I said I might FORGET, NOT NO SHOW - I'm not that scared of ya',
An' it's like we battlin' in the Ghetto, bc your punches are just bad, Area.

-nice wordplay at the end with ghetto, another not bad line





vs



your a pedo, I mean it.. ya taste in women's queer yo
cuz the only bitches feelin Pop are about 13 years old

-ok starter, pretty funny


the wrong record was posted, but as I'm survivin you..
Liyah could've saved some time.. 'n simply made me 5 'n 2

-eh ok line

fucka splash, my punches make tsunamis when they spite ya ways
so my shits tidal.. while Popcorns associated with micro waves

-nice association, sick second line

you don't deserve the title of man.. I'll find this girl 'n beat her
you take balls deep in ya zone 'n go the other way like Jeter

-once again goin straight at him, nice multis

I'm cruisin to the win.. all ya punchlines get hate
throw ya verse 'n the water.. cuz that shit's a deadweight

-good ending


overall this was a good battle, popcorn, nice wordplay, work on ya multis, area you had nice punches, try to use some wordplay

but area got this, he went straight at popcorn with pretty much every bar

my vote: area51

[Tyme Lyne]

LOL ....@ this battle ..

.Popcorn aka Orville Redenbacher it's okay ...a lot of people have battles on other sites too ...A lot of battles on your plate , can over do ya cranium man ....just chill u did fine ...u aint hoe showed ...that's good . If you need to sit a battle out just do it . U had til August 2 but like you said you would have forgot . Itis all good . U gave it your best .

And this one bar stuck out ....very nicely .

...I said I might FORGET, NOT NO SHOW - I'm not that scared of ya',
An' it's like we battlin' in the Ghetto, bc your punches are just bad, Area.


AIght Area ....

okay ..Punches on point you came with the execution ...it was aight nothing special . u kept it consistent . structure Flow goes the both of ya'll ...I enjoyed your verse ... These bars were nice ...

fucka splash, my punches make tsunamis when they spite ya ways
so my shits tidal.. while Popcorns associated with micro waves

&

you don't deserve the title of man.. I'll find this girl 'n beat her
you take balls deep in ya zone 'n go the other way like Jeter

The second line i liked but the first one wasn't all that but still a good bar .

My Vote Goes To AREA 51

PopCorn Good Luck next time Homie ! And pace your self .

[Amishstad]

popcorn
Just in case, you don't know about me, I'll just crush ya' face,
Bc it's like my punches pissed bro....just watch them, FUCKIN' A!!!
Didnt hit hard, the wording sucked but nice concept.
This jerk don't care bruh, bc my punch will hurt an' tear ya',
To the point you'll get so burried, you need Math in order to surface, Area.
good concept, bad execution
I ain't Miss Cleo, but I can predict how this lame thanks,
Bc Area,51 is the number of times I've heard those Popcorn name plays...
thanks/plays dont rhyme. ok punch
...in the last week, I wasn't here last week, I'm serious - in fact,
I saw your verse an' bro, I've seen No Show verses more serious than that.
decent punch
...I said I might FORGET, NOT NO SHOW - I'm not that scared of ya',
An' it's like we battlin' in the Ghetto, bc your punches are just bad, Area.
meh, didnt hit hard. you say because too much.

A little less then decent verse. lots of punches could've been
pure haymakers if they were worded better. i do realize this
piece was rushed, its just best to try hardest not to show it.
With that in mind your verse did alright.


vs

Area51
your a pedo, I mean it.. ya taste in women's queer yo
cuz the only bitches feelin Pop are about 13 years old
Not a bad opener
the wrong record was posted, but as I'm survivin you..
Liyah could've saved some time.. 'n simply made me 5 'n 2
Filler
fucka splash, my punches make tsunamis when they spite ya ways
so my shits tidal.. while Popcorns associated with micro waves
Dope nameplay, could've been flipped harder..
you don't deserve the title of man.. I'll find this girl 'n beat her
you take balls deep in ya zone 'n go the other way like Jeter
Decent attempt.
I'm cruisin to the win.. all ya punchlines get hate
throw ya verse 'n the water.. cuz that shit's a deadweight
Could've spiced your closer with some better wordplay.
Didnt really hit to me.

Overall your verse wasnt that bad minus the filler.
The wording in most lines were better then Pops,
better hits with the nameplays.

Vote=Area.

His punches were more effective, the concepts werent
as fresh but it was his name flips and execution that
took it.

[G-Rated]

This jerk don't care bruh, bc my punch will hurt an' tear ya',
To the point you'll get so burried, you need Math in order to surface, Area.


VS.


fucka splash, my punches make tsunamis when they spite ya ways
so my shits tidal.. while Popcorns associated with micro waves


Quoted ya nameplays. Those were tha standouts IMO. Hard battle to judge, Popcorn had a few other decent attempts with tha nameplays but execution wasnt that good. Area's drop was more rounded and most of tha bars I didnt quote from him were better constructed than Pop's.


Vote: Area

[Popcorn.]

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