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Rap GodFather
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![]() CBL Official Rules Due: August 2, 2007 Read Rules and Regulations before battle. Voting Must vote on at least 4 battles and post your links Explain your votes. Minus 1 vote for each vote missing No votes = minus 4 votes This rule WILL be enforced General Rules 1st person cant edit after 2nd person posts 2nd person cant edit after a vote has been made No feeding. No using a pic without opponents permission. using opponents pic without permission = AUTO DQ No freeposting, swaying or bitching Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in. If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post MUST match the 1st persons line amount. |
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Rap GodFather
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Check .....One Two ...Man ALL I need is about 2-4 bars ...make this short and quick how about it ?
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Capo
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Yawns Czech in...make a bar limit plz so i can win this tyme....
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Rap GodFather
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AHAHA...8 bars coming up . lets go boyz .
Transgress Recycles Like aluminum, dawg and you sayin that's from Scratch ? Yo Punches more played than Cassius Clay In a match. Im Taking it back....Torment is the abstract of "encyclopedia" formats, with the setups all over the place, even wikipedia couldn't "Engine" that, to contemplate , on situations , Both set on infatration, Like the "WWE" Head Hunchos , got sued for the word "Federation", A failure to co-exist like myths , and legends that wouldn't suit ya'll recognition, predictions flopped , Torment Struggled with Transgressive premonitions, The heart that follows the play on calc and trigonom's, a dispict of graphs and vivid images ...hittin' rocks and bombs, Get on the floor hoes , imma pimstress like that dude D. Banner , Transgress The quiet one , while Torment known to dropkick scanners !, pyscho ? or a net geek ? ...it's just obvious from what i see, ya'll both spit brief on literary terms and shyt constantly, The weapon i chose didnt expose in mythological terms , but next "Tyme" consider this as a Discreet lesson to be learn, HAHA.! |
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Outlaw
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eeeeeh whatever...Fuck Tor
Tor u know what it is…when you touch basis with death Cuz after losing two battles…No ones gonna finda ‘tres of you left These fools fakin their text…ya don’t cause quite the friction Tryna hop on my bandwagon… And found out the ride, had height restrictions So quiet and listen…Liyah took the notice and got clear cuz “There’s a Tyme and place for everything”….SHITS JUST NOT HERE Im known to impair patients…who’s next to follow as I flex the nozzle Goddamn, you’ll be in a Harry Situation…when I send Deathly Hallows U best applaud too…why play with champ, that’s a careless bid But I knew yall might have a “kid around” like second marriages And Liyah who would lay with you…u’ll watch ya heart grow solo Cuz Man, I haven’t seen such a fish outta water…since marco polo Few could do it…but Liyah or Torment will neva handle me… Trans’ll make sure he’ll hit close to home…like a death in the family Trans stay spittin, yall lay writtens which fit disgrace U both merked n slayed, listen…I Tor Tyme…like rifts in space |
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^^ hmm i see ya'll dropped early lol....so i'll give mines muhahha
..Listen liyah follow da rite path, for trying to De"tour", before i clearly eat-this-pussy, like a sexual "Omnivore".. ..Nor can trans follow his scripts, from an unwritten code, until the shots "Layaway" his body, like a Mortician hold.. ..Ya'll Bold? like Tyme's text except Trans sex is small-font, while "shippin" tymes pussy, until her tubes-tie into 5-Knots.. ..Now ya'll hot ? pssh I seen better flames from campfires, man they both so ugly, its never Safe-Sex if annouced by umpires.. ..Its wire,Now let the cat out the bag, oh my fault Liyah's loose, leaving trans verse with spike-punches, like intoxicated prom juice.. ..3-way i cut duece, bitch you're words is pointless now define mine, That liyah's body isn't a "Hourglass", so being pretty is a waste of "Tyme".. ..Yea dude can rhyme, but his punches priceless as an Antique-vase, so his "Lines" can't comprehend, like a bad "Trans"sitional-Phrase.. ..Therefore, i'll direct ya'll loss while my punches grieve with action, Cuz ya'll verse isn't worth "Reading", like japenese "Closed-Caption"..Eazy Good luck...
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Not your best drop. You didnt have that many strong disses n your material seemed to be goin in one direction n took a completely different turn. You usually bring alot of personals but here I didnt see any. I liked tha Wiki line though but other than that it was just a battle of vocabulary words. Quote:
Consistent drop. You had some standout bars. I thought tha opener was dope as hell. Tyme n place was funny shit n tha fish outta water line was too . Closer coulda been stronger tho...Def. not one of tha most creative nameplays I've seen from you.Quote:
That hourglass line was dope, I wish tha setup was better tho. But it was def. nice. Tha comprehend line bar was aite too. Overall, that hourglass concept was one of tha standouts in this battle...That was creative n funny to me. But as far as consistency goes, I just didnt see that. OVERALL: Consistency n strong punches go to Transgress. Vote: Trans |
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Capo
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All three showed nice concects, especially Tor. Again, its the wording that fucked up the sting of the punch. Tors got fresh ideas it just i felt his direction of the punch was too forced. Liyah didnt have much of direct punches as well, more like poetic rambling with a lot of vocab that did not benefit on her part. Trans had the most consistant dissing as well as direct punches. Tor would've taken this if his wording was better, flip it hard next time son. Vote -Transgress |
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Outlaw
Join Date: Apr 2007
Posts: 186
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not agnna beat a dead horse... he came hardest liyah yer verse was better than usual but u killed yerself with the wordplay. tor u came strong... i've seen better from u, but it seems like trans is your vice. you just cant topple him. trans, u got em both good show.
vote=trans liyah change your sig... no1 wants to see your breasts i think its very "not okay" |
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