Sureloc Holmes vs. Amishstad [pic battle]

[Robert Are]

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note: just thought i'd set it up.

[Amishstad]

that logo on the bottome is the chick who took the picture,
just to add in some extra material.

word.

Sureloc you better get wit it cuase i have you fuckin gold right here!

[Robert Are]

fuck this faggot.

aight, aside from the ugly snapshot..i need a hood answer
...why do you always wanna do pic battles when your not any good at 'em?
..ya claim to sell drugs, judging the pic, ya ain't frightening better
.yea you got bags of coke...in a shoppin cart, on ya way to the recycling center
n writing is somethin ya gotta stop so you best to fear
..he wears spikes to symbolize whats on the walls closing in on his text career
.he think he looks fly but the phenomenal truth?
...his neck has enough in creases to give America an economical boost
YOUR FUCKIN' UGLY, enough to where i don't wanna spare rappers
...but yo, i'm just Saiyan...like the show you modeled ya hair after
if you don't get how nasty you look then youse a slow bastard
..sure, he does his thing...i just wish his 'thing' was a brush n some ProActiv
n people aren't afraid of Amish if he yells n stains 'em
...but if he raises his voice like he does his brows...i can't say i blame them



idk how much that is but i gotta write another verse as well. if i come back and you haven't dropped then i'll add more but if not then that should be fine.

[Robert Are]

[Amishstad]

That verse was wwwwwwweakk!!!




check it..1,2 ill match your 14. DONT EDIT!

Every battle I proved you cant rock a flow, to me you're not an obstacle
This was the LAST STRAW! It doesnt mean SUCK as much as possible
Winning isnt probable GROUPIE! I cut better with a rough temper
Your face makes me sick! mine inspires you to write a love letter
Above clever! Got your face puzzled like a Rubix Cube, its no wonder freind...
After I've seen your true colors, I just want to fuck it up again!
Your luck is fuckin slim! Call a doctor! Or a savior with the same behavior
I can see the white head....clearly your nose is undergoing labor!
This cat's a real faker, I laugh properly at this stupid wack anomaly
If thats private property... that Hill of a Zit must be a nudist ant colony!
Your lyrics dont bother me, you give a good 'stab' at it but the truth be..
You 'cut the crap' Homer never thought you'd Odd-essy in the movie!
Your fond of me truely! Its cuase Im fuckin sick, he needs to get tougher quick!
So you gave your eyebrows a fade, and glued the rest to your upper lip!
You fuckin prick...

keyed for ya....

[Wreckless]

ok this was a good battle

lemme break this shit down, and then ill give a review on both's drops

[Wreckless]

aight, aside from the ugly snapshot..i need a hood answer
...why do you always wanna do pic battles when your not any good at 'em?

-answer and at em don't rhyme at all, not even close man

..ya claim to sell drugs, judging the pic, ya ain't frightening better
.yea you got bags of coke...in a shoppin cart, on ya way to the recycling center

-not bad, ok wordplay

writing is somethin ya gotta stop so you best to fear
..he wears spikes to symbolize whats on the walls closing in on his text career

-nice punch


.he think he looks fly but the phenomenal truth?
...his neck has enough in creases to give America an economical boost

-sick one, second line was ill

YOUR FUCKIN' UGLY, enough to where i don't wanna spare rappers
...but yo, i'm just Saiyan...like the show you modeled ya hair after

-aight, coulda came alil harder but still attacked him

if you don't get how nasty you look then youse a slow bastard
..sure, he does his thing...i just wish his 'thing' was a brush n some ProActiv

-once again this is a scramble to let bastard and activ rhyme, i can see if some dude had a heavy heavy brogue, but it still wouldnt rhyme, not bad besides that tho

n people aren't afraid of Amish if he yells n stains 'em
...but if he raises his voice like he does his brows...i can't say i blame them

-good ending




vs




Every battle I proved you cant rock a flow, to me you're not an obstacle
This was the LAST STRAW! It doesnt mean SUCK as much as possible

-ok, the straw and suck thing was nice, but had nothing to do with his pic? off topic

Winning isnt probable GROUPIE! I cut better with a rough temper
Your face makes me sick! mine inspires you to write a love letter

-nice multi in the first line, good opposite on the second

Above clever! Got your face puzzled like a Rubix Cube, its no wonder freind...
After I've seen your true colors, I just want to fuck it up again!

-first line had good punches to it, second line i had to read again to get but was nice and went in alil deeper

Your luck is fuckin slim! Call a doctor! Or a savior with the same behavior
I can see the white head....clearly your nose is undergoing labor!

-this was a nasty cut, nice multis in the first line, the slim and doctor shit had me crackin, and crackin on his pimple with the punch was good

This cat's a real faker, I laugh properly at this stupid wack anomaly
If thats private property... that Hill of a Zit must be a nudist ant colony!

-LOL once again, sick concept with the poking fun at the zit

Your lyrics dont bother me, you give a good 'stab' at it but the truth be..
You 'cut the crap' Homer never thought you'd Odd-essy in the movie!

-ooh must ppl won't get this line, but i do, pretty sick, along with the oddysey book concept and connectin it with the simpsons

Your fond of me truely! Its cuase Im fuckin sick, he needs to get tougher quick!
So you gave your eyebrows a fade, and glued the rest to your upper lip!
You fuckin prick...

-ahh attacked another part of his pic, the moustache, nice, came different or else the concept would of been dull


ok overall nice drops on both of yall


sureloc- you had some nice punches, and you came hard on all bars but i think you needed to add acouple more multis and maybe a wordplay here and there to mix your shit up, amish had acouple wordplays and along with some nice punches along with yours, he included acouple multis in some of those same lines with the punches so he had you even if you had a nice concept, your flow was good too, the coke line just made it as far as not goin over

amish- on some lines i felt you didnt attack his pic hard enough but you came at it good at the end, i liked how you switched up the concept, i.e. zit, mustache, even the true colors line was in there real good, your flow was excellent like always, just sometimes try to attack more of your opponents pic

on account of having more multis and wordplay, and alil bit more cleaned up flow (not too many long lines), my vote goes to:

Amishstad


good drop on boths tho, to say for the 589345895th time, get at me if u need battles voted on

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[Amishstad]

Thanks Wreck, you're a dope voter.
Not too many people break bars down on this
site. Thank you for your time.


1-0 me

uppin for votes

[chriscoble]

Okay, i'm just gonna give my opinion whether u guys count it as a vote or not. Ahmistad had a better rhyme scheme (simple vs. less simple, to me), better rhymes, came harder, AND had better wordplay. Not to hate but Ahmistad's shit was just better, period.

[Amishstad]

Votes!!