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Offical Rules: -20 lines -First to 5 -Or 3-0 for KO -No Due date -Post ASAP! -Anyone can vote NO FREEPOSTING Amishstad ![]() Area51 ![]()
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how about a Holocaust in Space?
Last edited by Area51; 07-26-2007 at 05:46 PM.. |
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make it 12 man, just to get this over with..
![]() WoW.. I thought G looked the gayest of all, now i find my opinon debated.. Nah you second gayest, But that still leaves you under-Rated Ugly is an understatement,your ache has skin cracked and concave so many buried black heads they resemble mass graves of black slaves Neck lines are played, so forget punches this kid's on some other ish.. Area keeps em handy, in case he wants to catch another fish! Is that acne skin? or somone nab a squid? man you got an ugly face It looks like a vanilla fullel cake got oven baked with stomache waste!! That dirty shirt looks its been sprayed yellow with a can of rusto Or a hand-me-down from when people used to hunt gold during the Dust Bowl! You're poor so why bother with text? you could be livin in tents Quit battling and go collect more bottles so you can pay your own rent 12. |
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![]() what happened to that huge ass picture you had up before? no really, what happened to it? I know you still have it oh I get it, you got a shrinking image that perfectly mimics your talent you learn somethin everyday, my IQ just got raised a pair cuz this is the first time I've EVER seen an Amish struggle to grow facial hair I'ma just get to the point, I don't mean to be so blatant bitch.. but that nose is so monstrous even your eyebrow's tryin to escape from it you can't win kid, in this and any battle you'll be deaded ho cuz that eyebrow of yours is the only elevate line you will EVER show we both got knocks on our shit, but you'll still get wrecked dude cuz I was wasted off my ass in my pic.. but you don't have an excuse ight.. you got the black hair, black shirt, add lookin crazy to the list.. glasses.. fuckin emo kid.. why don't you finish it off 'n put a razor to your wrist
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how about a Holocaust in Space?
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Join Date: Nov 2006
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alright here it is, good battle/drop to both of yall:
amishstad I thought G looked the gayest of all, now i find my opinon debated.. Nah you second gayest, But that still leaves you under-Rated -eh ok start, multi in second line was nice Ugly is an understatement,your ache has skin cracked and concave so many buried black heads they resemble mass graves of black slaves -sick concept with this, nice punch and real good multis, best bar Neck lines are played, so forget punches this kid's on some other ish.. Area keeps em handy, in case he wants to catch another fish! -eh the multis in this were ok, the punches were nice tho, stuck to the subject Is that acne skin? or somone nab a squid? man you got an ugly face It looks like a vanilla fullel cake got oven baked with stomache waste!! -u mean funnel cake? not bad, multi in the second bar was nice, nice keepin the same concept with the face comments/pimples That dirty shirt looks its been sprayed yellow with a can of rusto Or a hand-me-down from when people used to hunt gold during the Dust Bowl! -another sick concept, nice word play and multis You're poor so why bother with text? you could be livin in tents Quit battling and go collect more bottles so you can pay your own rent -didnt really have to do with the pic at all but regardless, nice short and sweet ending vs Area51 what happened to that huge ass picture you had up before? ( )no really, what happened to it? I know you still have it oh I get it, you got a shrinking image that perfectly mimics your talent -have it/talent dont really rhyme, the last syllable does but barely, ok start you learn somethin everyday, my IQ just got raised a pair cuz this is the first time I've EVER seen an Amish struggle to grow facial hair -first line fit the second but wasnt really attacking him, nice punch tho I'ma just get to the point, I don't mean to be so blatant bitch.. but that nose is so monstrous even your eyebrow's tryin to escape from it -real nice multi you can't win kid, in this and any battle you'll be deaded ho cuz that eyebrow of yours is the only elevate line you will EVER show -some filler in this like acouple other of your bars, aight bar we both got knocks on our shit, but you'll still get wrecked dude cuz I was wasted off my ass in my pic.. but you don't have an excuse -i was crackin up at the second line at this, another ok line, nice ending to the 2nd line ight.. you got the black hair, black shirt, add lookin crazy to the list.. glasses.. fuckin emo kid.. why don't you finish it off 'n put a razor to your wrist -best bar of yours in this battle, nice ending, alot to it but nice multis overall amish came harder on punches, and area did nice with the multis, in dissing the pic, sureloc kept it with his face but broadened the material, while area poked fun at amish' eyebrows, i feel you could of dissed/described in a bad way, his eyebrows more, u didnt go hard enough when you were sticking to that part of his pic to diss, no hate on either of yall, just sayin this is close but on account of area's filler and amish coming harder on his shit/having nicer punches my vote: amishstad |
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Capo
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thanks man..
yea since i cant edit now yes i did mean *Funnel cake*** my fault for the typo uppin |
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Join Date: Aug 2007
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I thought G looked the gayest of all, now i find my opinon debated..
Nah you second gayest, But that still leaves you under-Rated 1/5 Ugly is an understatement,your ache has skin cracked and concave so many buried black heads they resemble mass graves of black slaves Ouch .. 4/5 Neck lines are played, so forget punches this kid's on some other ish.. Area keeps em handy, in case he wants to catch another fish! 3/5 Lawl Is that acne skin? or somone nab a squid? man you got an ugly face It looks like a vanilla fullel cake got oven baked with stomache waste!! 1/5 That dirty shirt looks its been sprayed yellow with a can of rusto Or a hand-me-down from when people used to hunt gold during the Dust Bowl! 1/5 You're poor so why bother with text? you could be livin in tents Quit battling and go collect more bottles so you can pay your own rent 1/5 11/30 __________________________________________________ ______________ no really, what happened to it? I know you still have it oh I get it, you got a shrinking image that perfectly mimics your talent 1/5 you learn somethin everyday, my IQ just got raised a pair cuz this is the first time I've EVER seen an Amish struggle to grow facial hair 3/5 Ha I'ma just get to the point, I don't mean to be so blatant bitch.. but that nose is so monstrous even your eyebrow's tryin to escape from it 3/5 Ha!! you can't win kid, in this and any battle you'll be deaded ho cuz that eyebrow of yours is the only elevate line you will EVER show 4/5 Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha we both got knocks on our shit, but you'll still get wrecked dude cuz I was wasted off my ass in my pic.. but you don't have an excuse 1/5 ight.. you got the black hair, black shirt, add lookin crazy to the list.. glasses.. fuckin emo kid.. why don't you finish it off 'n put a razor to your wrist 1/5 13/30 Area 51 Gets My Vote |
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Ugly is an understatement,your ache has skin cracked and concave
so many buried black heads they resemble mass graves of black slaves That dirty shirt looks its been sprayed yellow with a can of rusto Or a hand-me-down from when people used to hunt gold during the Dust Bowl! VS. no really, what happened to it? I know you still have it oh I get it, you got a shrinking image that perfectly mimics your talent you learn somethin everyday, my IQ just got raised a pair cuz this is the first time I've EVER seen an Amish struggle to grow facial hair I'ma just get to the point, I don't mean to be so blatant bitch.. but that nose is so monstrous even your eyebrow's tryin to escape from it you can't win kid, in this and any battle you'll be deaded ho cuz that eyebrow of yours is the only elevate line you will EVER show we both got knocks on our shit, but you'll still get wrecked dude cuz I was wasted off my ass in my pic.. but you don't have an excuse Tha only thing I didnt like from Area was his closer everything else was solid as fuck. Amishstad had alot of filler in his drop. I didnt see too many hard hittin punches. Area got this one EZ. Vote: Area |
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Capo
Join Date: Nov 2006
Location: Miami,Fl
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amishstad: you started of pretty slow, but the last couple lines were hard
Area51: you were consistant through the whole thing and got your point across, including a few good punchlines Area51 GMV
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