![]() |
|
|
#1 (permalink) |
|
Rookie
Join Date: Jan 2007
Posts: 17
![]() |
Rules:
Anything goes 12-20 Bars |
|
|
| Sponsored Links |
|
|
#2 (permalink) |
|
Rookie
Join Date: Jan 2007
Posts: 17
![]() |
FYI--3-0 is Knockout, 4-0 Technical Knockout
|
|
|
|
|
#3 (permalink) |
|
Rookie
Join Date: Jan 2007
Posts: 17
![]() |
I’m a ruthless, harbinger of death, prepare to feel unimaginable anguish and pain
Unload 12 rounds to your body, like two boxers fighting to achieve championship fame I’m a social conscious, multifaceted individual, my lyrical bars are greater You never had a chance, like incarcerated Jews in Nazis’ Auschwitz gas chamber/ Like ingesting ecstasy pills, my words are altering your perception of reality Counteracting my lyrical barrage is unfeasible, like reversing the effects of gravity The exemplification of my intelligence rouses feelings of hatred and greed You’re struggling in lyricism, like an Autistic child trying to learn how to read A deranged, “below the belt buckle” haggler, swallowing a mouthful of “seeds” (Ewe…) I’m pilfering through your leather wallet, taking your money like a possessed vending machine Expensive, “armor piercing” Tungsten bullets shattering your femur and rib cage The Grudge’s curse haunts my pen, expressing my unpredictable rage/ I'm like Yagami Light (Death Note) writing murderous lines on the page The crowd’s dissatisfied, they want to see your dead body on stage Understand the contextual information before you criticize my line… Like a death row inmate, you’ll be contemplating about your downfall…in the entirety of your TIME Last edited by enforcer00; 12-14-2007 at 12:43 AM.. |
|
|
|
|
#4 (permalink) |
|
Rap GodFather
|
i thought 3-0 was a k.o and 4-1 is a t.k.o
this sounds fishy tho,ur a newbie and u came outta no where pm'ing me to battle ya,and within like 10 mins u already got a 16,iono bout this one b,u scaley over there
__________________
RIP GRANDPA,FOREVER ![]() |
|
|
|
|
#5 (permalink) |
|
Rookie
Join Date: Jan 2007
Posts: 17
![]() |
Actually, this took me twenty minutes, and I battled before with other people
Check: Bloody Thirsty "Anyone Wants to An Challenge" and "Diss tha Rapper above U" sections. Trust me, there's nothing fishy on this side of the pond. Besides, I've been a member for years, I just replied several times. Now, I would understand if you're nervous or scared to battle. I would, heh.. Last edited by enforcer00; 12-13-2007 at 10:17 PM.. |
|
|
|
|
#6 (permalink) |
|
Rap GodFather
|
lol nigga im in the studio right now,but umm yea im a respond in a few cuz im leaving,gud ish tho..it's jus fishy the way u approached the situation but me? scared? neva ![]()
__________________
RIP GRANDPA,FOREVER ![]() |
|
|
|
|
#7 (permalink) |
|
Rap GodFather
|
fuck it,im a drop now
__________________
RIP GRANDPA,FOREVER ![]() |
|
|
|
|
#8 (permalink) |
|
Rap GodFather
|
*Listens to my boy Flip-Lock In as i write my verse*
![]() zSHARE - lock in.mp3 *Takes off head phones* *cracks fingers and begins* Listen... my critique is the worse....with them bars who are you thinking you hurt? for christ sakes, i updated a song link in my verse-- [FLIP!!] the ambassador of this cage shit i can see it's a long night, you far right! you beating me is senseless like trying to WASH ICE!-- you thought hard right? you came in this fight thinking u flexing, only thing is you couldnt 'play V' if u downloaded my audio in the SINGLES section-- i mingle with TEXANS no drinks but we playing the bar, so when we 'throw bullets',you wont see any appeareance of DAVE CARR ya wife never taking days off, your shorty love's her 'head' on the 'hard-wood',no comparison to T.J FORD-- so there wasnt a problem when i RAPPED-TO-HA,(RAPTORS) he can stick up an APPLE STORE,and wouldnt be able to put the MAC. to em-- far as betting on you? ya man's no it's a slaughter, so he wouldnt even put 50 on you with a supply of 'vitamin water'-- and ya bars i found discusting.... ya name explains it all,cuz ENFORCER 00 wont AMOUNT TO NOTHING!! *puts back on the head phones* ![]()
__________________
RIP GRANDPA,FOREVER ![]() |
|
|
![]() |
| Thread Tools | |
| Display Modes | |
|
|