WyL vs. Grizzjwill

[WyL]

barz: no limit... jus not too long
Judging: 3-0 KO.... 4-1 TKO
iight letz go

[WyL]

you stand still//I made moves this man real// how you gonna expect GRIZZ to J "WyL"// i cant lose at this thing// i knew the ropes for a good while... cuz i used to converse with the ring// everything i spit is direct shit// i use literature to take me to the "[i]write[i]" direction// and ima ride like a old western and if i fall off im comin right back like mirror reflection// look Grizzy hoe// u on ur grizzy? no!! you cudnt spend a dime evn on a video// its either u kill or you rhyme// loreal on your head.... but you still couldnt make up your mind// ok grizz you should prepare for the worst// dont eva lemme here any of my barz in your verse

[grizzjwill]

My flow nasty like semen drippin from shit stained assess/Im so hood my college is paid from trap house stashes/A reference you cant relate to you from the middle classes/You couldnt see me in this rap shit with proffesor Farnsworth glasses(futurama)/No tactics none needed lyrics just that heated/This shits nothing to me it comes natural like breathing/Wyl lacks style so hes bitin off the real rappers/Deepthroatin the industry like supahead and the porn actors/I done killed em on every bar so enoughs enough/You should lay your pen down and retire cause your outta luck

[WyL]

get the votes goin...
uppin
come on ppl

[Varcity]

ok lets see....

both need better structuring on the rap to begin wit...it's hard to understand them,it's like run-on sentences with a / & // following it feel me..other than that,

punchlines- wyl (both had em but i felt wyl's better)
metaphors- wyl
flow- both was hard to grasp
enjoyment- it was ok on both sides,needs work

im a give this one to WYL although both need elevation,judging from the posts i see yall knew but ,jus elevate..far as the battle,it seems like wyl wanted it more..his lines made more sense..Grizz,lines like "My flow nasty like semen drippin from shit stained assess/Im so hood my college is paid from trap house stashes/" was pretty elementary and wack..no offense but it seems like u just found anything to say..spend more time on ya rhymes..

vote: WYL

[WyL]

we need more votes ya'll

[Tyme Lyne]

co-sign on the run on sentences man got -dizammmm ...ya'll gotta put that shyt on a straight bolt so peeps can understand em ...word .

Feel this though . ...

Both of ya'll need work ...mad potential but in need of work . WYL you had more consitency in ya flow , while Grizz threw out anything ...and it was random as hell .
Try working on ya execution ...and a solid concept in th attacks .

Vote WYL .

[WyL]

thats 2-0... can we get any more votes

[G-Rated]

I vote WyL.. but I know your both of the battlers

u cant have 2 accounts...