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crisus · 01-06-2008, 01:20 AM

im chillin
but the freestyles be thrillin
ya bitches that are all over my dick
come at my throat and youll take a fuckin clip
dont fuckin slip
cuz thats when you get it
i watchin ya girl strip
the sh ridin is my dick
i know you mad
dont fel bad
iim still smokin that hash

you cant get high wit me
i hate you cant you see
im a grimy muthafucka
yall niggas aint nuttin but suckas
so if you realy wanna se was up
come get the real artist and get punched in the gut

STUNNAMAN7 · 01-07-2008, 09:20 PM

nigga where da fuck u come from
u da type of dum ass to go to war wit one gun
and ill bring it to any of u bitch niggaz who want sum
im eatin stakes and u hustlin for a crumb
u a chump i could pitcha u
on the computer typin shit u wished u could do
take my advice son and pick anotha hobby
ill take ya life and ya ice before u even think 2 rob me
yea and ya gangsta talk kinda make me chuckle
u couldnt go one nite in da life of a nigga who hustle
ill have u at gun point and jack ya shoes then laugh at yo ass and sell em back to you

i spit crack bitch

Tyme Lyne · 01-08-2008, 01:47 AM

wrong section ...

But Killa Steve ...nice work on a decent and solid verse it was nice, execution could have been worked on but it's all good ...

Crisus you need to work on finding your flow ...and that stop and pause point wont happening ..

Vote killa steve .

Soldja · 01-08-2008, 05:37 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by crisus

im chillin
but the freestyles be thrillin
ya bitches that are all over my dick
come at my throat and youll take a fuckin clip
dont fuckin slip
cuz thats when you get it
i watchin ya girl strip
the sh ridin is my dick
i know you mad
dont fel bad
iim still smokin that hash

you cant get high wit me
i hate you cant you see
im a grimy muthafucka
yall niggas aint nuttin but suckas
so if you realy wanna se was up
come get the real artist and get punched in the gut

Nothing was structured or connecting at all really. Very sloppy honestly.

DaChiefF · 01-08-2008, 10:36 AM

i agree Steve Flamed ur ass

crisus · 01-08-2008, 12:50 PM

yo dat was some wack shit im not realy a battle artist all i do is make beats lol i felt like puttin some stupid shit but im going to come back wit some new shit soon

STUNNAMAN7 · 01-08-2008, 07:19 PM

mine was a free sample of tha shit i be cookin i just came cuz this was the first thread i saw n i waz bored

01-06-2008, 01:20 AM	#1 (permalink)
crisus Rookie Join Date: Dec 2007 Posts: 8	come get me bitches im chillin but the freestyles be thrillin ya bitches that are all over my dick come at my throat and youll take a fuckin clip dont fuckin slip cuz thats when you get it i watchin ya girl strip the sh ridin is my dick i know you mad dont fel bad iim still smokin that hash you cant get high wit me i hate you cant you see im a grimy muthafucka yall niggas aint nuttin but suckas so if you realy wanna se was up come get the real artist and get punched in the gut

01-07-2008, 09:20 PM	#2 (permalink)
STUNNAMAN7 Underboss Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: NEW ORLEANS{Back On Da Block} Posts: 1,504	nigga where da fuck u come from u da type of dum ass to go to war wit one gun and ill bring it to any of u bitch niggaz who want sum im eatin stakes and u hustlin for a crumb u a chump i could pitcha u on the computer typin shit u wished u could do take my advice son and pick anotha hobby ill take ya life and ya ice before u even think 2 rob me yea and ya gangsta talk kinda make me chuckle u couldnt go one nite in da life of a nigga who hustle ill have u at gun point and jack ya shoes then laugh at yo ass and sell em back to you i spit crack bitch __________________

01-08-2008, 01:47 AM	#3 (permalink)
Tyme Lyne Rap GodFather Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Still in VA ...Stressed out like a Mutha FUcka ! Posts: 4,683	wrong section ... But Killa Steve ...nice work on a decent and solid verse it was nice, execution could have been worked on but it's all good ... Crisus you need to work on finding your flow ...and that stop and pause point wont happening .. Vote killa steve . __________________ Some Things Change..... www.ripthemic.org

01-08-2008, 07:19 PM	#7 (permalink)
STUNNAMAN7 Underboss Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: NEW ORLEANS{Back On Da Block} Posts: 1,504	mine was a free sample of tha shit i be cookin i just came cuz this was the first thread i saw n i waz bored __________________

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01-08-2008, 10:36 AM	#5 (permalink)
DaChiefF Criminal Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Norway Posts: 50	i agree Steve Flamed ur ass

01-08-2008, 12:50 PM	#6 (permalink)
crisus Rookie Join Date: Dec 2007 Posts: 8	yo dat was some wack shit im not realy a battle artist all i do is make beats lol i felt like puttin some stupid shit but im going to come back wit some new shit soon