Killa Steve VS. Tyme Lyne

[STUNNAMAN7]

anything between 8 to 16 lines do ya thing kid

[Tyme Lyne]

aight verse been ready befo' this shyt dropped in the cage ...LOL

im in a attack mode fo' this rookie Killa steve,
imma come from all angles , like five chambers filled with killa bees,
it's triumph , when i finna merk this dude,
in other RGF News , this anchorman probably a virgin too ,
why you trying to hide ya inner nerd?
those suspenders got bling attached tryin' to attracts them birds ?
dawg u just an attraction herb, imma reverb,
re-work my style, and imma reverse on ya words,
my fatal guild aint hip to yo stamina field,
im hot like mims , but you aint built on iron and will ,
dawg it dont phase me , i aint scared to battle a dude,
stratagies alliancin' in feuds , i can bring that attitude,
a HOE I am not the type of chick, i thought you should know that Last,
But Ill be HIGHLY OPTED to EMBRACE my foot up in yo ASS...

Gone .....

[STUNNAMAN7]

aight i like that but let me show u how its done where im from

u should be glad im addressin u
i aint testin u
fuck protection that choppa gon show u wat vest could do
n im gettin the best of u boo
the rest of u dudes could get it to
but fuck i think its time dat i get into
murderin u on dis freestyle shit
one wild trick n she gon be all ova da dick
i should be slapped for the wild shit dat i done did
but yo ass should be on bangbros the way u swallowed my kids
im foolish... but ill show u how to do this
i treat the work like a girl ass i just want u to move it
and if this was real yo disses would be strictly subliminal
how da fuck ima rookie
if my shit say criminal

[Tyme Lyne]

lol ...BUmpin' for VOTES !!!

Please VOTES !!

PLEASE !!!!!!!! LOL .

[DaChiefF]

i liked steves better. But none really impress didnt really make much sense

[G-Rated]

im goin wit Liyah on this shit.. better scheme, better verse..period


vote: Liyah

[Contraversy]

Tyme Lyne:
im in a attack mode fo' this rookie Killa steve,
imma come from all angles , like five chambers filled with killa bees,

I liked the opener and from there on you had a balanced attack not really personal but you had material to compensate. Flowed better plus vocab and the trying to hide the inner nerd shit was funny. A quick key style that took care of business.

Killa Steve:
and if this was real yo disses would be strictly subliminal
how da fuck ima rookie
if my shit say criminal.... Was relevant but it shouldn't have been a closer though

This was a quickie aswell and just too basic to really hurt Tyme. Some more wit and aggression would've helped a lot, don't just think an arrogant swagger will carry you through the type of disses you need to have. Just mix the elements together and you got a good spit it just needs a lyrical tune-up ya know.

Vote: Tyme Lyne

[Tyme Lyne]

dayum peoples ....2-1 my way Bumpin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[B Snide]

Tyme Lyne
a HOE I am not the type of chick, i thought you should know that Last,
But Ill be HIGHLY OPTED to EMBRACE my foot up in yo ASS...

~vs~

Killa Steve
u should be glad im addressin u
i aint testin u
fuck protection that choppa gon show u wat vest could do


This battle was pretty wack, I mean, Tyme Lyne, I liked your opener and your ending, but the shit in betwee was just like you passing time to get to the end, it wasnt very good... Killa Steve, your structure is HORRIBLE kid, it looked like you wrote that shit as it popped into your headm, this is text you have to give your shit some thought... You were more defending yourself from her attacks more than actually battling her...

My Vote: Tyme Lyne


Question: Why didnt yall make a poll?

[Tyme Lyne]

Of course C-Joe . That's all he gonna get . Anyways 3-1 My way ....BUMPIN'!!!