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Old 01-17-2008, 11:36 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Old 01-20-2008, 12:56 AM   #2 (permalink)
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To each it's own , I aint worried bout the stock to his Bonz,
im ready to cash him in , then once again it's on....
verbalization , dawg im in that emacipation,
im independent , this dude fuckin' wit that republic education,
like the whole works in an operation,
imma let this DUMBO drop , "woop dere it iz" wit his pupils diolatin',
BoNz was a street Gangsta , one ? You are not,
close to being hard ...is that errection , and that's all you got,
visuals aint syncronizin' , i know you plottin and schemin',
it aint tag , u done teamin' up ,wit mutha fuckas who be hoe fiendin' ,
man ...you just like any other kat i battled in the past,
who idolizes commercializm , and try to put those vets on blast .

NEXT !!!!!!!!!!
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Old 01-24-2008, 12:47 PM   #3 (permalink)
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now to the "TOPIC IN MIND" now Tyme is "FLOPPIN HER RHYMES"
puttin ya *dildo in the holes halfway thru a golf course* is the only way u "~COCKIN~ THE NINES"

im realer and i aint even tryin, dog ya "TEXTS WEAK", my advice: ya "BEST CEASE"
cuz u couldnt win if u time traveled to steal a verse i'd write "NEXT WEEK"

u gettin smoked like a "SPLIFF OF THE BUDDHA" when i spit "CLIPS FROM THE RUGERS"
congratulations bitch.. ya rhymes is the stupidest shit i've heard since is it "CHICKEN OR TUNA?"

after this u're "GONNA NEED APOLOGIES" rhymes is like "SAUNA STEAM, IT'S HOT YA SEE"
these "HOLLOWS G, WILL POP AT THEE" cuz u couldnt ~*stomach me*~ even if u "SWALLOWED SEEDS MY COCK RELEASED"

fall back Sweetie, cuz ur whole "SET'S RETARDED", you dealin wit the "BEST OF SARGEANTS"
who could have two pumps to ya chest like a homemade "BREAST ENLARGEMENT"

i mean really my skills "BLESS THIS BASTARD" and u'll get split wit "WEAPONS AFTER"
cuz i'll leave ya ass *'M-I-A'* like an instant "MESSAGE BACKWARDS"

tyme line u whack and as far as ya style goes, "PEEP GAME AND SPIT IT DIFFERENT"
Cuz i'll do like Cassidy.. i'll throw ya tape in the trash wit "FREEWAY AND BRENDAS INFANT"

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Old 01-25-2008, 05:05 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Liyah
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To each it's own , I aint worried bout the stock to his Bonz,
im ready to cash him in , then once again it's on....
verbalization , dawg im in that emacipation,
im independent , this dude fuckin' wit that republic education,
like the whole works in an operation,
imma let this DUMBO drop , "woop dere it iz" wit his pupils diolatin',
BoNz was a street Gangsta , one ? You are not,
close to being hard ...is that errection , and that's all you got,
visuals aint syncronizin' , i know you plottin and schemin',
it aint tag , u done teamin' up ,wit mutha fuckas who be hoe fiendin' ,
man ...you just like any other kat i battled in the past,
who idolizes commercializm , and try to put those vets on blast
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Decent verse...A little dissapointed cause Tyme aint have no hard hitting punches and lacked multis.......As usual Tyme is witty,aggressive and funny with her verse!


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now to the "TOPIC IN MIND" now Tyme is "FLOPPIN HER RHYMES"
puttin ya *dildo in the holes halfway thru a golf course* is the only way u "~COCKIN~ THE NINES"

im realer and i aint even tryin, dog ya "TEXTS WEAK", my advice: ya "BEST CEASE"
cuz u couldnt win if u time traveled to steal a verse i'd write "NEXT WEEK"

u gettin smoked like a "SPLIFF OF THE BUDDHA" when i spit "CLIPS FROM THE RUGERS"
congratulations bitch.. ya rhymes is the stupidest shit i've heard since is it "CHICKEN OR TUNA?"

after this u're "GONNA NEED APOLOGIES" rhymes is like "SAUNA STEAM, IT'S HOT YA SEE"
these "HOLLOWS G, WILL POP AT THEE" cuz u couldnt ~*stomach me*~ even if u "SWALLOWED SEEDS MY COCK RELEASED"

fall back Sweetie, cuz ur whole "SET'S RETARDED", you dealin wit the "BEST OF SARGEANTS"
who could have two pumps to ya chest like a homemade "BREAST ENLARGEMENT"

i mean really my skills "BLESS THIS BASTARD" and u'll get split wit "WEAPONS AFTER"
cuz i'll leave ya ass *'M-I-A'* like an instant "MESSAGE BACKWARDS"

tyme line u whack and as far as ya style goes, "PEEP GAME AND SPIT IT DIFFERENT"
Cuz i'll do like Cassidy.. i'll throw ya tape in the trash wit "FREEWAY AND BRENDAS INFANT"

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This verse wasn't "Opponent Specific" at all. I kinda think its damn near cheating when you just use pre-written shit for a new battle. But I ain't got NO proof!!! Overall this verse was consistent with punches...the classic "Fabolous" type flow!!

Overall: B0nz verse was just more lyrical and had plenty of punches. Liyah lacked the punches and lyricism but came with wit and humor.

My vote: B0nz.......Just had a more entertaining verse IMO!!
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Tyme:
Well honestly this is the only bad verse I've seen from you. It was attempted lyricism wit lacking punches at best. I mean the flow was on point as usual but I think you wrote this a little too fast. Even if you used the constant name-calling routine it would've hit harder than the stuff you had here.

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Your flow was up and down cuz some stuff could've been shortened up a bit. The second half of the verse was more hard hitting and lyrical than the 1st half. The chicken or tuna line did cause a chuckle though. The MIA line I've heard before but other than that you attempted to be more aggressive which took it for me.

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To each it's own , I aint worried bout the stock to his Bonz,
im ready to cash him in , then once again it's on....
verbalization , dawg im in that emacipation,
im independent , this dude fuckin' wit that republic education,
like the whole works in an operation,
imma let this DUMBO drop , "woop dere it iz" wit his pupils diolatin',
BoNz was a street Gangsta , one ? You are not,
close to being hard ...is that errection , and that's all you got,
visuals aint syncronizin' , i know you plottin and schemin',
it aint tag , u done teamin' up ,wit mutha fuckas who be hoe fiendin' ,
man ...you just like any other kat i battled in the past,
who idolizes commercializm , and try to put those vets on blast .

NEXT !!!!!!!!!!
No punchlines.. but you usually bring solid disses to ya verses but this one aint have that.. seem like you kinda slacked off a bit here.. lyricism wasnt hittin like before... iono i wasnt really feelin ya verse...

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now to the "TOPIC IN MIND" now Tyme is "FLOPPIN HER RHYMES"
puttin ya *dildo in the holes halfway thru a golf course* is the only way u "~COCKIN~ THE NINES"

im realer and i aint even tryin, dog ya "TEXTS WEAK", my advice: ya "BEST CEASE"
cuz u couldnt win if u time traveled to steal a verse i'd write "NEXT WEEK"

u gettin smoked like a "SPLIFF OF THE BUDDHA" when i spit "CLIPS FROM THE RUGERS"
congratulations bitch.. ya rhymes is the stupidest shit i've heard since is it "CHICKEN OR TUNA?"

after this u're "GONNA NEED APOLOGIES" rhymes is like "SAUNA STEAM, IT'S HOT YA SEE"
these "HOLLOWS G, WILL POP AT THEE" cuz u couldnt ~*stomach me*~ even if u "SWALLOWED SEEDS MY COCK RELEASED"

fall back Sweetie, cuz ur whole "SET'S RETARDED", you dealin wit the "BEST OF SARGEANTS"
who could have two pumps to ya chest like a homemade "BREAST ENLARGEMENT"

i mean really my skills "BLESS THIS BASTARD" and u'll get split wit "WEAPONS AFTER"
cuz i'll leave ya ass *'M-I-A'* like an instant "MESSAGE BACKWARDS"

tyme line u whack and as far as ya style goes, "PEEP GAME AND SPIT IT DIFFERENT"
Cuz i'll do like Cassidy.. i'll throw ya tape in the trash wit "FREEWAY AND BRENDAS INFANT"

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This shit was too corny.. im bein serious. yea you got tha punchlines but all of em were weak.. none of 'em were witty & tha content was just -type ignorant, the multies did more for you verse than ya punches kuz most of em were 98 style PLAYED.. shit was just too corny to me... esp. that MIA shit, any kind of golf punches BEEN played, chicken or tuna shit was filler & just weak, steal a verse/next week shit BEEN played, stomach me --CORNY, pump/breast enlargement-been done before, uhh closer..no siRRRR... but all-in-all you still won kuz atleast you had punches & multies, wasnt much to beat but its obvious you dug deep into ya archives & pulled this one out.. shit just wasnt fresh or direct...

vote: bonz
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