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Old 02-10-2008, 03:26 PM   #1 (permalink)
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go 10 bars..
Verse due by tmr 12 night.
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Old 02-10-2008, 09:15 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Old 02-11-2008, 07:37 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Check my verse will be upp by 10
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Old 02-11-2008, 08:39 PM   #4 (permalink)
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No.... Like practice bullshit.


NawnCentz, Am I timid? With the bars he spillin.
Thats a joke, just to look hard he made his picture say villian.
And that record? Honestly to a real mc, thats soft.
Its probably the ten times and 5 misses you tryed to jack off.
But ye I researched, how you write stupid shit and rehearse.
How are you gonna say Please nigguh, when you wrote a weak verse.
But if you want multis, I'll call-the-scene, Curtains close all-the-screens.
Your from brooklyn? Then you being a good lyricist, it was All-A-Dream.
Im like a florist, clean this bitch up,Im a monster hes a tyrannosourus.
Non Sense? Either your illiterate or you bought your self a bad thesaraus.
I know your on the dull side, Cause in rhymes? Your bulb aint sparkin'
Your lines make less sense than a serious interview with 50 cent talkin'
To commemorate for his lies, He gets guys, too boost for him.
And generate up some flies, to set size, viagra gives the juice for him.
No surprise, Hes probaly got boost mobile, And you know hes not even fat.
But when it comes to sex? His girls probably asking his dick "Where you at".
No homo, but You gotta expose how his penis is so fimble.
You know thats him tryna find his dick? ... Yeah, thats the RGF symbol.
Wait, since your not on an intelligence level, I should Mak3z it Fai9r3r.
C0L0R M1 FACE WHITE, Make a shit verse... And do 50 spelling errors....
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Old 02-15-2008, 07:38 PM   #6 (permalink)
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You didnt catch the deadline..
Are you gonna drop, Ill let it slide ... are you gonna drop or should someone close this
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But if you want multis, I'll call-the-scene, Curtains close all-the-screens.
Your from brooklyn? Then you being a good lyricist, it was All-A-Dream.
thats was actually a pretty dope personal there.
and the closer as well. too bad he no showed.
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propz donzy
dat was raw
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Decent verse, not the best I've seen, but decent. You gotta work on flow, and transitions.
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