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virginiaking · 03-18-2008, 05:39 PM

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Originally Posted by JustBlaze3

no offense but both of u sucked, cant rap both of u..

i gotta go with VK his shit just sounded better, more entertaining, ur flow was wayy off

IMO IMO
(no Ofense)

mine was a freestyle fuck u for carryin me but thanks for tha vote lol naw jk good look on votin..............and u trying to battle

?johNNy bLaZe? · 03-19-2008, 03:24 AM

naw, im not that lyrical... oh teah did u write it or off of the head tell the truth

virginiaking · 03-20-2008, 12:01 PM

of the head

Aspect15 · 03-24-2008, 02:06 AM

noo offence but i wont feelin ether of da shitz if i had to choose id pick DVS cuz da dude actually had a flow ya mean VK iono wat da hell u were doin u sounded like u juss started im not hatin or nuffin its juss u need a lot of practice u werent even rappin ferrel ferrel an if DVS came wit better adlibs an more prepared it woulda sound better but all in all dis was a wack battle

Varcity · 03-24-2008, 03:22 AM

young d got this....

i say young d got this because he seems like he jus flat-out wanted it more...he flowed better to his beat,even tho it was like only a minute and sum change (if that)..your acapella was gud,the only thing i wasnt feeling was the ad-libs...they were kinda off and delayed with the end of ya bars... other than that,joint was nice

ps- u aint gotta put the cereal killer whisper voice throughout the whole song my dude,i'll like to hear something more clear from ya

YOUNG DVS- the beat you chose was correct,i liked it..however,u cant let the beat be ur excuse,u gotta take control of the beat and do yo..i feel you let the beat stick out more than what u was saying..more like that was ur reliance feel me....u didnt sound like u wanted it,however it ur delivery was a lil more aggressive,with the shit u was saying,this wuld'a been a decisional battle...to keep it a hunned,it's most likely the other dude's win

virginiaking · 03-24-2008, 04:34 PM

aight let see mine was a FREESTYLE so that effects the way it goes wit the beat somewhat not excusein any of my mistakes but i see dvs got more votes go ahead give him the win but what ive failed to see one person relize is this the length of time i freestyled to the little bit of bars he wrote he had like 12 punchlines if that the min time was 1 minute and 30 seconds he talked for the majority of the beggin and rapped less then 1 minute if that jus pointin out a few things

Aspect15 · 03-24-2008, 06:30 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by virginiaking

aight let see mine was a FREESTYLE so that effects the way it goes wit the beat somewhat not excusein any of my mistakes but i see dvs got more votes go ahead give him the win but what ive failed to see one person relize is this the length of time i freestyled to the little bit of bars he wrote he had like 12 punchlines if that the min time was 1 minute and 30 seconds he talked for the majority of the beggin and rapped less then 1 minute if that jus pointin out a few things

i feel u dog but its quality not quantity

Varcity · 03-24-2008, 09:15 PM

forget all that..dont be a sore loser,u pick to do what u do...if u freestyled,o well....forget how long u spat for.it's like skool,u write an essay,it can be 10 pages long,if that uva nigga wrote 5 pages wit better detail and more information and straight to the point then he's most likely to past...

it was a cool battle,keep it at that and live life

**G-Rated** · 03-24-2008, 10:16 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by virginiaking

aight let see mine was a FREESTYLE so that effects the way it goes wit the beat somewhat not excusein any of my mistakes but i see dvs got more votes go ahead give him the win but what ive failed to see one person relize is this the length of time i freestyled to the little bit of bars he wrote he had like 12 punchlines if that the min time was 1 minute and 30 seconds he talked for the majority of the beggin and rapped less then 1 minute if that jus pointin out a few things

just take tha loss maan.. shit, i gave u props for freestylin kuz most niggas CANT n WONT put raw shit out like dat.. i mean, everybody can tell this was a free.. most niggas "freestyles" is written shit wit no hook to a jacked beat.. tha shit dont be raw.. so dont feel too bad, u had nerves to put this out even though its ass u just gotta move on work on ya weak areas... like ya delivery n flow.. shit gets better over time, you gotta take tha critique everybody gave you for what it is n work on it..

virginiaking · 03-25-2008, 02:18 PM

lol yall crazy how imma sore loser if i said give him the win already he had more votes lol i wasnt sayin anything that seemed like i was upset or whatever yall precevin,if u got a text battle and its a 16 bar min and u write 6 hot bars and the other person writes 16 bars of garbage who won that battle the person that had 6 hot lines on a 16 bar min lol thats all i was sayin i dont really care about the battle that much i was just givin my veiws on the battle like most everyone has said a loss jus shows u what areas u need to improve but beings i was sayin what i thought about the battle and didnt say anything bad about dvs or his track imma sore loser lmao

03-19-2008, 03:24 AM	#12 (permalink)
?johNNy bLaZe? Untouchable Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: caLifornia Posts: 3,943	naw, im not that lyrical... oh teah did u write it or off of the head tell the truth __________________ I'm Ready To Die without a Reasonable Doubt smoke Chronic and hit it Doggystyle before I go out Until they sign my Death Certificate It's All Eyez On Me I'm still at it, Illmatic and thats the Documentary !!!W.U.T.A.N.G. C.L.A.N. A.I.N.T. N.U.T.H.I.N. T.O. F.U.C.K. W.I.T.H.!!!

03-24-2008, 02:06 AM	#14 (permalink)
Aspect15 Outlaw Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 198	noo offence but i wont feelin ether of da shitz if i had to choose id pick DVS cuz da dude actually had a flow ya mean VK iono wat da hell u were doin u sounded like u juss started im not hatin or nuffin its juss u need a lot of practice u werent even rappin ferrel ferrel an if DVS came wit better adlibs an more prepared it woulda sound better but all in all dis was a wack battle __________________ "It's hard to be da boss cuz da stacks get heavy, makin all dis doe das why my pants stay baggy" www.myspace.com/chasestemple www.soundclick.com/aspect

03-24-2008, 03:22 AM	#15 (permalink)
Varcity Rap GodFather Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: R.I.P STACK BUNDLEZ & CAVLAR Posts: 7,276	young d got this.... i say young d got this because he seems like he jus flat-out wanted it more...he flowed better to his beat,even tho it was like only a minute and sum change (if that)..your acapella was gud,the only thing i wasnt feeling was the ad-libs...they were kinda off and delayed with the end of ya bars... other than that,joint was nice ps- u aint gotta put the cereal killer whisper voice throughout the whole song my dude,i'll like to hear something more clear from ya YOUNG DVS- the beat you chose was correct,i liked it..however,u cant let the beat be ur excuse,u gotta take control of the beat and do yo..i feel you let the beat stick out more than what u was saying..more like that was ur reliance feel me....u didnt sound like u wanted it,however it ur delivery was a lil more aggressive,with the shit u was saying,this wuld'a been a decisional battle...to keep it a hunned,it's most likely the other dude's win __________________ RIP GRANDPA,FOREVER

03-24-2008, 04:34 PM	#16 (permalink)
virginiaking Gangster Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 309	aight let see mine was a FREESTYLE so that effects the way it goes wit the beat somewhat not excusein any of my mistakes but i see dvs got more votes go ahead give him the win but what ive failed to see one person relize is this the length of time i freestyled to the little bit of bars he wrote he had like 12 punchlines if that the min time was 1 minute and 30 seconds he talked for the majority of the beggin and rapped less then 1 minute if that jus pointin out a few things Last edited by virginiaking; 03-24-2008 at 04:36 PM..

03-24-2008, 09:15 PM	#18 (permalink)
Varcity Rap GodFather Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: R.I.P STACK BUNDLEZ & CAVLAR Posts: 7,276	forget all that..dont be a sore loser,u pick to do what u do...if u freestyled,o well....forget how long u spat for.it's like skool,u write an essay,it can be 10 pages long,if that uva nigga wrote 5 pages wit better detail and more information and straight to the point then he's most likely to past... it was a cool battle,keep it at that and live life __________________ RIP GRANDPA,FOREVER

03-20-2008, 12:01 PM	#13 (permalink)
virginiaking Gangster Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 309	of the head

03-25-2008, 02:18 PM	#20 (permalink)
virginiaking Gangster Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 309	lol yall crazy how imma sore loser if i said give him the win already he had more votes lol i wasnt sayin anything that seemed like i was upset or whatever yall precevin,if u got a text battle and its a 16 bar min and u write 6 hot bars and the other person writes 16 bars of garbage who won that battle the person that had 6 hot lines on a 16 bar min lol thats all i was sayin i dont really care about the battle that much i was just givin my veiws on the battle like most everyone has said a loss jus shows u what areas u need to improve but beings i was sayin what i thought about the battle and didnt say anything bad about dvs or his track imma sore loser lmao

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