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Grimy · 04-13-2008, 03:57 PM

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Due dates
Tracks are due Sunday 11:59 PM Pacific (20th April)
Voting ends Friday 11:59 PM Pacific (25th April)

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Votes must explain clearly why you vote for the person
No dickride votes.

General Rules
No biting
No feeding
Choose a time limit when u check. First person to check gets to decide, next person just match it
No reycling.
This isn’t on themes just FYI, it’s dissin each other, choose your own beats and shit, I’m not allowing any extensions unless they’re urgent too.

JDaKidd · 04-20-2008, 11:03 PM

2nd Round Knockout
http://www.zshare.net/audio/108679094b7b0b34/

Geminiz · 04-20-2008, 11:23 PM

Good ass mothafuckin drop JDaKidd...feelin that shit

JDaKidd · 04-20-2008, 11:29 PM

good lookin homie, but for ya next post, I think you wanna drop that in the chat lol

maniak · 04-21-2008, 06:47 AM

ha ha son i might drop today if I can find time been mad busy on the real

maniak · 04-21-2008, 02:21 PM

JdaDiss
http://www.zshare.net/audio/1090046582e9a981/

sorry so short but I felt I had to drop @ least something, J regardless who wins good battle son

windyman22 · 04-21-2008, 03:39 PM

Damn this was a tough one. Im feelin both drops. J, you had some dope personals, metas, and punches, but you didnt flow to well with the beat. Your lyricism + the beat, countered that to make it a dope track. Maniak, I can tell you put that together fast... but at the same time it sounds crazy haha. Great flow and delivery, but the diss factor wasnt too great in yours. It was way to short too, and you sounded wasted to me

. The little hook you put at the end was catchy as fuck. You also had some dope personals, but not enough because of how short it was. Beat was dope, and you flowed well over it.

Flow: Maniak
Delivery: Maniak
Punches: J
Personals: J
Meta's: J
Creativity: J
Beat choice: Maniak

JDaKid gets my vote.

It might have been different if yours had been longer maniak, but i gotta give you props for throwin this together and postin last minute so we have a complete battle.

Good job to both!

**G-Rated** · 04-21-2008, 06:26 PM

real kool battle...

Jda: wrong beat choice.. flow and delivery did not ride the arrangement of the beat... you had some dope punches & meta's but your flow was playing catch up the entire track... i didnt get any strong personals, i mean you had personals but the only effective one to me was 'the author sidekick' one.. the daughter one couldve been a haymaker but the concept behind the punch created too much resistance & in the end the hit was a bit weak... i think sometimes your wanting to bring a mass amount of punches, clouds your judgment of just constructing a harsh statement.. some of your personals come across corny due to the way the punchlines are brought... you dont have to construct everything into a punchline...

AK: great beat choice.. flow & delivery was in unison with the beat..everything was synchronized... the hook was a creative additive to the track, i enjoyed that.. unlike Jda you lacked punches & meta's...Jda outshined you hands down in that department...however your personals were more definitive in deciding who had the stronger verse for me... you did a nice job of not crowding those personals with irrelevant words, instead you got straight to the point... your personals compensated for the lack of meta's & punches IMO...

I think both battlers need to find a balance of when to bring a punch & when to just make a harsh statement... Jda has the punches down but the personals seem to be ineffective because theyre overcrowded with the 'need to bring a punchline factor'... whereas AK kinda runs out of material quicker due to his inability to fill up some of the empty space with a few punches, even if you have to reiterate a personal you've already spit, you can create a punchline out of it & flip it COMPLETELY..not only would that set up the punch but it would also give the listeners a better understanding of why & where that punch came from since you've already 'gut-punched' the info to em in a harsh statement previously... that would def. add more diversity to your disses...

Flow: AK
Delivery: AK
Punches: JDa
Meta's: JDa
Personals: AK
Creativity: AK (the hook at the end was presented well & it ended the track on an entertaining note)
Beat Choice: AK

vote: AK

maniak · 04-21-2008, 07:11 PM

gotta spread but thanks for the feed and the props, and yeah like I said it was short and I wrote it pretty quick, I had a couple more things I wanted to say but didn't have enough for another verse and I had to get to sleep for work, in fact I gotta jump in the shower right now so I'll holla

JDaKidd · 04-21-2008, 08:46 PM

1-1

nice drop Maniak

04-20-2008, 11:03 PM	#2 (permalink)
JDaKidd Conartist Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 10,179	2nd Round Knockout http://www.zshare.net/audio/108679094b7b0b34/ __________________ Varcity 4 Section

04-20-2008, 11:29 PM	#4 (permalink)
JDaKidd Conartist Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 10,179	good lookin homie, but for ya next post, I think you wanna drop that in the chat lol __________________ Varcity 4 Section

04-21-2008, 03:39 PM	#7 (permalink)
windyman22 Underboss Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 1,257	Damn this was a tough one. Im feelin both drops. J, you had some dope personals, metas, and punches, but you didnt flow to well with the beat. Your lyricism + the beat, countered that to make it a dope track. Maniak, I can tell you put that together fast... but at the same time it sounds crazy haha. Great flow and delivery, but the diss factor wasnt too great in yours. It was way to short too, and you sounded wasted to me . The little hook you put at the end was catchy as fuck. You also had some dope personals, but not enough because of how short it was. Beat was dope, and you flowed well over it. Flow: Maniak Delivery: Maniak Punches: J Personals: J Meta's: J Creativity: J Beat choice: Maniak JDaKid gets my vote. It might have been different if yours had been longer maniak, but i gotta give you props for throwin this together and postin last minute so we have a complete battle. Good job to both! __________________ http://www.myspace.com/truwerdz http://www.myspace.com/aehrsha

04-21-2008, 08:46 PM	#10 (permalink)
JDaKidd Conartist Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 10,179	1-1 nice drop Maniak __________________ Varcity 4 Section

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04-20-2008, 11:23 PM	#3 (permalink)
Geminiz Criminal Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Virginia Beach, Virginia Posts: 88	Good ass mothafuckin drop JDaKidd...feelin that shit

04-21-2008, 06:26 PM	#8 (permalink)
G-Rated RGFMod Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: ★☆ Texas ☆★ Posts: 7,290	real kool battle... Jda: wrong beat choice.. flow and delivery did not ride the arrangement of the beat... you had some dope punches & meta's but your flow was playing catch up the entire track... i didnt get any strong personals, i mean you had personals but the only effective one to me was 'the author sidekick' one.. the daughter one couldve been a haymaker but the concept behind the punch created too much resistance & in the end the hit was a bit weak... i think sometimes your wanting to bring a mass amount of punches, clouds your judgment of just constructing a harsh statement.. some of your personals come across corny due to the way the punchlines are brought... you dont have to construct everything into a punchline... AK: great beat choice.. flow & delivery was in unison with the beat..everything was synchronized... the hook was a creative additive to the track, i enjoyed that.. unlike Jda you lacked punches & meta's...Jda outshined you hands down in that department...however your personals were more definitive in deciding who had the stronger verse for me... you did a nice job of not crowding those personals with irrelevant words, instead you got straight to the point... your personals compensated for the lack of meta's & punches IMO... I think both battlers need to find a balance of when to bring a punch & when to just make a harsh statement... Jda has the punches down but the personals seem to be ineffective because theyre overcrowded with the 'need to bring a punchline factor'... whereas AK kinda runs out of material quicker due to his inability to fill up some of the empty space with a few punches, even if you have to reiterate a personal you've already spit, you can create a punchline out of it & flip it COMPLETELY..not only would that set up the punch but it would also give the listeners a better understanding of why & where that punch came from since you've already 'gut-punched' the info to em in a harsh statement previously... that would def. add more diversity to your disses... Flow: AK Delivery: AK Punches: JDa Meta's: JDa Personals: AK Creativity: AK (the hook at the end was presented well & it ended the track on an entertaining note) Beat Choice: AK vote: AK