Liyah Vs. Absolute730

[Tyme Lyne]

lol house rules....

he said 16 bars but do u know that's 32 lines?...

just match my shyt dude..or drop something close to it...

no bitin or feedin...that's house rules dawg...this aint no half ass arena so u better come off propa....for dat 804....

peace. droppin in minute.

[Tyme Lyne]

bout to bring dat old thing back...
and u absolute is absolutely straight wack...
wit ya sig lookin like kardinal but aint offical wit that suit.
the brief case been snatched dude.dats what dat 730 will do.
I bet you get astma attacks often..
with those glasses ...
the focals beam through coffins..
here lies the truth....
im that 757 so what it do hoe...
cuz from king and queen ..king william and west point VA..though
everybody done fucked each other in that 804!...
it aint where you from dude..u just as lame as yo name..
absolutely positively...u look like u could be a pain...
the type to wear tight ass pants like thick focals from cooley high.
the pharcyde of the backwoods ..dat paper mill smell still passin u by..
shyt u a weaklin' talk a lot of mess but aint sayin nothin....
the words that's brought on text aint amount to yo drops be sufferin'...
3rd shift diggin in yo ass huh?
located in iraq ...well it will rack ya brains bruh...
fall back from the denial man...
for I embarrass u in the mold u stand in over again..

peace....

[Absolute730]

I got a history of fuckin’ nothing but fine dimes/
Liyah, just mad she ain’t part of my Tyme Lyne/
You callin’ me out like you can really win, you can’t be serious/
You couldn’t flow nasty if you was in the booth on ya period/
Liyah, you shouldn’t try to battle me, so just stop/
Cuz’ you couldn’t see me if I was the background on ya desktop/
You got a decent rep. around here, why ruin ya shit/
You shouldn’t even be rappin, you should be somewhere plantin tulips and shit/
Not the flower neither, plantin’ ya 2 lips on a dick/
You asked for the battle, so now ya ass gon’ learn/
Lookin like Juelz Santana with a bad perm/
I went to her page on Flickr, and I was so mad/
She was the only chick I seen on there with small tits and no ass/
You thought I was comin’ with some of that typical internet flow/
Nope, I came hard even though you a typical internet hoe/
Hollin’ “I got cam, I got pics”/
You like real life SPAM, can you please get off my dick/
No, I don’t wanna accept your Friend Request on Myspace/
No, I won’t email pics, and no you you can’t be in my Top 8/
You wanna be on my level, but ya skills is not ready/
You the black version of a rappin Ugly Betty/

[Tyme Lyne]

uppin for votes !!! come on pplz

[Absolute730]

upped 4 votes

[Miles Militis]

"Ok, I don't know any of you and this is my honest opinion of how this battle went."

Liyah

Your verse was alright, but you could improve a lot on structure. Nice nibbles here and there, but there wasn't any lines that attacked Absolute dramatically. I think if your opening gambit was a tad bit stronger you would have broke him off proper. Towards the end of your verse I felt this vibe that you just continued to write to some what meet the bar criteria... Continue attacking and don't let up and you will terminate your opponents on sight.

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Absolute

You had a somewhat solid verse. The celebrity name-play lines were holding you back, and the sexist jokes are overly played. You connected with lines that would deflate her ego such as:

You got a decent rep. around here, why ruin ya shit/
You shouldn’t even be rappin, you should be somewhere plantin tulips and shit/

I pretty much laughed at that point, but you abused the sexist jokes all throughout your flow. You should have displayed better usage of multi's and word-play. But overall you won my vote due to the aggression in your post and more harder hitting lines.

V/Absolute

[Tyme Lyne]

okay....yey lets gets some more votes...lol

1 absolute

0 Liyah...

[Kakihara]

this was a nice battle and i don't mean any disrespect to either of you cuz you both spit really well. as a general suggestion, i would say to definitely use more multis and metaphors.

Tyme Lyne - you had some nice personals and varied references. your verse built up strength as you went along. to piggyback on what miles said, your opening could be stronger. also sometimes your flow wasn't always on point. but still it was a strong verse. my favorite of you lines was the type to wear tight ass pants like thick focals from cooley high.
the pharcyde of the backwoods ..dat paper mill smell still passin u by..

Absolute- good shit. i had been trying to come up with a line like You couldn’t flow nasty if you was in the booth on ya period in another battle so that made me laugh to see you make it work. it was my personal favorite line in your verse. you came out strong from the very first line and didn't let up with the personals especially with all th stuff about the flickr page.

V/Absolute

[G-Rated]

this is alot closer than tha votes show.. Liyah started off with better dominance than absolute but midway thru the intensity started to loose ground, just didnt feel tha latter part of ya verse... now absolute.. *sighs* tha anti feminist concepts have been played to death.. every single one of them... tha flow/period shit is played.. tha picking tulips (usually done with a "in the kitchen" reference) has been played... tha tyme lyne name play, not creative-- been done before (which you shoulda known kuz face it, that is tha MOST OBVIOUS concept to come up with from tha name)--think outside tha box a bit, you got tha punches down just try to be more complex ... as far as creativity is concerned liyah was more multi-conceptual, she focused on more things to get at absolute whereas he played on tha stereotypical feminist aspect of it all.. liyah's problem was her verse wasnt structured in a format to really do any damage... but all in all that Juelz Santana shit from absolute was funny as fuck--couldve been set up a lot but but tha line itself was ....

this is tha first battle ive voted on that actually seems like a battle.. nice job to both battlers...

v/absolute

[Tyme Lyne]

good battle absolute..til next time when I polish up a lil bit...imma get back in my swing...

good job..man u got it.