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06-07-2008, 10:32 PM
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killa steve vs. mak'em Wezz(xx)
u first unlimited bars
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06-07-2008, 11:04 PM
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....NO flipping urr callout u first......ill match
3-0 winner otherwise first to 5
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06-08-2008, 01:22 AM
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Underboss
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nigga u a bitch n ill prove it
murder than flee da scene dawg dats how i do it that chromed out 9 call dat my new shit u a pussy bout 2 get douched quick bet u copy my style like another one of me im so far ahead u nigga u n front of me im heavy n da streets wit da work plus i got a choppa dat'll make u twerk i light it up den drop ashes on casket a battle wit me u wouldnt last kid i hug da block like i love it fuck it i push the 6 u push a bucket im a thug i got da right 2 do it big i got niggaz quick to clap like dey like what you did but no applause brauds wit no draws the effects of the tech is the same as the cause i broke laws in my day to make pay i get u and yo nigga merked on the same day
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06-08-2008, 11:30 PM
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8bars if u would have payed attention ud know im not a dude..ima girl..boo..u trippin
imma keyup later
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06-08-2008, 11:42 PM
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Underboss
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damn my bad ma
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06-09-2008, 01:49 PM
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Criminal
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If its a win that he's lerking, i'll vomit insurance, that a skim his purpose//
so dont think im "respecting ur appearence" when I"shave the skin off ya sir face''//(surface) you here for merkage yet, u claim killa?, but u dont display "mad skillz'' or squeeze bangers// so u couldnt "pull N upset'' ''playing tug-a-war with ya anger''// emotions a shame ya, bringing drama u just defeatin ya health mama's ahot spitta, what else// Ill easly top killa..cuz he wouldnt be "nice nigga" as obama himself// im bringing fire no less, putting this liar and his iller desires to test// tryin my best, to get punches delivered, till ive "caught killa" like homcidal arrest// theres 4....fiquring that u spit light..sence the original rules...were unlimited any who
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06-09-2008, 01:51 PM
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Criminal
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yall can vote..........thou
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06-10-2008, 04:45 PM
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v/wezz.. better verse, better lyricism.. better battle material.. just be careful wit tha wordplay, some of ya concepts were a bit stretched... when you throw far-fetched wordplay around like that it kinda makes ya punches seem corny.. but pretty good drop wezz..
killa steve.. work on incorporating concepts into ya verse.. all you had was a rhyme, no substance to it at all, just wasnt a battle verse... get some more battles in... |
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