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Join Date: Jun 2008
Posts: 21
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nice battle. lemme break it down
Miles - good shit. nice use of multis, nice flow, nice vocab. you attacked hard and it worked well. my favorite line was I hope the pain I leave you in will amplify and never deceases/ Agony and diseases seeps in, your soon to be unoccupied cadaver/You’re a challenger, I’m this adverse, and you’re not on my caliber/Shoot you up infinite times like Galaga, just to damage ya’. definitely some sick shit. Coca86 - nice stuff dude. you had a lot of good similies in there that worked really well. the line and shake my head cuz like emmanuel lewis u aint never gonna grow/ had me laughin. good stuff. at times tho, some stuff you said was kinda generic, "your mom" trash talk (although tether ball-pole thing was kinda funny) and drug talk. i would suggest to stay away from stuf like that only cuz a lot of people do that. also i would suggest using more multis and metaphors. but nevertheless, your verse was definitely nice. still, i gotta go V/Miles
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Thug
Join Date: May 2008
Location: Washington ,D.C.
Posts: 224
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lmfao at ur
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Thug
Join Date: May 2008
Location: Washington ,D.C.
Posts: 224
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damn i swear these females are a trip they always need to have things their way. they like to change things around and catch feelings on the computer. and im like why. whats the point, nobody wins. idk what it is, so miles i just like to say from man to a young lady please have a happy period
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For somebody who is calling me a bitch, you sure did just get annihilated... so then what does that make you? A Pussy on it's monthly monster? You're a bamma ass nigga as they would say in DC, and you just got the taste of what Nas did to Hova... ETHER...
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Thug
Join Date: May 2008
Location: Washington ,D.C.
Posts: 224
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lmfaooooo u mad its ok its ok i know u a bitch its ok as long as niggas in bk know u prolly a broke ass nigga that still wear uptowns damn bitch just let it go i know its hard for u
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well Alright Battle .... Lotta Hype for just One Round LOL!!
Miles Militis - ----------- " I hope the pain I leave you in will amplify and never deceases Agony and diseases seeps in, your soon to be unoccupied cadaver You’re a challenger, I’m this adverse, and you’re not on my caliber Shoot you up infinite times like Galaga, just to damage ya’" Some Sick Lines.... Nice Vocabulary... Just wish u coulda strung Your Flow Better, and Have Ur Punch lines hit Harder -------------------------------------- Coca86 - "told u youngin im sicker with the flow, im lookin at ur flow/ and shake my head cuz like emmanuel lewis u aint never gonna grow/ this battle how far u wanna go/ u mamma wanna be the teather ball just connected to my pole/ and i probably sold some shit for her nose/ and like a true fiend in love she followed the x and the o's/ u thought u was gonna come wreck on a foe/ " - NICELY Strung..... Great TeatherBall Punchline!!!! .... Vocab wasn't Near Miles ... but a better overall well rounded verse I wish I Could Of Seen 3 rounds... But With What Was Done Winner: " Coca86 "
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tha shit yall throwin at each other back n forth in ya posts is stronger than ya verses.. real talk, both shits were weak.. neither drop took an aggressive approach of bringing it at tha other, if if wasnt for yall talkin shit to each other, i would not have been able to tell this was a battle... i call it a tie.. yall needa scrap this shit & get it in like a real battle...
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J.Christ this is sad... LMFAO! I read this battle 3 times... and to see how people vote on this web site from other battles just sickens me. Well since people need for us to dumb it down, let me throw up another set guy, and I guess we're forced into having to go to a round 2 Coca... -SMMFH-... I'll drop in a few minutes here.
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yall needa make a new thread.. and what you talkin bout dumb it down son, yo drop was more of a open mic joint not a battle verse.. you had some lyrical lines but most of it is filler kuz its not 'battle-friendly'.. you think folks are suppose to automatically vote for you without you showing any directivity towards ya opponent--uhh, NO!! lyrically ya drop was pretty good, but if you got skills like that you should be able to make a verse FOR your opponent with DIRECT lyricism... where was ya punches??? |
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