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Old 06-10-2008, 05:39 PM   #21 (permalink)
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ROUND 2


“I was listening to A Millie at the time… and I just thought of the ultimate shit to murder you with guy… get gully…”

DUMB IT DOWN (To A Millie Instrumental….)
THE BATTLE VERSION

Fresh off mute's massacre
Mile’s ready for blasphemy
Coca hittin’ with wack verses
Then watching them bounce off me
Defeat always demonstrated
Others jealousy understated
Spin the chamber for Coca roulette
Cuz’ M&M’z rhymes are calibrated
Target set for this lyrical queen
Verbal ammunition ablaze
An easy defeat of a sub par emcee
Leaving Coca in a daze
Watching his whole world collapse
Leaving no such debate
With lyrical bullets sight unseen
Stickin’ you faster than epoxy
Showing everyone your lack of skill
Died quick as River Phoenix at the Roxy
But I hate wack artists
That put their words in apostrophes
Tryin’ to make up for lack of skill
That fuckin’ style is lost to me
Cuz’ it seeps more shit than colostomy
And reaps more wins to Miles Militi
M&M drops rich with lyrics
So destroying Coca is no cost to me
So buy yourself a dictionary
A thesaurus and some skills
Cuz’ unless you got something unforeseen
McDonalds wont pay your bills

Ma-ma-ma-ma-MULTI-MAS-SA-CRE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

With three flicks
Of unsheathed Bics,
I’m leavin’ deep nicks
In Coca
Watch as I approach ya’
Son, what? Delete your prefix.
You can’t keep it
After you bleed six
Liters from each slit
Your spleen slipped
Into my grips, so can I keep it?
Internal meat ripped
Miles feeds Coca defeat quick
But even the air you breath in
Seems to get me sick
And since you speak with
Indecence
I’m heavin’ these fleet kicks
That hit till my cleet’s be stickin’
Between ribs-
See, you’re in deep shit
Feces makin’ your feet slip
I’ve taken this weak bitch
And placed him squarely against a street spit
You’d be more at ease with
Climbin’ a steep cliff
Than dealin’ with these secret
Sequences that come with more heat than
Diseased dicks
Repeat this
And get beat differently like it was remixed
Those previous three nicks
Will need to be re-stitched
My blade digs like beatniks
Till the seams split
Why even let the scheme switch?
I’ll eat you like flea ticks
Feasting on Fido, while the rhymes be fixed
Like Christopher Reeves hips
My expertise drips
Out of my head unto these lips
So when you read this
Remember that it was you who pleaded to be squished

Digest it you fuckin’ simpleton!

"Oh, and by the way... LEARN HOW TO FUCKING BREAK DOWN A VERSE BEFORE YOU JUDGE...."
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Old 06-10-2008, 05:42 PM   #22 (permalink)
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MUTHA FUCKA I'm ILLLLLLL!!!!
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Old 06-10-2008, 05:44 PM   #23 (permalink)
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*yawns*
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Old 06-10-2008, 05:56 PM   #24 (permalink)
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G-Rated right now off the dome... 16 bars.. 32 lines... due in 20 minutes... for somebody who appears as a peon to me I would easily demolish you. And when I battle you I am going to hit you with the complex shit you have ever witnessed. Get at me and stop being a critic when you can't critique worth shit.
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Miles that shit was beyond wack
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Old 06-10-2008, 06:13 PM   #26 (permalink)
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I'm glad you think so... Buahaahhaha... wack ass ma'fuckaz on this site... dick riding each ova'...
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Im not d/r'in anyone both verses were ass
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Old 06-11-2008, 03:26 AM   #28 (permalink)
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Default ma bad for the delay, internet was down in my area

is this nigga serious

cmon dawg im listenin, like this dude is kiddin/

he like a naggin house wife straight up bitchin/

put the 45 on your head like a houston colts fitted/

he so anxious just to get at him on the computer and spit venom/

but naw he's just another blogger, loser, nerd like pharell williams

u wont hear the gun pop u just seeing sounds/

now u bleedin like wet jeans ur heart is slowin down /

damn now he in the hospital and like a retired dennis rodman he cant rebound/

further now, ur homies like get up playa/

damn miles he angel cake, terry cloth, sponge soft, a mild hata

u see a crime n probably blow your horn like miles davis

then hit the block watchin people pacin/

then think he a warrior like baron davis/

look im tired of all the fuckery/

we can be in the same room with bitches u still couldnt fuck with me/

he the type to keep the rat around ya kids like chuckie cheese/

so you better strap up like ya dealing with std's/

speaking of that....

cmon militis, flow sick like syphilis/

urs just sick like polio/ so stay out the game like detlef schrempf/

cmon bro i told u u was late trying to wreck on this foe/

like david letterman, jimmy kimmel/

u in brooklyn prolly get rocked for a nickel/

saying damn i made 300 in two days it seemed all so simple/

go back to ur house sad prolly count the raindrops on ya window/

cry on ya pillow, recaharging ya dildo /

i told u im sick with this bimbo/

ur girl be-little, a bimbo, said she sick of living in the sticks(boondocks) with a

brillo/

back and forth dissin yea we played that game/

but i can go head to head with best of them/

so y u think i couldnt run miles like spree fontaine/

this lady got too much attitude and estrogen/

y i even respond to this dame/

y u come to the cage come with this rage and aint come bring the pain/

dawg u should took the pen out like u bout to launch a grenade/

this battle what u want it to be/

sissy, im like a braziiian ive been ready for beef/

im done with this clown/

checkmate,uno, battleship sunk ,suduko, game, domino bitch, checkers/

now watch me how i turn this nigga and his day into breakfast/

miles a egg head and like humpty dumpty he wanna sit on my wall/

wait for me to slip so he can see me fall/

naw i will place that egg in hot water then crack his shell/

then like oj(orange juice/ oj simspon) stab his female/

then watch the bacon(pigs or cops) get hot on his landscape/

i aint even hot yet just lettin shit bubble like one side of the pancake/

easy nigga
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Old 06-11-2008, 05:23 AM   #29 (permalink)
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What the fuck? LMFAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! you people make me laugh I hope you guys do vote for this worthless chump. Nothing he said even really hit other than the Miles Davis name-plays and Miles name plays. This dudes PUNCHES... ALL OF THEM ARE rhyme-0-rator.com and his shit sucks... but I did fuck with the Miles name play lines they were nice. But this nigga ain't fuckin' with me. Like I said, when yall learn to rap... get at me.
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Lmao...damn miles u reminded me of how I was when I joined 2 years ago...callin out the feeble and fake...anyways...first off...man I don't even do that shyt no more though..I just don't give a fuck no more. and yet im still here?...lol


Miles...

man it would been better on audio..to me it would...this is text battlin....your format was off...it was like a poetry sequence...if u dropped the three line splits through out your whole verse mutha fuckas aint gonna follow it and damn it u did it!...u had way too many fillers..the same ol imma hit u wit lines and how my style is shyt.......uh uhh...forget it......and u talking about buying a dict and a thesaurus u sure u aint just buy them like 3 months ago...cuz yo verse was way over forced and it seems like u mixed the rookie style trying to make that shyt look like a true...battle kat ...and those multis? wtf at that aint no attacks there just straight ....fillers...no ether at all....damn dude....u even brought transgress back ! to clown on you!...buhahahahaha....now I know a beef thread gonna pop off!..lol...


Coca...

at least u had some punches...u did not prolong yo shyt...u had way less fillers than miles...and the format of your verse could have been worked on...words were missin and some of your lines were either too short or too stretched ...u need to feel a instrumental before u drop folk this is text...way different than audio ...my dude...u were creative in most parts and original....too but those last few bars made my ass hungry talking about food and shyt ...its 8 in the am here too...lol..

overall ....Coca gets my vote.
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