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bergencircle · 06-22-2008, 11:18 AM

my first battle but who ready to spit...HaZy haha

young pun · 06-22-2008, 11:46 AM

Lets GET IT POPPIN KID

bergencircle · 06-23-2008, 11:46 AM

i really dont know how to start it but lets get it

cham1983 · 06-23-2008, 12:09 PM

Any of you would be nice man... Ill get it on now... Just say the word dawgs?

bergencircle · 06-23-2008, 04:51 PM

simple//when them shots ring you may hollar//im the captain smooth sailin like the mayflower//ya'll play dollar,and imma have to kill bills//revolver spinnin on ya head like a pinwheel//get bitches get blown like a windmill/if she aint,you know about the 5th,chill//u might kill//reverse my verse,im sleepin on'em like nyquil//only time i crack a smile when the heads do//they love me no,Newmon like Seinfeld//ya bars sweet n i aint even listenin//the diabetic never leaves without the insulin/past summer i seen more crack than a plumber//and paper,i got more stacks than lumber/im so hot that the heat make might you wonder//but thats me piece,heat wave like the summer//like hummer i dont even say a word//i say the word,see the bulls come like they may of heard//or made a herd//and do what, ya goons keep nothin//im like a bar and the shots keep comin//past fly like i came from the eighties//born fresh i seem like a baby//bottle rockets make ya seem like a lady//ya men'll pause,and bleed like'em maybe//you wont find me,the kid made surely of that//cuz the gun i cocked like bernie mac//-- Let Me know people what yall think....HaZy

cleaves05 · 06-23-2008, 08:52 PM

I liked, wouldn't mind hearing that to a beat. Where's the other guy?

bergencircle · 06-23-2008, 10:51 PM

where dude at

cham1983 · 06-25-2008, 01:13 PM

These niggas flow guns on my case like ALL DAY,
Bullets my come in your face like foreplay,
This childs play but I dont never get my chucky on,
By the time you spin a blade there'll be cave wer da slug has gone,
So forget all the silly chat
You get left fuckin dead like a necrophilliac
You aint ready for a clash
Ill leave YOUR crew screaming like"Bury him Cham"
Listen... Ill murk you cuz
Leave scars on your shit like herpes does
Cos your shots are harmless
Spittin out blanks like adopting fathers
Im from the ends where we got knives and pack skengs
Niggas walk round with limps like as if posh spice had black men
And aint no one gonna stop me, you clock me
Ill make you rollover gimme your money like the lottery
Trust me, I aint living like a peasent
I want pockets so fat I have to test if they pregnant
Only fair to pay me, tribute to the mirror
Cos the nigga in the glass the only breh to face me
Rest of them laid down I spray rounds
Real men see but not SAW this life aint a playground

CodeineSyppin · 07-13-2008, 06:33 PM

Too long, just 5 bars!

Tyme Lyne · 07-14-2008, 11:01 AM

bergen circle get rid of the // in yo verse structure yo bars kid it was kinda off....I mean way off.....concepts played....all that gun play...getting old not much originality....so make sure u get that together...

cham....yo drop was decent ...nice punches ...they were nice...structure and all that was there!....

Cham gets my vote....this battle was kinda weak...

can we get a mod to move this? to the cage?....BergenCircle Vs Cham...

06-22-2008, 11:18 AM	#1 (permalink)
bergencircle Rookie Join Date: Apr 2008 Posts: 9	Bergencircle vs. Cham1983 my first battle but who ready to spit...HaZy haha

06-22-2008, 11:46 AM	#2 (permalink)
young pun Underboss Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: STRAIGHT OUTTA BADLANDS Posts: 1,035	Lets GET IT POPPIN KID __________________ BORICUA

06-23-2008, 08:52 PM	#6 (permalink)
cleaves05 Capo Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: 313 Posts: 795	I liked, wouldn't mind hearing that to a beat. Where's the other guy? __________________

07-13-2008, 06:33 PM	#9 (permalink)
CodeineSyppin Hitman Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Union City East Bay Area,Ca Posts: 446	Too long, just 5 bars! __________________ RGF ALL DAY!

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06-23-2008, 11:46 AM	#3 (permalink)
bergencircle Rookie Join Date: Apr 2008 Posts: 9	i really dont know how to start it but lets get it

06-23-2008, 12:09 PM	#4 (permalink)
cham1983 Rookie Join Date: Jun 2008 Posts: 17	Any of you would be nice man... Ill get it on now... Just say the word dawgs?

06-23-2008, 04:51 PM	#5 (permalink)
bergencircle Rookie Join Date: Apr 2008 Posts: 9	simple//when them shots ring you may hollar//im the captain smooth sailin like the mayflower//ya'll play dollar,and imma have to kill bills//revolver spinnin on ya head like a pinwheel//get bitches get blown like a windmill/if she aint,you know about the 5th,chill//u might kill//reverse my verse,im sleepin on'em like nyquil//only time i crack a smile when the heads do//they love me no,Newmon like Seinfeld//ya bars sweet n i aint even listenin//the diabetic never leaves without the insulin/past summer i seen more crack than a plumber//and paper,i got more stacks than lumber/im so hot that the heat make might you wonder//but thats me piece,heat wave like the summer//like hummer i dont even say a word//i say the word,see the bulls come like they may of heard//or made a herd//and do what, ya goons keep nothin//im like a bar and the shots keep comin//past fly like i came from the eighties//born fresh i seem like a baby//bottle rockets make ya seem like a lady//ya men'll pause,and bleed like'em maybe//you wont find me,the kid made surely of that//cuz the gun i cocked like bernie mac//-- Let Me know people what yall think....HaZy

06-23-2008, 10:51 PM	#7 (permalink)
bergencircle Rookie Join Date: Apr 2008 Posts: 9	where dude at

06-25-2008, 01:13 PM	#8 (permalink)
cham1983 Rookie Join Date: Jun 2008 Posts: 17	These niggas flow guns on my case like ALL DAY, Bullets my come in your face like foreplay, This childs play but I dont never get my chucky on, By the time you spin a blade there'll be cave wer da slug has gone, So forget all the silly chat You get left fuckin dead like a necrophilliac You aint ready for a clash Ill leave YOUR crew screaming like"Bury him Cham" Listen... Ill murk you cuz Leave scars on your shit like herpes does Cos your shots are harmless Spittin out blanks like adopting fathers Im from the ends where we got knives and pack skengs Niggas walk round with limps like as if posh spice had black men And aint no one gonna stop me, you clock me Ill make you rollover gimme your money like the lottery Trust me, I aint living like a peasent I want pockets so fat I have to test if they pregnant Only fair to pay me, tribute to the mirror Cos the nigga in the glass the only breh to face me Rest of them laid down I spray rounds Real men see but not SAW this life aint a playground

07-14-2008, 11:01 AM	#10 (permalink)
Tyme Lyne Rap GodFather Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: In VA...Clearing Her Mind... Posts: 4,974	bergen circle get rid of the // in yo verse structure yo bars kid it was kinda off....I mean way off.....concepts played....all that gun play...getting old not much originality....so make sure u get that together... cham....yo drop was decent ...nice punches ...they were nice...structure and all that was there!.... Cham gets my vote....this battle was kinda weak... can we get a mod to move this? to the cage?....BergenCircle Vs Cham...