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RULES DROP WHENEVER NO DICK RIDER VOTES <WILL HAVE A MOD DETERMINE THIS> UNLIMITED BARS NO BITING 3-0 KO 1st to 5 Wins |
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The ETHERING of V-Jay Ego Overheated nigga’ needed a lesson I remind that false accusations result from manic depression I'll rip your heart from your chest kid its best change ya’ profession Cause my textual weapons were concocted in the range of a second Far from the head of his game, star struck and dead at my fame Steadily, I attack his mentality instead of his name ![]() With deadly proclamations, I utterly devastate V-Jay Staple a photocopy to his face so he can hide behind paper And since you think that I'm sexy, maybe a present if ya’ verse isn't junk I'm givin’ birth to a baby elephant, and you can kiss on its trunk You talk all shit, I spit it turbulent, murder your thought with cruel intent Miles conspire with heaven's God to make your soul irrelevant A Forum resident, your visiting hours are now over Hit you with the bomb blast with fast precision like a soldier V-Jay’s a never mind, never had a hope in the world of spitting wicked Without a mind, he's still a virgin cuz’ he's naive of where to stick it This loss? He picked it, neglected to note my style's perfected I'm immune to MC’s with verbal marks no one corrected V-Jay’s mentally gone and totally wrong in his approach He's fictionalized his every move with BET not beyond reproach I've stagnated his methods, delegated Jay’ to the rafters No more fantasy lives, you're doomed ever after The fact of the matter is, “matter of fact” your voice is muted Miles Mitilis spit it righteous, nigga, and there ain't no disputin' it Yo’, I got mine, I hope you "got yourself a gun" But you don't need it, cuz’ your fuckin' life is done My raps appear as a riddle, questioning all your knowledge Which isn’t useful your shit's more useless than a car at college With a bar to brawl with, I leave this pussy exposed more than center-folds Chemicals creating cleaner spits than any dentist knows If you were sent to blow heads with lead you couldn't blow my top Spits shine like golden-rocks… …a cannibal, starving this hungry animal faster than Goldi-locks I behold the lost ecstasy of emcees inside an embassy that's empty Armed with ebony too deadly, I'm excellence with ten speeds, sent to be beheading A centipede emcee, tempting everything to start remembering… …where every entity had a specialty in severing… Anything sent to thee with seven of heaven's-beats… …and get back to stepping quick When your flesh is slit… … and you're dead and bloodier than that Liyah Mexican chick I'll make ya’ head go spin by grabbing the neck within… …and snapping your skeleton so fast I kill the specimen of your next of kin I flow like estrogen or medicine… With evil sediments sent to behead-this-bitch… To break, take and shake remembrance …and leave V-Jay dead-in-a-ditch I spill the red and shit faster than a commercial for Gatorade with a razorblade With gleams from being cleaned with every case of AIDS at gay parades …to amaze the prey If you wanna’ stay and play V-Jay I hurt-the-bitches With a verse incision, tryna’ merc the prism You're making worse decisions than John Smith at night I'd be amazed if this weak bitch could fight Cuz’ actually amidst the hype, I'm the only one ill enough to sit and write At the same time I speak When I ask for battles, most of you play hide and seek More than gay Prides in weeks of Christian faith Spit a kiss of hate to split your face, then kick the gates Of heaven down with eleven pounds of nitrogen… …And despite my wins, you fuckin’ losers are always askin’ for me to come back and fight again… “Hands down… I am the illest MC on this fuckin’ board… after this battle need proof… say no more… get at me you dehydrated Biggie Smalls lookin’ nigga…” ![]() -FIN- |
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...I predicted you'd come with a weak verse....80% of that is filler.......Aight I'll drop in this either tonight or tomorrow!! Btw......thx for using my pics......I mean....I love seeing myself.. Later!
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Nigga, I CRUSHED you... there was no FILLERS... there was every concept a battle rapper uses. I obliterated you with the following criteria:
Opening Gambit Multi's Metaphors Imagery Punch-lines Personals Closing Discussion YOU ain't fuckin' with me... you ain't on my level, nor is anyone on this board I've seen... |
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Then this fagot V-Jay-Jay ole' vagina ass nigga changes his name before he drops... LOL. This nigga is doo doo... my vagina name-plays got you salty... LOL and he didn't think I was gonna drop so quick LOL! Like I said drop when ever, you lame ass nigga you're gonna need time to think after that ass whippin' LOL... 30 bars off the dome... LOL Too much for these weak niggas...
Last edited by Miles Militis; 06-23-2008 at 10:48 PM. |
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![]() You can't be from BK...You from Idaho nigga!! I heard you got four lips and bleed for seven days...You bitch you!! Lets GO!! "The New Guy"changed ya name,but a still a lame with a broke penis/ Miles feelin hisself..ha..Call it a stroke of jeanyus/ Repeated thesis,A Re-run cause ya steez already seen it/ You not stealing the throne...boy,You just con-seated/ Sign the waiver...cause with a razor I'll do you a favor/ Annihilate ya,Burner'll lift you HI(gh) HATER!! Kaki switched sides..So MIles...I prolif-erase him.... Nothin will save ya...cause you facing total obliteration/ I'm Like Diddy in the city the way I run miles/ Dun'll get gunned down//Tyme already expired u so you aint worth while/ No bars strong enough...Ya verse minimum security/ I'm ya judge and ya jury b...sentence ya to obscurity/ Sever him leave him without limbs like some vietnam vets/ Haunt your nightmares bitch til you show some respect/ Predetermined fate,Miles know he going lose/ Ya carcass go caput when u fall like bishop from juice/ Beat ya boy from brooklyn to east newyork/(OXYMORON!!) My Breath Stink,I'll be talking shit when I eat ya thoughts/ I smell kitten!! Like a chinese kitchen,Pussies get cooked up like well.... chicken/ Well wish him then let hell get him....Fuck a coffin I'll just leave the nail in him/!!GOOD RIDDENS!!!
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CO-SIGNED!!Last edited by Aril Problym; 06-24-2008 at 01:58 PM. |
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Time for votez!!
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Join Date: Nov 2006
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Miles, you are definitely improving, but you need to learn how to balance that arsenal of vocabulary with a steady and consistent flow. There was some clever wordplay but theres definitely room to improve.
Aril Problym - Whattup nigga. Your shit was definitely tight. You could feel the flow when reading and i feel you got at him well. Overall, you have the edge because you were able to use clever wordplay without disrupting your overall flow. -WINNER- Aril Problym
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but what about Grind House and Kill Bill what about Cheney and Halliburton the back door deals on oil fields How is Nas the most violent person |
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