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Join Date: Mar 2007
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10 Bars/20 Lines
Blind Spit No hate No D/R 24-48 hours after Battle Thread is up...
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Where all these text bullies at? All these recycling lil Wayne loving cubicle burnouts.
Your soul has the stench of reptilian pussy. Its time to get some fresh splinters from pine boxing you disgraces :giljotiin Battle Cage hours are from 9to5 cuz yall sonz of bitches ain't worth overtime ya dig |
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Rap GodFather
Join Date: Dec 2007
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Checkin In, Dont 4Get to drop son...
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Outlaw
Join Date: Mar 2007
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B ya verse is terrible Face it! the effects is irreversible Hoping my text'll be merciful cuz ya wasted your best personal Instead B's left a surgical mess try to contest in a hospital ward While I'm pulling the chord avenging all the flatlines you've been responsible for Knowing ya tonsils is sore from biting gay lines and generic threats When your in debt from using ya parents shed to play wit that clarinet Who the fuck wants a soundcheck? Album criteria is basically irrelevant But B can make history as the first rapper who's sold out without actually selling shit Resents this thread cuz battling ain't the imo ya drops are the worst So posting infared ensures that I'll never miss taking shots at ya verse At first ya talked a good game but they'res a poor respect issue Especially when ya lines are as well developed as a crack whores breast tissue I bet the vets dissed you left looking distorted and felt unsupported And resorted to making flow ya GOD sacrificing all your punches for it That Em shit abort it, you've got real skill confused wit wealth So take the last Stand for that burn-out but you'll still lose yourself Shelf those forum accolades while never being a vicious rhymer Only reason people still let B-slide is cuz he's a two-bit sig designer For a reminder that no show skit doesn't define shit, I'll still make ya resign quick Cuz only bitches wit writers block wants 48 hours just to drop a blind spit
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Where all these text bullies at? All these recycling lil Wayne loving cubicle burnouts.
Your soul has the stench of reptilian pussy. Its time to get some fresh splinters from pine boxing you disgraces :giljotiin Battle Cage hours are from 9to5 cuz yall sonz of bitches ain't worth overtime ya dig Last edited by Contraversy; 09-26-2008 at 03:41 PM.. |
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Im Sorry to Freepost but welcome back controversy ! and ...
ahhahahah LMAO ya killin' it ! |
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Rap GodFather
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Sorry man, but Ima drop in a lil bit... I aint been on in a minute, but itll be dropped by 12...
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Rap GodFather
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Heres my drop...
Controversy, Ur words nothin short of not worthy to me... Ur verse got me thinkin Ur idea of personals is flirting wit B... Why call me out? Con knows I bring hammers, Im simply doper... And I cant say Ur a straight up fag, cuz hes usually bent over... I peeped U son, Ur whole style is about flippin, U basic... So Ima hault Ur winnin streak, and beat Ur ass naked... I know U prewrote Ur shit, all 20 lines to be specific... U may be fast, but so are white sprinters in the Olympics... U wont get shit, except Ls, for me this win seems all too easy... U couldnt spit for a double u if U stuttered over T and V... 178 posts since Mar 07? Nothing U bring is impressive... Steppin to Varsity ballers, Losings the only thing U've had success with... I been winning for months straight, Ur just wack faggot if Im fatigued, its in Ur bushes with camo nines & a flak jacket U try to be hard, But put a microphone by U when U sleep... When Con rises and shines, he'll just choke in the sheets... Im dope on a beat, U'd get slapped pass tomorrow... And C only acts hard, cuz B's a hard act to follow... Controversy none of Ur played stuffs hurtin me... I know what Ur about, losings just sums it up perfectly... Good Luck...
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LMAO....
yo this was a good battle... anyways not much of a breakdown but ill get at ya folks on the CATS... Contro: I've noticed it could have been ready a minute ago before the battle know what im sayin' like you prewrote that shyt ....til the battle was up ....But then I saw where you added some bars like half way towards the middle of the verse wit some last minute shyt ...I think u researched and did some homework and checked his shyt out I guess from his previous battles ...but who drops first and Puts " Ya verse is a disgrace" and the opponent aint even drop yet ?... Punches: Contro Creativity:Contro Originality:Contro Metas: N/A .ummm okay step it up ya'll ... Multis ? :Yall Both needs to step that up!... Overall Enjoyment : Contro! C-Joe aka anonymous aka B-snide : okay dude look u came hard before ? what happened it's like your punches was just speaking u aint really hit a mutha fucka in they mouth . it was like u was whipe'n his shyt with a paper napkin for him! seems a lil forced ...House rulez is 7 days I suggest you use it to your advantage .. cuz this battle was ......man ...it could have been better...very disappointed . Vote Contro |
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Outlaw
Join Date: Mar 2007
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Thx for the input Tyme. Any others out there your opinions is appreciated
1-0 me.
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Where all these text bullies at? All these recycling lil Wayne loving cubicle burnouts.
Your soul has the stench of reptilian pussy. Its time to get some fresh splinters from pine boxing you disgraces :giljotiin Battle Cage hours are from 9to5 cuz yall sonz of bitches ain't worth overtime ya dig |
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well i been out of tha text circuit as far as readin shit, so i've forgotten whats played & whats been used before.. but some concepts are just obvious esp if ive seen em alot of times... i thought both of yall came correct.. both had some hits & misses but for tha most part i enjoyed readin tha battle... ima go wit con by hair.. i def thought B had tha line of tha battle wit that fatigue shit.. but con was more consistent... so he gets my vote...
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sorry for not breakin it down as detailed ad line for line and the ones i like,but im a just talk basically on what i thought on each verses..
Contraversy Gud shit..i liked ya verse alot from begining to end..your verse had a mixture of metas and punches,but what really had me going was the world play...usually im more taken by the punchlines,but i havent seen wordplay like that in a battle on here since the days i first joined..gud shit..personals was there,sum was OK,not to hard hitting tho..the punchlines was nice and it flowed..gave me sumthing to think about and they were clever..like that "breast tissue" line...wordplay is what stuck out to me in ur verse,ya did a gud job tho... here's my fav lines: Quote:
B-Snide you had a nice verse also,started out rocky and picked up in the middle ...ya punches were gud as well but you started throwing em a little to late..ya personals bout the posts and etc,they were ok but i dont think they stuck..i wasnt feeling to much of the violent act,seeing that Con came wit wordplay,and seeing that u went second,u had a chance to double that and make ur verse better..it's ok to include the gun talk or w/e in SOME LINES,but keep it to a very minimum,cuz it's the net u know,so sumetimes they come as fillers unless u have a gud punch to follow it...flow was on point tho.. here's sum of my fav lines from ya: Quote:
v/CON
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