(WORLD WAR 3)[ROUND 1] Rehmann VS atlrOyalty

[Ghost]

ok ATL took this, simply because his wordplay was on point in both of his bars, tying into rehmans passtimes...he even tied in Zues with mortal, and then mortal with kombat...another game...shit was superb...the final fantasy killed it...rehman you came hardest in your first line, which shoulda been saved for last..it would have left the crowd like oooooohhhhh instead oooooohhhhh.......::reads the rest::...ok now for ATLS...ya feel me?

props to both of you

You must spread some Reputation around before giving it to Rehmann again.

You must spread some Reputation around before giving it to atlr0yalty again.

[Rehmann]

Originally Posted by Sureloc Holmes

ATL's Verse
got his head in the clouds if he think he can beat me
he bout the feel the strife, cus this his final fantasy

im zeus against this mortal, call this unfair kombat
cus my wordplay is eternal, and once i finish him theres no komeback



Rehmann's verse
Me against you, you must be "pissed" jus look at the trouble "urine" (Urine = your~in)
Rehmann doin Atl like "shit" ~ your getin "wasted" an goin straight to the bin
Fuck this ima "Breeze" past you jus like the "Wind~do"
2 Bars an its over ATL feel the wrath of "whirl~wind 2"




Both of you pretty much used the same style, so my vote is gonna go to the man who used it better

ATL: Your verse had creativity comin with the Mortal Kombat thing, but you could've have done a lot more with that subject at hand, one thing I was dissapointed with while readin it was that you said FINISH HIM, but Not FATALITY, two well known Mortal Kombat phrases, whic wouldve catapulted your verse further


Rehmann: Your verse was good, but it seemed like it wasnt finished, seemed like you couldve kept goin or were supposed to keep going. Thing that suprised me was that, you switched up your style which I liked. Switching styles accordin to your battle envirement is very important. You came hard at ATL in a way Ive never seen you come at anybody, and I felt like it wasnt done, but lemme tell you, if this wouldve been a regualr battle and you wouldve continued that verse, I woulde easily given you the vote...

My Vote: ATL by the hair on his nuts

thanx for votin
an i knw what ya mean but the thing is i need more bars to go hard at niggaz, 2 bars is really hard to get everything you want down.
Im jus tryna elevate an i will be battlin a lot more now, so thanx for the breakdown.....

[Rehmann]

2-0 to ATL, lets keep votes comin.......

[Robert Are]

Originally Posted by Rehmann

thanx for votin
an i knw what ya mean but the thing is i need more bars to go hard at niggaz, 2 bars is really hard to get everything you want down.
Im jus tryna elevate an i will be battlin a lot more now, so thanx for the breakdown.....

know whatcha mean, its really hard for me to WIN a battle with jsut 2 bars

[EA$Y]

both were good. both came with some clever shit. but overall, IMO Rehmann's shit was MORE clever. didn't really like atl's play with games tho.

Vote: Rehmann

[Rehmann]

2-1 to Atl uppin for more votes.........

[waruna]

GJ both of ya ll

atl came hard buht i waz feeling Rehmann verses still

so my vote : Rehman

tried to propz both of ya ll buht cant gtta wait , too much rep given .

[ATL]

thanks for the votes and the feedback..

yea sureloc i could used fatality and some more stuff if i would have had more bars but i worked with what i had. haha.

just for feedback..

Me against you, you must be "pissed" jus look at the trouble "urine" (Urine = your~in)
Rehmann doin Atl like "shit" ~ your getin "wasted" an goin straight to the bin
Fuck this ima "Breeze" past you jus like the "Wind~do"
2 Bars an its over ATL feel the wrath of "whirl~wind 2"

1st line.. like ghost said, was killer..
2nd line... was good too, kinda lost the flow when you switch from reffering to me to talking to me.
3rd line.. breeze, wind, kinda generic but aight.
4th line.. thought it was pretty weak, filler first half and "feel the wrath of whirl wind 2".. i dont get it or feel it.


to be honest i feel i had this the entire way but, if the votes say 2-2 its 2-2....

[Rehmann]

actually it 2-2 outta an Waruna voted for me
But good battle so far

[ATL]

just throwing this out there.. dont trip but..
whats up with waruna comming to the cage to vote for you, not vote on any other battles that are up, havent seen him vote on any other battles before or even post in the cage...