ATL0YALTY vs true_72005

[ATL]

5 votes. 3-0 ko.

[ATL]

true is about to take an L to royalty
and no this not a just a high possiblity
this is a self-fulfilling prophecy
cus if i say that shit, best believe it will be

ko'd by liyah and wants to step up against me?
cmon you just a snack, an appetizer, seriously
fuck, its less than that.. nigga you a pea
you could come in bulk and still not be fufilling

you made a mistake and there is no undo
better find Mr. Miyagi cus you gon need some more kung fu
cus lyrically you lack the strength, in other words you weak
and my wordplay is saturday + sunday, the end of the week

im outta ya reach kid, too high, like the cookie jar
you out of date, im San Andreas, you Grand Theft Auto 2
this is inevitable, there really isn't much you can do
but imma be sympathetic.. my vote goes to you

[Ghost]

Originally Posted by atlr0yalty

true is about to take an L to royalty
and no this not a just a high possiblity
this is a self-fulfilling prophecy
cus if i say that shit, best believe it will be

ko'd by liyah and wants to step up against me?
cmon you just a snack, an appetizer, seriously
fuck, its less than that.. nigga you a pea
you could come in bulk and still not be fufilling

you made a mistake and there is no undo
better find Mr. Miyagi cus you gon need some more kung fu
cus lyrically you lack the strength, in other words you weak
and my wordplay is saturday + sunday, the end of the week

im outta ya reach kid, too high, like the cookie jar
you out of date, im San Andreas, you Grand Theft Auto 2
this is inevitable, there really isn't much you can do
but imma be sympathetic.. my vote goes to you

FIYAH ASS LINES!!!!

[true_72005]

Originally Posted by atlr0yalty

true is about to take an L to royalty
and no this not a just a high possiblity
this is a self-fulfilling prophecy
cus if i say that shit, best believe it will be

ko'd by liyah and wants to step up against me?
cmon you just a snack, an appetizer, seriously
fuck, its less than that.. nigga you a pea
you could come in bulk and still not be fufilling

you made a mistake and there is no undo
better find Mr. Miyagi cus you gon need some more kung fu
cus lyrically you lack the strength, in other words you weak
and my wordplay is saturday + sunday, the end of the week

im outta ya reach kid, too high, like the cookie jar
you out of date, im San Andreas, you Grand Theft Auto 2
this is inevitable, there really isn't much you can do
but imma be sympathetic.. my vote goes to you

I want even begin to give you a piece of my mind state
because my minds state is just to great: if you want beef you betta find it on a plate cause you lookin for fish and dis is da steak, so dont ever bite off more than you can chew or this t bone ah be commin for you.

Lunch is over
now for the main course ; now for the main meal im after big bucks -you chasin small deals; you had to pull out yo pin for a internet battle i guess you know the sound of the death rattle so tell ya boyz get the saddles and come 2 ya aid cuz like a cd you just got played

so let me give you a few suggestions and write a few notes ghost is lame and you can print that as qoute im 2 dope dont choke tryin to swallow these lyrics and ya wonderin y ya ears bleedin when u read it and you didnt hear it

[CyCo34]

who r u suppose to be battlin ghost or atlroyalty....my vote goes to atlroyalty

[Ghost]

Originally Posted by true_72005

I want even begin to give you a piece of my mind state
because my minds state is just to great: if you want beef you betta find it on a plate cause you lookin for fish and dis is da steak, so dont ever bite off more than you can chew or this t bone ah be commin for you.

Lunch is over
now for the main course ; now for the main meal im after big bucks -you chasin small deals; you had to pull out yo pin for a internet battle i guess you know the sound of the death rattle so tell ya boyz get the saddles and come 2 ya aid cuz like a cd you just got played

so let me give you a few suggestions and write a few notes ghost is lame and you can print that as qoute im 2 dope dont choke tryin to swallow these lyrics and ya wonderin y ya ears bleedin when u read it and you didnt hear it

i'm gona be honest, I thought you came really good in the first part, you fell off in the 2nd part due to lack of a good flow, and you had no bar structure..it was hard to read...you stayed on point all the way through with the food theme, but I think you could have come alot better...

my vote: ATL

[tru_hip_hop]

my vote....atlroyalty...hands down...came with some crazy ass lines...ko'd him with that last line "this is inevitable, there really isn't much you can do
but imma be sympathetic.. my vote goes to you"

true...didnt like the structure, like ghost said a lil hard to read....coulda been better

[ATL]

Originally Posted by true_72005

I want even begin to give you a piece of my mind state
because my minds state is just to great
if you want beef you betta find it on a plate
cause you lookin for fish and dis is da steak
so dont ever bite off more than you can chew
or this t bone ah be commin for you.

Lunch is over now for the main course
now for the main meal im after big bucks
you chasin small deals
you had to pull out yo pin for a internet battle
i guess you know the sound of the death rattle
so tell ya boyz get the saddles and come 2 ya aid
cuz like a cd you just got played

so let me give you a few suggestions and write a few notes
ghost is lame and you can print that as qoute
im 2 dope dont choke tryin to swallow these lyrics
and ya wonderin y ya ears bleedin when u read it and you didnt hear it

i did you a favor and put it in a readable format..damn.
anyway on the actual bars, you did aight.
had some nice lines but then they were overshadowed by some beyond wack ones that didnt make any sense like and lacked any flow.

[true_72005]

you...won.....you get mad respect from me.....

[CyCo34]

co-sign with atlroyalty...had some nice lines...should have come wit some personals...but overall it was pretty good...just keep at it