Outta VS true_72005

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[true_72005]

you must be out yah mind for battlin me, let me check yah name o now i see
dude my lyrics a tear ya apart and i know ya aint game but youll have a change of heart
And i been to ya hood i stayed on ya block you wasent tuff talkin...... you wasent slangin rocks.....; you was that dude jackin 2 for the cock. and who im gona shoot? is not a question to ask just make sure you watch out for the barrels blask cuz when i cock back man i deliver the truth smith and wesson never lied he always shoot.
so dont make me come throught ya spot and hit up ya crib cuz pussy nigga u must forgot i know where ya live and i dont have no pitty ill take yo kidz... cuz he tryinna take minds so imma take whats his...
and you outta ya mind.....i dont respect that ....thats why know body ever sees the bullet when its comin at ya back...

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[Ghost]

Originally Posted by OuttaMyFuccinMind

these claims that you makin is hilarious....you serious, lame?
i spit furious flames and it's sick like malaria mayn
it's TRUE, i makes moves to do what i gotta do
you ain't much of a writer, you ain't the one i'ma lose to
matter fact, heard you lost to 7niggas in2005 dude
it's 2006 now, you betta step up ya game fool
cuz i ain't messin around, i'm tryna make it to TOP 3
i ain't talkin bout one spot, i'm tryna take all THREE!
you call yaself DA TRUTH, but its obvious thats not true
lying ass dickhead, bet cum'll spill out ya head when i shoot you

that was heat, best I've heard from you in a while...good job outta

those lines were killa, that's what got you my vote

[Robert Are]

HOLY SHIT OUTTA!!!!!!!!!!!

Nice spit, shit had me wildin

VOTE: OUTTA, Easily Pleasin the Crowd

[G-Rated]

This nigga Outta has really stepped his game up...Where tha fuck all this come from homie ?? I was feelin ya entire verse, u had some killa lines...Keep this shit up homie

[Ghost]

Originally Posted by G-Rated

This nigga Outta has really stepped his game up...Where tha fuck all this come from homie ?? I was feelin ya entire verse, u had some killa lines...Keep this shit up homie

co sign that bruv, I think I need a shot at him now, I think he was holdin back in our last 2 battles

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[Rehmann]

Outta got this, Tru you need to sort out your bar structure its pretty hard to read your verse, look at how Outta's verse is set up......

[G-Rated]

Originally Posted by Rehmann

Outta got this, Tru you need to sort out your bar structure its pretty hard to read your verse, look at how Outta's verse is set up......

Bar structure is not really his problem, its all the fillers he puts in his verse; take a breath homie & pause between bars, it makes it alot easier to read...This is how u should have set your verse up:

you must be out yah mind for battlin me
let me check yah name....o now i see 
dude my lyrics a tear ya apart 
and i know ya aint game but youll have a change of heart 
And i been to ya hood i stayed on ya block 
you wasent tuff talkin...... you wasent slangin rocks.....; 
you was that dude jackin 2 for the cock. 
and who im gona shoot?  is not a question to ask... 
just make sure you watch out for the barrels blask 
cuz when i cock back...
man i deliver the truth smith and wesson never lied he always shot.
so dont make me come throught ya spot 
and hit up ya crib cuz pussy nigga u must forgot 
i know where ya live and i dont have no pitty ill take yo kidz... 
cuz he tryinna take minds so imma take whats his...
and you outta ya mind.....i dont respect that ....
thats why know body ever sees the bullet when its comin at ya back...

^^Should be sumthin like this minus all ya fillers.