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Old 07-25-2006, 02:58 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Old 07-25-2006, 05:14 PM   #2 (permalink)
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This the intro 2 tha end of ya life az u know it
So sit tight, hold tha dynamite, 'cuz I'm bout 2 blow it

You claimin 2 rap? I bust ya ego like straight pins to balloons
My Boyz in tha Hood, do New Jersey Drive-byz on U and ya goons

Now U angry, thru tongue & cheek like bracez U're all wired
U might catch a break/brake at GoodYear, ya linez should be ReTired

It'z a stick up! Lyrical robbery, so fucc U pay me!
No need 4 cryin and whining, like Glen Davis U Big Baby!

My bars off the charts, so far gone no doc can examine
I hand deliver my punchez like pizza, no need for shippin & handling

Just follow tha Leader, U're my disciple I'll make U a believer
I'll own U like demons, and give U reason 2 claim I came at U evil

I'm overflowing, fucc Super 8 I still got more room 2 boast
Do tha math, you're lesser than me I'm always greater than most

I mail bombed U wit my drop, that meanz I fucced up ya post
So ditch ya cap gun & jump suit, I aint afraid of no Ghost



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This one waz kinda simple...if it needz xpalining, then holla @ me
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Old 07-25-2006, 07:23 PM   #3 (permalink)
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this tyga bout to lose his pride
when I take his bitch ass on a lyrical ride
swallow my words, they'll make you hurt inside
This is one ghost, whos words you should fear
I think I should make it clear
you couldnt come near to ladnin a rap career
ya rhymes more ass then flat beer
call it food poisoning, when you die from eatin this led
put you on a strecher, wrap up ya head
wheel you back to RH with a note attached, "you wont belive what I just read"
I'm higher then a zeppelin, drop bars to leave you "dazed and confused"
leave ya ass feelin like a cigarette but, blazed n used
or like a boxer in the KO, phased n bruised
I hold more weight then an elephant
yours just irrelivant, you got as many fans as our president
put this weed in the air, without a care
ya face when I drop, just a blank stare
cause it really aint fair, goin against RGFs MVPlayer
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I had to read these rhymes like 8 times to get a winner. I'm gonna go with ghost though, he had better flow. I liked Tyga's goodyear line, that shit was clever.
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why are all my battles so close? lol weird...thanks for the vote ****

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Damn I hate Tyga's long ass bar structure....Shits impossible to fit on a production level track...Too many filler words in ya verse...All that could be condensed in order to create some kind of flow, itz more than just rhymin & tryna make punches. All aspects need to be taken into consideration. But after I removed all un-necessary words, I liked it. So that's why u get my vote.

You were tryna go for more punches than what could actually fit, for instance the Boyz in the Hood line, [comparin two movies] when actually New Jersey Drive alone fits more appropriately...Itz more than just goin for punches & playin on words when it doesnt fit...Squeezing words that dont fit ruins the punch.
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Damn I hate Tyga's long ass bar structure....Shits impossible to fit on a production level track...Too many filler words in ya verse...All that could be condensed in order to create some kind of flow, itz more than just rhymin & tryna make punches. All aspects need to be taken into consideration. But after I removed all un-necessary words, I liked it. So that's why u get my vote.

You were tryna go for more punches than what could actually fit, for instance the Boyz in the Hood line, [comparin two movies] when actually New Jersey Drive alone fits more appropriately...Itz more than just goin for punches & playin on words when it doesnt fit...Squeezing words that dont fit ruins the punch.
wait..thats fucked up..he gets your vote because you took out the shit that didnt belong there?

it's not my fault he put too much shit in his bars...
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Damn I hate Tyga's long ass bar structure....Shits impossible to fit on a production level track...Too many filler words in ya verse...All that could be condensed in order to create some kind of flow, itz more than just rhymin & tryna make punches. All aspects need to be taken into consideration. But after I removed all un-necessary words, I liked it. So that's why u get my vote.
ok well umm....I preshate tha vote my nig.....but just 4 GP, pleez xplain 2 me what was 'unnecessary'?

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You were tryna go for more punches than what could actually fit, for instance the Boyz in the Hood line, [comparin two movies] when actually New Jersey Drive alone fits more appropriately...Itz more than just goin for punches & playin on words when it doesnt fit...Squeezing words that dont fit ruins the punch.
OKay, a lot of thiz stuff I'm quite aware of...but maybe yall are lookin 4 tha tha multi 2 be separated with dashez (-) and what not...b'cuz I treat all my rhymes az If I waz lacing 'em over an audio track, and that "Boyz in da Hood' verse 4 example I recited it 2 mahself like 20 tymez and it fit in okay. A few otherz may have been a bitch stretched but not ALL of 'em...but itz a.g., feedbacc iz still helpful....so it'z w/e...

I guess itz now 1-1....still uppin this
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wait..thats fucked up..he gets your vote because you took out the shit that didnt belong there?

it's not my fault he put too much shit in his bars...

Neither one of yall had much to go on...No dirt...He had a nyce verse, he said he was a noob & that punch 4 punch was his only battle, so he's still in the learning process...I condensed his verse as I read it, created a flow...He had better punches than you anywayz.
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The point is, youre tryna do too much with too little content...Itz more than the punches!!! Niggas are not illiterate, you dont have to use like so much just so ppl can classify it as a metaphor or a simile. Ive noticed that alot of ppl who are into textcee-ing & not emcee-ing incorporate too much shit into one line. Unless u on some tongue twistin fast speech like Twista...I dont think all that shit will work on a production level & if so why would you waste a speedy flow that's mainly consisting of filler words & not of lyricism.
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