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South Up · 10-27-2006, 05:54 PM

3-4 bars
first to 5
3-0 ko
4-1 tko

you can drop first since i prolly wont hit this til later...

†SaW† · 10-28-2006, 01:45 AM

Checkin n.....i'll get at chu

.GgG. · 10-28-2006, 05:30 AM

SORRY BOUT IT BUT IMMA HAV 2 HIT YA WIT THA SPAM RITE QUIK

WWW.PIFFTOWN.COM
THA NEW MOVEMENT...WE COMEEEIN NIGGGGGGaaaaaaaaa

†SaW† · 10-28-2006, 07:25 AM

^^ lol wtf..anyway peep it alittel sample!

..Look close da muffled-gasps, his face bloody n gory,
call me "JigSaw", cuz killin him is really Self-Explanatory..
..cuz his location is GA, but dis fag forgot da letter-Y,
until i leave holes n his-top, like a blueberry-applepie..
..South up is his name ? cuz he tired of goin down,
his lyrics a fuckin-joke, like sex wit Krusty-da-Clown..
..Cuz it's a charade wit his verse, how can he drop,
summer-footwear his flow, yea it's gonna "Fip-flop"...Eazy

Good Luck..

South Up · 10-28-2006, 07:41 AM

aight nice shit..im bout to hit this up

South Up · 10-28-2006, 07:54 AM

Look, like that group of singin ho's, Tha Cage Cherish me well
So perish in hell--gun Therapy, Torment come out these Shells
I stay wit clever flows to throw off and sever foes
Torment had a future in Tha Cage? I guess we'll never know
Since you a bitch who act, shouldn't even have spit your rap
Cuz you still a JR. Writer like you wit tha Diplomats (jr = junior)
Here tha facts, my war tunes darts, when them harpoons fly
You gon have two X's in ya eyes like dead cartoon guys...

good luck to ya homie and hopefully we can get some votes on this shit...

Ghost · 10-28-2006, 12:18 PM

southup took this easy man, I was expectin alot more from torment..you know some GGG type shit..its hard to believe his record with GGG is so close..wow...that drop wasnt that good man, alot of punches were dumb as fuck

JDaKidd · 10-28-2006, 12:30 PM

Quote:

..Look close da muffled-gasps, his face bloody n gory,
call me "JigSaw", cuz killin him is really Self-Explanatory..
Good Start
..cuz his location is GA, but dis fag forgot da letter-Y,
until i leave holes n his-top, like a blueberry-applepie..
OK, liked it
..South up is his name ? cuz he tired of goin down,
his lyrics a fuckin-joke, like sex wit Krusty-da-Clown..
Not really good
..Cuz it's a charade wit his verse, how can he drop,
summer-footwear his flow, yea it's gonna "Fip-flop"...Eazy
Hear the fil flop line like a thousand times

Quote:

Look, like that group of singin ho's, Tha Cage Cherish me well
So perish in hell--gun Therapy, Torment come out these Shells
OK, ya'll know about me and gun talk
I stay wit clever flows to throw off and sever foes
Torment had a future in Tha Cage? I guess we'll never know
Str8
Since you a bitch who act, shouldn't even have spit your rap
Cuz you still a JR. Writer like you wit tha Diplomats (jr = junior)
Cool
Here tha facts, my war tunes darts, when them harpoons fly
You gon have two X's in ya eyes like dead cartoon guys...
Hottest line out of all

South Up clearly won

Improvement
XXTXX - If u gonna do punches, make them make sence. Most of the punchess really did not put together. And don't spit lines that people have already done like a million times

South Up - Nothin was really wrong with your verse. Don't got much to say about that verse

South Up · 10-28-2006, 12:48 PM

thanx for tha votes yall and i really liked torment's drop..fuckin joke like sex with krusty da clown had me laughin as i was writin mine...

2-0 me, lets get some more votes!!

Ghost · 10-28-2006, 12:51 PM

^ yeah that was his best line..but the pie line was like..uhh...wtf?

10-27-2006, 05:54 PM	#1 (permalink)
South Up Banned Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: The Struggle Posts: 21,092	South Up vs xXTormentXx 3-4 bars first to 5 3-0 ko 4-1 tko you can drop first since i prolly wont hit this til later...

10-28-2006, 01:45 AM	#2 (permalink)
†SaW† Capo Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Woodland Ave.....Body Count Posts: 887	Checkin n.....i'll get at chu __________________ Abstract-is-Creativity..

10-28-2006, 07:25 AM	#4 (permalink)
†SaW† Capo Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Woodland Ave.....Body Count Posts: 887	^^ lol wtf..anyway peep it alittel sample! ..Look close da muffled-gasps, his face bloody n gory, call me "JigSaw", cuz killin him is really Self-Explanatory.. ..cuz his location is GA, but dis fag forgot da letter-Y, until i leave holes n his-top, like a blueberry-applepie.. ..South up is his name ? cuz he tired of goin down, his lyrics a fuckin-joke, like sex wit Krusty-da-Clown.. ..Cuz it's a charade wit his verse, how can he drop, summer-footwear his flow, yea it's gonna "Fip-flop"...Eazy Good Luck.. __________________ Abstract-is-Creativity..

10-28-2006, 12:18 PM	#7 (permalink)
Ghost RGF's Phantom... Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: *********************** This Years Record 163/20/112 *********************** Posts: 7,118	southup took this easy man, I was expectin alot more from torment..you know some GGG type shit..its hard to believe his record with GGG is so close..wow...that drop wasnt that good man, alot of punches were dumb as fuck __________________

10-28-2006, 12:51 PM	#10 (permalink)
Ghost RGF's Phantom... Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: *********************** This Years Record 163/20/112 *********************** Posts: 7,118	^ yeah that was his best line..but the pie line was like..uhh...wtf? __________________

10-28-2006, 05:30 AM	#3 (permalink)
.GgG. Banned Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 3,575	SORRY BOUT IT BUT IMMA HAV 2 HIT YA WIT THA SPAM RITE QUIK WWW.PIFFTOWN.COM THA NEW MOVEMENT...WE COMEEEIN NIGGGGGGaaaaaaaaa

10-28-2006, 07:41 AM	#5 (permalink)
South Up Banned Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: The Struggle Posts: 21,092	aight nice shit..im bout to hit this up

10-28-2006, 07:54 AM	#6 (permalink)
South Up Banned Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: The Struggle Posts: 21,092	Look, like that group of singin ho's, Tha Cage Cherish me well So perish in hell--gun Therapy, Torment come out these Shells I stay wit clever flows to throw off and sever foes Torment had a future in Tha Cage? I guess we'll never know Since you a bitch who act, shouldn't even have spit your rap Cuz you still a JR. Writer like you wit tha Diplomats (jr = junior) Here tha facts, my war tunes darts, when them harpoons fly You gon have two X's in ya eyes like dead cartoon guys... good luck to ya homie and hopefully we can get some votes on this shit...

10-28-2006, 12:48 PM	#9 (permalink)
South Up Banned Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: The Struggle Posts: 21,092	thanx for tha votes yall and i really liked torment's drop..fuckin joke like sex with krusty da clown had me laughin as i was writin mine... 2-0 me, lets get some more votes!!

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