Torment |vs.| Ghost-Ex

[Ghost]

Originally Posted by South Up

^^ hahaha naw im meanin tha "stile" and "stal"..i know what you was tryin to do i just threw that in since it took me a 2nd read to get it...

oh shit..probably cause I pronounce hostile, like hostel

[.GgG.]

TORMENT
~~~~
..Look tryin to box wit me ?, his fuckin "arms" is like T-rex,
cuz like married-wit-casper, i'll really divorce his name to "Ghost-Ex"..
8/10...nice opener...strong punch

..so ima leave metal-n-ur-center, like uh school trapper-keeper,
or beat/beet-him-to-death/def, like uh fuckin vegetable-reaper..
9/10...2 solid punches--flowed on point..

..cuz nicca u ain't "nice", psfftt got-it-bad like "Usher",
now who u gonna call ?cuz i got da "Ghost"buster..lol
7/10...decent bar

..that female-trash verse, is really Garbage/bitch,
cuz his "Grammer" is poor, so ima cast a "spell"-witch..
8/10..on point

..so ima micro-his-verse, n give it a few extension,
cuz like a blind-landlord, his rhymes is under "SuperVision"..
5/10...ehh it wuz a gud punch...but didnt really rhyme

..Now make beeper-hits, cuz u punchin da wrong paige/page,
n say fucka "DicK' , he uh "Ghost"Rider like Nicolas cage..Eazy
7/10..gud shit

42/60

GHOST
~~~~

this fucks text suck, sumthin like 'sunny side up', NO FLIPPIN
when im 2 above his 0, he'll be desperate for a dick ride like hoes drippin
6/10..ehh

somebody get the 'midol', cause im sick wit a heavy flow
unlike GgG, lets keep it on the low low, you need a win? just let me know
6/10..filler..flowed rite tho

you from 'philly'? you can get ya 'cheese-take', cause my men are hostile
we quick ta leave ya 'floored' like you was a fuckin 'pentacostal'*
6/10..ehh..

this kid don't really want it, he can get X'd like b'fore n afta name
Torment to Trash, is like Actor to Fame
5/10..kinda weak..

fuck a multi or a meta, ill murder the bitch with word analigies
actually leave his loss count increasin rapidly like BK cop casualties
7-10..best bar so far

I aint washin off sand, but im 'sprayin shells'.."I am the Ghost" n 'you just playin Rell'
cause if he think he can beat me? he must be 'jewish'...cause there's no way in hell**
9-10...dis wuz tha best bar in tha whole battle out of both verses

39/60

torment came hard..gud bars..i seen better from u....but i also seen worse from u...i lyke how u got tha bars short n sweet tho--fukka dat complex holla front shit--u do way better in dis format
ghost..i see dem punchlines is deff elevating..dat last bar wuz crack..but u gotta try2 keep it more consistent all throughout tha battle..try to keep all ur bars on tha same level as dat last bar n u cant go wrong..torment bars jus kept hittin hard tho..ghost is deff tha most elevated text nigga on dis site since i been here
against ne1 else here...ghost woulda killed wit dem bars..

FINAL BREAKDOWN
PUNCHES-TORMENT
PERSONAL-TORMENT..HE HAD THA NAMEPLAY
FLOW-TORMENT
VOTE-TORMENT

sorry for tha 100 page vote but dats jus how i roll nuggga

[Ghost]

2-0 Torment...

looks like I'm desperate for the dickride

[Ghost]

Originally Posted by .GgG.

ghost..i see dem punchlines is deff elevating..dat last bar wuz crack..but u gotta try2 keep it more consistent all throughout tha battle..try to keep all ur bars on tha same level as dat last bar n u cant go wrong..torment bars jus kept hittin hard tho..ghost is deff tha most elevated text nigga on dis site since i been here
against ne1 else here...ghost woulda killed wit dem bars..

thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it

[CyCo34]

Originally Posted by .GgG.

TORMENT
~~~~
..Look tryin to box wit me ?, his fuckin "arms" is like T-rex,
cuz like married-wit-casper, i'll really divorce his name to "Ghost-Ex"..
8/10...nice opener...strong punch

..so ima leave metal-n-ur-center, like uh school trapper-keeper,
or beat/beet-him-to-death/def, like uh fuckin vegetable-reaper..
9/10...2 solid punches--flowed on point..

..cuz nicca u ain't "nice", psfftt got-it-bad like "Usher",
now who u gonna call ?cuz i got da "Ghost"buster..lol
7/10...decent bar

..that female-trash verse, is really Garbage/bitch,
cuz his "Grammer" is poor, so ima cast a "spell"-witch..
8/10..on point

..so ima micro-his-verse, n give it a few extension,
cuz like a blind-landlord, his rhymes is under "SuperVision"..
5/10...ehh it wuz a gud punch...but didnt really rhyme

..Now make beeper-hits, cuz u punchin da wrong paige/page,
n say fucka "DicK' , he uh "Ghost"Rider like Nicolas cage..Eazy
7/10..gud shit

42/60

GHOST
~~~~

this fucks text suck, sumthin like 'sunny side up', NO FLIPPIN
when im 2 above his 0, he'll be desperate for a dick ride like hoes drippin
6/10..ehh

somebody get the 'midol', cause im sick wit a heavy flow
unlike GgG, lets keep it on the low low, you need a win? just let me know
6/10..filler..flowed rite tho

you from 'philly'? you can get ya 'cheese-take', cause my men are hostile
we quick ta leave ya 'floored' like you was a fuckin 'pentacostal'*
6/10..ehh..

this kid don't really want it, he can get X'd like b'fore n afta name
Torment to Trash, is like Actor to Fame
5/10..kinda weak..

fuck a multi or a meta, ill murder the bitch with word analigies
actually leave his loss count increasin rapidly like BK cop casualties
7-10..best bar so far

I aint washin off sand, but im 'sprayin shells'.."I am the Ghost" n 'you just playin Rell'
cause if he think he can beat me? he must be 'jewish'...cause there's no way in hell**
9-10...dis wuz tha best bar in tha whole battle out of both verses

39/60

torment came hard..gud bars..i seen better from u....but i also seen worse from u...i lyke how u got tha bars short n sweet tho--fukka dat complex holla front shit--u do way better in dis format
ghost..i see dem punchlines is deff elevating..dat last bar wuz crack..but u gotta try2 keep it more consistent all throughout tha battle..try to keep all ur bars on tha same level as dat last bar n u cant go wrong..torment bars jus kept hittin hard tho..ghost is deff tha most elevated text nigga on dis site since i been here
against ne1 else here...ghost woulda killed wit dem bars..

FINAL BREAKDOWN
PUNCHES-TORMENT
PERSONAL-TORMENT..HE HAD THA NAMEPLAY
FLOW-TORMENT
VOTE-TORMENT

sorry for tha 100 page vote but dats jus how i roll nuggga

co-sign GgG hit it right on the head....he broke it down just like i saw it....My Vote: Torment....ghood job to both

[The Coldest]

ranked

[South Up]

moved to caaaage history....good battle

[†SaW†]

Aye Good battle Ghost....chea

[Ghost]

yeah this was good