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Ghost · 10-28-2006, 08:52 PM

6 bars
you first
house rules

†SaW† · 10-28-2006, 08:55 PM

aight....no problem....checkin n

†SaW† · 10-28-2006, 09:23 PM

Enuff games....

..Look tryin to box wit me ?, his fuckin "arms" is like T-rex,
cuz like married-wit-casper, i'll really divorce his name to "Ghost-Ex"..
..so ima leave metal-n-ur-center, like uh school trapper-keeper,
or beat/beet-him-to-death/def, like uh fuckin vegetable-reaper..
..cuz nicca u ain't "nice", psfftt got-it-bad like "Usher",
now who u gonna call ?cuz i got da "Ghost"buster..lol
..that female-trash verse, is really Garbage/bitch,
cuz his "Grammer" is poor, so ima cast a "spell"-witch..
..so ima micro-his-verse, n give it a few extension,
cuz like a blind-landlord, his rhymes is under "SuperVision"..
..Now make beeper-hits, cuz u punchin da wrong paige/page,
n say fucka "DicK' , he uh "Ghost"Rider like Nicolas cage..Eazy

Good..Luck

..

Classik · 10-28-2006, 11:05 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by xXTormentXx

Enuff games....

..Look tryin to box wit me ?, his fuckin "arms" is like T-rex,
cuz like married-wit-casper, i'll really divorce his name to "Ghost-Ex"..
..so ima leave metal-n-ur-center, like uh school trapper-keeper,
or beat/beet-him-to-death/def, like uh fuckin vegetable-reaper..
..cuz nicca u ain't "nice", psfftt got-it-bad like "Usher",
now who u gonna call ?cuz i got da "Ghost"buster..lol
..that female-trash verse, is really Garbage/bitch,
cuz his "Grammer" is poor, so ima cast a "spell"-witch..
..so ima micro-his-verse, n give it a few extension,
cuz like a blind-landlord, his rhymes is under "SuperVision"..
..Now make beeper-hits, cuz u punchin da wrong paige/page,
n say fucka "DicK' , he uh "Ghost"Rider like Nicolas cage..Eazy

Good..Luck

..

nice bars but i dont really like how u write it

†SaW† · 10-29-2006, 12:20 AM

well i have many styles to choose from but eh....uppin for his verse

.GgG. · 10-29-2006, 09:54 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by xXTormentXx

Enuff games....

..Look tryin to box wit me ?, his fuckin "arms" is like T-rex,
cuz like married-wit-casper, i'll really divorce his name to "Ghost-Ex"..
..so ima leave metal-n-ur-center, like uh school trapper-keeper,
or beat/beet-him-to-death/def, like uh fuckin vegetable-reaper..
..cuz nicca u ain't "nice", psfftt got-it-bad like "Usher",
now who u gonna call ?cuz i got da "Ghost"buster..lol
..that female-trash verse, is really Garbage/bitch,
cuz his "Grammer" is poor, so ima cast a "spell"-witch..
..so ima micro-his-verse, n give it a few extension,
cuz like a blind-landlord, his rhymes is under "SuperVision"..
..Now make beeper-hits, cuz u punchin da wrong paige/page,
n say fucka "DicK' , he uh "Ghost"Rider like Nicolas cage..Eazy

Good..Luck

..

WATTTTTTT
DATS MY SONNNN....
i taught u well sonn......loll
yayy

Ghost · 10-29-2006, 10:08 AM

this fucks text suck, sumthin like 'sunny side up', NO FLIPPIN
when im 2 above his 0, he'll be desperate for a dick ride like hoes drippin
somebody get the 'midol', cause im sick wit a heavy flow
unlike GgG, lets keep it on the low low, you need a win? just let me know
you from 'philly'? you can get ya 'cheese-take', cause my men are hostile
we quick ta leave ya 'floored' like you was a fuckin 'pentacostal'*
this kid don't really want it, he can get X'd like b'fore n afta name
Torment to Trash, is like Actor to Fame
fuck a multi or a meta, ill murder the bitch with word analigies
actually leave his loss count increasin rapidly like BK cop casualties
I aint washin off sand, but im 'sprayin shells'.."I am the Ghost" n 'you just playin Rell'
cause if he think he can beat me? he must be 'jewish'...cause there's no way in hell**

~~~~~~~
* Pentacostal, is a religion where the pastor prays for you, and you fall on the floor from the 'Holy Spirit'
** Jews don't believe in hell
~~~~~~~

South Up · 10-29-2006, 10:24 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by xXTormentXx

..Look tryin to box wit me ?, his fuckin "arms" is like T-rex,
cuz like married-wit-casper, i'll really divorce his name to "Ghost-Ex"..
hot opener, but tha punch been used too much
..so ima leave metal-n-ur-center, like uh school trapper-keeper,
or beat/beet-him-to-death/def, like uh fuckin vegetable-reaper..
nice setup, tha punch was kinda soft tho
..cuz nicca u ain't "nice", psfftt got-it-bad like "Usher",
now who u gonna call ?cuz i got da "Ghost"buster..lol
it wasnt hard but it made me laugh, so good one
..that female-trash verse, is really Garbage/bitch,
cuz his "Grammer" is poor, so ima cast a "spell"-witch..
haha this shit was nice
..so ima micro-his-verse, n give it a few extension,
cuz like a blind-landlord, his rhymes is under "SuperVision"..
another crack bar
..Now make beeper-hits, cuz u punchin da wrong paige/page,
n say fucka "DicK' , he uh "Ghost"Rider like Nicolas cage..Eazy
closer was craaazy

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ghost-Ex

this fucks text suck, sumthin like 'sunny side up', NO FLIPPIN
when im 2 above his 0, he'll be desperate for a dick ride like hoes drippin
good opener but tha 2nd line went on too long so it threw it off
somebody get the 'midol', cause im sick wit a heavy flow
unlike GgG, lets keep it on the low low, you need a win? just let me know
this was decent, nothin special but good enough
you from 'philly'? you can get ya 'cheese-take', cause my men are hostile
we quick ta leave ya 'floored' like you was a fuckin 'pentacostal'*
nice shit on this one, even tho its a stretch for pentacostal and hostile to rhyme
this kid don't really want it, he can get X'd like b'fore n afta name
Torment to Trash, is like Actor to Fame
simple, but good
fuck a multi or a meta, ill murder the bitch with word analigies
actually leave his loss count increasin rapidly like BK cop casualties
good bar, 2nd line coulda been worded better tho
I aint washin off sand, but im 'sprayin shells'.."I am the Ghost" n 'you just playin Rell'
cause if he think he can beat me? he must be 'jewish'...cause there's no way in hell**
you shoulda just split tha first line up into a full bar, since tha closer was aight but it woulda been way better wit tha ghost/rell to finish it

so basically there was a few misses on each drop, but torment got this based on his punches bein on another level when they did come rite...his closer was what got tha vote in my eyes..

so my vote: xxtormentxx

Ghost · 10-29-2006, 10:27 AM

^ thanks for voting..

just to let you know, I didnt stretch the rhyme..check it out

men-are-hostile
pentacostal

its perfect providing you dont read are like a white fuck lol

South Up · 10-29-2006, 10:28 AM

^^ hahaha naw im meanin tha "stile" and "stal"..i know what you was tryin to do i just threw that in since it took me a 2nd read to get it...

10-28-2006, 08:52 PM	#1 (permalink)
Ghost RGF's Phantom... Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: *********************** This Years Record 163/20/112 *********************** Posts: 7,118	Torment \|vs.\| Ghost-Ex 6 bars you first house rules __________________

10-28-2006, 08:55 PM	#2 (permalink)
†SaW† Capo Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Woodland Ave.....Body Count Posts: 887	aight....no problem....checkin n __________________ Abstract-is-Creativity..

10-28-2006, 09:23 PM	#3 (permalink)
†SaW† Capo Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Woodland Ave.....Body Count Posts: 887	Enuff games.... ..Look tryin to box wit me ?, his fuckin "arms" is like T-rex, cuz like married-wit-casper, i'll really divorce his name to "Ghost-Ex".. ..so ima leave metal-n-ur-center, like uh school trapper-keeper, or beat/beet-him-to-death/def, like uh fuckin vegetable-reaper.. ..cuz nicca u ain't "nice", psfftt got-it-bad like "Usher", now who u gonna call ?cuz i got da "Ghost"buster..lol ..that female-trash verse, is really Garbage/bitch, cuz his "Grammer" is poor, so ima cast a "spell"-witch.. ..so ima micro-his-verse, n give it a few extension, cuz like a blind-landlord, his rhymes is under "SuperVision".. ..Now make beeper-hits, cuz u punchin da wrong paige/page, n say fucka "DicK' , he uh "Ghost"Rider like Nicolas cage..Eazy Good..Luck .. __________________ Abstract-is-Creativity..

10-29-2006, 12:20 AM	#5 (permalink)
†SaW† Capo Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Woodland Ave.....Body Count Posts: 887	well i have many styles to choose from but eh....uppin for his verse __________________ Abstract-is-Creativity..

10-29-2006, 10:08 AM	#7 (permalink)
Ghost RGF's Phantom... Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: *********************** This Years Record 163/20/112 *********************** Posts: 7,118	this fucks text suck, sumthin like 'sunny side up', NO FLIPPIN when im 2 above his 0, he'll be desperate for a dick ride like hoes drippin somebody get the 'midol', cause im sick wit a heavy flow unlike GgG, lets keep it on the low low, you need a win? just let me know you from 'philly'? you can get ya 'cheese-take', cause my men are hostile we quick ta leave ya 'floored' like you was a fuckin 'pentacostal'* this kid don't really want it, he can get X'd like b'fore n afta name Torment to Trash, is like Actor to Fame fuck a multi or a meta, ill murder the bitch with word analigies actually leave his loss count increasin rapidly like BK cop casualties I aint washin off sand, but im 'sprayin shells'.."I am the Ghost" n 'you just playin Rell' cause if he think he can beat me? he must be 'jewish'...cause there's no way in hell** ~~~~~~~ * Pentacostal, is a religion where the pastor prays for you, and you fall on the floor from the 'Holy Spirit' ** Jews don't believe in hell ~~~~~~~ __________________

10-29-2006, 10:27 AM	#9 (permalink)
Ghost RGF's Phantom... Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: *********************** This Years Record 163/20/112 *********************** Posts: 7,118	^ thanks for voting.. just to let you know, I didnt stretch the rhyme..check it out men-are-hostile pentacostal its perfect providing you dont read are like a white fuck lol __________________

10-29-2006, 10:28 AM	#10 (permalink)
South Up Banned Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: The Struggle Posts: 21,092	^^ hahaha naw im meanin tha "stile" and "stal"..i know what you was tryin to do i just threw that in since it took me a 2nd read to get it...

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